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by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 06, 2010, 05:00:41 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 07, 2010, 09:11:57 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rahesh ji....!!!

Wah! kya baat hai ANU
Aap aur Kapil ne to mehfil mein chaar chaand laga diya

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«Reply #16 on: December 07, 2010, 09:18:32 AM »
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milan dilon ka ho hi chuka hai to kya bataayen hum,
doorie jismon ki hai bas ye khudko samjhaayen hum,
sahi nahi jaati ab to ye doorie kuch pal ki bhi,
ab to tere hone ke ehsaas se hi akele muskuraaye hum...
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«Reply #17 on: December 07, 2010, 09:24:44 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji.. aur aapne kuch chuninda panktiyon ko ek jagah jod ke hamaari rachnaaon ki sundarta ko aur badha diya .. main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!! aur hamaari kavitaayen aapke dil ko chhoo gayi isse jyaada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai hamaare liye.... shukriya ji...!!!


Bahut khoob mehfil jamayi hai kasak ji aur kapil ji..aesa lag raha hai ki merre dil ki baate aap apne lafzo k zariye keh rahe hai,yu tou apka har alfaz bemol hai per ye kuch khaas sher aur lines hai jo sabse zyada merre dil ko chhu gayi..bahut khoob ji...take care...

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«Reply #18 on: December 07, 2010, 09:25:30 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Mann ji...!!!

Oye Hoye.. Kya baat hai.. Kya mohabbat Bhari Mehfil Sajaai Hai Aap Sab Ne.. Bahut Hi Khoooooooob Anamika Ji.. Kuch to Yeh Topic hi Bahut Dilkash Hai.. aur Kuch Aapke Ehasaason Ne In Alfaazon Ko Behad Rumaani Bana diya hai.. Applause Applause


Kapil Bhai & Geet Ji.. Aapne bhi Bahut Khoob Likha Hai..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #19 on: December 07, 2010, 11:35:18 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji.. aur aapne kuch chuninda panktiyon ko ek jagah jod ke hamaari rachnaaon ki sundarta ko aur badha diya .. main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon...!!! aur hamaari kavitaayen aapke dil ko chhoo gayi isse jyaada khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai hamaare liye.... shukriya ji...!!!



Shukriya kapil ji...aap aur kasak ji jo deserve karte hai main wahi kaha hai...keep writing...take care..Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: April 29, 2011, 11:50:11 PM »
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Thanks again hai ji...!!!


Shukriya kapil ji...aap aur kasak ji jo deserve karte hai main wahi kaha hai...keep writing...take care..Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: July 31, 2011, 05:04:31 PM »
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Mujhe Tere In Labon Ki Mithaas Se Mohabbat Hai,
Kamsin Baahon Ki Teri Garmaaish Se Mohabbat Hai....

Tujhe Chhoone Ki Chaahat Mein Jo Jalti Rahati Hai,
Us Seene Ki Tadapti Har Dharkan Se Mohabbat Hai...!!!!




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«Reply #22 on: July 31, 2011, 05:10:04 PM »
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wahhhhhh kya baat hai Mann ji kya mast likha hai....

mahobbat hai mujhe teri inn garm saanson se
jo mere gaalon ko chhuke mujhe sehla jaati hai
mahobbat hai mujhe teri unss kaatil nigaah se
jo ek nazar dekhti hai aur mom sa pighla deti hai...!!1
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«Reply #23 on: July 31, 2011, 05:14:58 PM »
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gud 1 dost .

Na jana in garm saanson par yeh teri saanson ko jalaa dengi .

Na jana in qatil nigahon par ek din tuje dekhkar nazrein chura lengi
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«Reply #24 on: July 31, 2011, 05:18:14 PM »
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Aaye Haaye Anamika Ji.. mohabbat Har taraf Bikhra di aapne To.. Applause Applause



Sabra-o-Qaraar Cheen Liya Sanam, Teri Ek Nigaah Ne,
Tune Ishq Kuch Aise Milaaya Mohabbat Bhare Jaam Me...

Hum Ladkhadaate Rahe Aur Bahakte Rahe Is Nashe Me,
Pahali Baar Maza Aaya Yaaron, Khud Ke Qatl-e-Aam Me.....!!!!




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«Reply #25 on: July 31, 2011, 05:28:28 PM »
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gud 1 dost .

Na jana in garm saanson par yeh teri saanson ko jalaa dengi .

Na jana in qatil nigahon par ek din tuje dekhkar nazrein chura lengi

mast reply saahil...
sahi samjha hai tune aaj bhiwaqt hai sambhalja
ek baar behka to na jee payega na hi maut aayegi,,,!!1
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«Reply #26 on: July 31, 2011, 05:32:40 PM »
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Mann ji yun likhenge aap to khumari ka rang chadh jana hai mujhpe fir se....

unhe dekha ek nazar aur palkein jhuk gai
meri iss adaa pe yaron unki dhadkan thum gai

muskuraye kye palkein uthake unki taraf dekh ke
unke hathon se fir unki zindagi ki dorr chhut gai...!!!
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«Reply #27 on: July 31, 2011, 05:42:20 PM »
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mast reply saahil...
sahi samjha hai tune aaj bhiwaqt hai sambhalja
ek baar behka to na jee payega na hi maut aayegi,,,!!1

jeene ki tamana nahi phir bhi jeena chahta hoon .

Akhri saans lene se pehle jindagi lene wale ko dekhna chahta hoon
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«Reply #28 on: July 31, 2011, 05:51:47 PM »
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Mann ji yun likhenge aap to khumari ka rang chadh jana hai mujhpe fir se....

unhe dekha ek nazar aur palkein jhuk gai
meri iss adaa pe yaron unki dhadkan thum gai

muskuraye kye palkein uthake unki taraf dekh ke
unke hathon se fir unki zindagi ki dorr chhut gai...!!!


Wah Kya Baat hai Anamika Ji.. Mohabbat Bhare Baadal Barasane ko Majboor ho jayenge aapke aise Alfaaz Padh Ke.. Applause Applause Applause



Udhar Nazar Ka Jhukna Hua, Idhar Humaara Lutna Hua,
Yeh Kaunsi Ada Hai Jo Mujhe Bas Bahakaaye Ja Rahi Hai....

Main Jitna Door Ja Raha Hoon Teri In Zulfon Ki Qaid Se,
Tere Labon Ki Surkhi Utna Hi Tere Qareeb Bula Rahi Hai....!!





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«Reply #29 on: August 02, 2011, 03:04:15 PM »
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Ohh Anamikaji aap tou aaj fir khumaar k rang mai rang gayee hain ji.......Aapne tou jaadoo kar diya hai ess mehfil me.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love9 love9 love9 Applause Applause Applause love4 love4 love4 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Lijiye ye shabd ab ruk nahi rahe hain ji.......

Deewane hain hum teri in garam saason kay
Jo chhu kar sehlaa jaati hain mere Gaalon ko

Ishq hai hume teri in katil neegaahon se so daude chale aate hain
Parwaane ban jab phad-phadaate hain hum tere ird-gird
Apne pankhon ki hawaa se tujhko ay Shamaa Pighlaa dete hain
Wo aur baat hai ki tere badan ki garmi me khud ko jalaa lete hain






mahobbat hai mujhe teri inn garm saanson se
jo mere gaalon ko chhuke mujhe sehla jaati hai
mahobbat hai mujhe teri unss kaatil nigaah se
jo ek nazar dekhti hai aur mom sa pighla deti hai...!!1

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