tere sang zindgi beetane ki........soudagar

by soudagar on July 22, 2012, 03:59:06 AM
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tujhe chahna aur chahte rehna maine apni aadat bana li hai
tere sang zindgi beetane ki khawahish dil mein jagaa li hai

chahe tum pass ho ya dur ho, tumharaa deedar ho jata hai mujhko
maine ek najar dekh tumhe teri surat apni aakhon mein basa li hai

bahut sukun deta hai aakar tera meri bahon mein simatnaa
qahr dhata hai jhukakar palkein uthana tera, teri har ada nirali hai

gulab ki pankhuriyon se bhi jyada komal honth hai tumhare
hothon se hothon ko chh de to lage jaan nikalne wali hai

teri zulfein jaise kali ghata, tera chehra khilta gulab sa
jab zulfein tu lehrati hai, lagta hai kali ghata barsane wali hai

tum mere hote gaye to mera har ek khawab  bhi sach hota gaya
meri zindgi mein aate hi tumhare, laga kismat badalne wali hai.
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2012, 05:05:09 AM »
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waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2012, 06:19:38 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2012, 08:15:00 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2012, 10:59:58 AM »
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wah wah soudagar ji Bahut Acche Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2012, 12:18:53 PM »
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Bahut bahut shkriya saini sir
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2012, 12:21:30 PM »
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tujhe chahna aur chahte rehna maine apni aadat bana li hai
tere sang zindgi beetane ki khawahish dil mein jagaa li hai

chahe tum pass ho ya dur ho, tumharaa deedar ho jata hai mujhko
maine ek najar dekh tumhe teri surat apni aakhon mein basa li hai

bahut sukun deta hai aakar tera meri bahon mein simatnaa
qahr dhata hai jhukakar palkein uthana tera, teri har ada nirali hai

gulab ki pankhuriyon se bhi jyada komal honth hai tumhare
hothon se hothon ko chh de to lage jaan nikalne wali hai

teri zulfein jaise kali ghata, tera chehra khilta gulab sa
jab zulfein tu lehrati hai, lagta hai kali ghata barsane wali hai

tum mere hote gaye to mera har ek khawab  bhi sach hota gaya
meri zindgi mein aate hi tumhare, laga kismat badalne wali hai.


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«Reply #7 on: July 22, 2012, 05:09:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji.........
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«Reply #8 on: July 23, 2012, 06:25:37 AM »
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Bahut shukriya jazabaat ji...
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«Reply #9 on: July 23, 2012, 03:01:18 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob ,... bahut sundar likha hai Soudagar ji...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 23, 2012, 05:38:44 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sanjeev ji...
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bahut b ahut shukriya suman aunty ji......
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2012, 04:47:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya hriday ji.... dil se shukriya ada karta hoon
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