<>* Tere llub jab milte hain*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 06, 2010, 05:00:41 AM
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<>* Tere llub jab milte hain*<>

labon ko chhukar mere ashk
jab milte hain tere labon se...
ye jannat sa jahan teri
panahon me paa jate hain......

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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2010, 05:02:45 AM »
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mastammm hai ji... aapne fir se humse likhwaa hi diya .. galat aadat hai ji apki ye....

ye lab tere bheege hue se kya qahar dhaate hain,
hum bas tujhe dekh k hi bemaut mar jaate hain,
chaahte hain khud ko sambhaale hum, roke khud ko,
par har baar hum is dil k haathon majboor o jaate hain,

kehte hain khud ko ye pyaar nahi kuch pal ka saath hai,
par har baar jaane kyun teri or khinche chale aate hain,
chhoone ko hum tere honthon ki narmi apne hothon se,
har har baar tujhse duur jaate jaate thahar jaate hain,

hum ye nahi kehte ki mohabbat buri cheez hoti hai,
par hum apne dil k fir se tut jaane se ghabraate hain,
yakeen hain tujhpe humein, teri mohabbat pe bhi,
aur hum dheere dheere tere aur kareeb aa jaate hain...
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2010, 05:08:53 AM »
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ab aapko fir se form me laane k liye kuch to hume likhna hi padega na ji.......wrna kaise chalega.... tongue3
aur dekho kya mast mast likh gayi aapki jung se nikalti kalam...
ab nahin kehna jung lagi kalam...warnaaaaaa.......
bht hi dilkash likha hai aapne kapil .....
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

dar dar k mahobbat ki to kya mahobbat ki
ghut ghut k saans li to kya zindagi ji
kuch pal ka sath mila hai kismat se hume
jii lo sang hamare ye pal aur paa lo har ek khushi......
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2010, 05:27:46 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob likha hai aapne. ye to aapki nazar ka kamaal hai ki meri likhi koi bhi rachna ki aap itni taarif kar deti hain ki uski khoobsurti khud ba khud badh jaati hai... batao bhala isme meri kya galti...



ab to tumse milke meri khushi ka thikaana na raha,
duur jaana chaahte the tumse par jaane ka kaaran na raha,
laut laut k aa jaate hain hum tumhaare baahon me har baar,
ki ab tumhaari mohabbat ko mitaana dil se itna asaaan na raha...
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2010, 05:33:15 AM »
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ab tum likhta hi itna achch aho k mujhe pasand aajaye to isme meri kya galti...
aur pasnd aayega to tumko chane k jhaad pe to chadhana hi padega na mujhe tongue3
 Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle

ab aagaye ho tum fir paas mere to
ab fir mujhse durr na jana o jaana
nahin jii sakte bin tumhare ek pal bhi
mushkil hai tumbin hamara muskurana
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«Reply #5 on: December 06, 2010, 05:38:26 AM »
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main apne hothon ki muskaan tere hothon pe saja dunga,
tujhe apne mohabbat ke nashe se main paagal kar dunga,
bhoolegi nahi kabhi tu,  main tujhe itna pyaar dunga,
banaake tujhe main apni dulhan apne ghar ko sajaa lunga...
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«Reply #6 on: December 06, 2010, 05:42:42 AM »
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tere ghar aangan ko main khushiyon se bhar dungi
lamha lamha jee k teri zindagi sanwaar dungi
na juda ho payega tu mujhse sanam ek pal bhi
main tujhe itna khubsurat ghar sansaar dungi...
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«Reply #7 on: December 06, 2010, 06:18:26 AM »
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kamaal hai...
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«Reply #8 on: December 06, 2010, 06:22:24 AM »
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kya karoge itni khushiyan samet kar akele
bahut hi chotti si hai ye duniya
       baat de kuch khusiyan auron me
       janaab fir dekhiye kaise sawarti hai humari ye choti si duniya:)Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: December 06, 2010, 06:45:34 AM »
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bas isi ummeed me to hum aaj bhi teri raah takte rehte hain,
ki aayegi tu ek din meri duniya sajaane hum ye kehte hain,
tu hi to meri zindagi hai, meri har muskaan ka karan hai tu,
hum tere liye hi teri mohabbt me tadapte rehte hain....

tere ghar aangan ko main khushiyon se bhar dungi
lamha lamha jee k teri zindagi sanwaar dungi
na juda ho payega tu mujhse sanam ek pal bhi
main tujhe itna khubsurat ghar sansaar dungi...
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«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2010, 07:42:42 AM »
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Wah! kya baat hai ANU
Aap aur Kapil ne to mehfil mein chaar chaand laga diya
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«Reply #11 on: December 06, 2010, 08:15:08 AM »
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na tadpo ab tum yun aur meri judaai me
k bajne lagi hai aangan me mere shehnai ve
bas kuch din ki hi doorie hai ab hum dono me
ho hi gai hai ab tere mere dil ki sagaai ve
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«Reply #12 on: December 06, 2010, 11:57:37 AM »
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kehte hain khud ko ye pyaar nahi kuch pal ka saath hai,
par har baar jaane kyun teri or khinche chale aate hain,
hum ye nahi kehte ki mohabbat buri cheez hoti hai,
par hum apne dil k fir se tut jaane se ghabraate hain,
yakeen hain tujhpe humein, teri mohabbat pe bhi,
aur hum dheere dheere tere aur kareeb aa jaate hain...


dar dar k mahobbat ki to kya mahobbat ki
ghut ghut k saans li to kya zindagi ji
kuch pal ka sath mila hai kismat se hume
jii lo sang hamare ye pal aur paa lo har ek khushi......


hum tere liye hi teri mohabbt me tadapte rehte hain....

ho hi gai hai ab tere mere dil ki sagaai ve..

Bahut khoob mehfil jamayi hai kasak ji aur kapil ji..aesa lag raha hai ki merre dil ki baate aap apne lafzo k zariye keh rahe hai,yu tou apka har alfaz bemol hai per ye kuch khaas sher aur lines hai jo sabse zyada merre dil ko chhu gayi..bahut khoob ji...take care...
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«Reply #13 on: December 06, 2010, 12:59:20 PM »
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Oye Hoye.. Kya baat hai.. Kya mohabbat Bhari Mehfil Sajaai Hai Aap Sab Ne.. Bahut Hi Khoooooooob Anamika Ji.. Kuch to Yeh Topic hi Bahut Dilkash Hai.. aur Kuch Aapke Ehasaason Ne In Alfaazon Ko Behad Rumaani Bana diya hai.. Applause Applause


Kapil Bhai & Geet Ji.. Aapne bhi Bahut Khoob Likha Hai..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #14 on: December 06, 2010, 06:56:51 PM »
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No comments and no disturbance... chalne do ye silsila waise hi bahut rangeen hai ye...

Intezar !
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