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teri awaz mere veerano ko mehka jaati hai
jhanakati hai mere ander tak aur meri rooh ko chhoo jati hai
teri awaz ek roshni ki kiran hai mere liye
meri zindagi ko yeh raat raani sa meheka jaati hai
jaadui baansuari si bajati teri yeh awaz
mujhe jaise saat suro.n si sunai deti hain
mera dil dub sa jaata hai jaise ismein samander ki gaharaayi sa
teri awaz mere dil mein kai hasarate si jaga deti hai
pyaar ki tarango mein jhumane lagta hai mera mann
teri awaz shankh si gunjati hui mere antarmann ko hila deti hai
ek sakoon paa leta hai mera dil jaise
teri awaz mujeh mere khuda se mila deti hai!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2006, 05:55:04 AM » |
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very nice ranju......
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Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2006, 05:56:10 AM » |
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kya baata hai .. :D
abhi main bhi aaye ... tere aawaz ka jadoo le ke.
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vikas2210
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«Reply #3 on: July 26, 2006, 06:00:27 AM » |
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pehle pehal jab mile tumse
koi ehsas to na tha.....
bas ek kasak thi milne ki
man mai koi ehsahs to nai tha
phir milna aur mil ke uda hona laga raha
koi ehsas dil mai aane laga
par kaya that wo
mujhe pata nahi tha.....
aaj sadiya beet gai mile tumse
ehsas jo tab jaga tha
dil main baki uska nishan raha
kaya ban gai tum meri mujhko pata nahi
bas tere bin zindgi kitni maus ho rahi
sahayad tujhko pata nahi tha......
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Tosha
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«Reply #4 on: July 26, 2006, 06:03:10 AM » |
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Teri aawaz geet hai meri kushi ka
jisse sun ke in labo pe muskan aatati hai
teri aawaz marham hai meri nasur se kal ka
jiske dil se chute he methas se chaa jati hai
teri aawaz wo dhun hai hamari mahobbat ka
jisse aate hi mere dil ki tarange tan aati hai
teri aawaz milta hai hausla zindgi jeene ka
jiske bin yeh zindgi aur meri mohabbet virani hai
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Tosha
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«Reply #5 on: July 26, 2006, 06:04:09 AM » |
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Vikas ji good!!! bahut accha likha hai aap ne ... lakin aap hamesha mujh se pahele q pahuch jaate ho  |
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2006, 06:09:31 AM » |
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aaj kal chela guru se pehle ..... :lol:
waise bahut accha likha hai Tosha Ji and thanks bhi hai aapko pasand karne ke liye.......
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2006, 06:12:23 AM » |
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aawaz teri mai aaj jo madmast nasha hai
kaya phir bahaya neer aankho ne teri hai
shayad tune kal raat apne aansuo ko piya hai
kasam se ashk nahi madhushala ki mai hai.
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2006, 06:22:20 AM » |
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kya baat kahi!!!
yeh jo dil se samajhte ho mere aayaz ko
tumse koi raaz-e-gum na chupa sakun
kasak se thi dil main milne ki tumse
ke apni mohabbet ka haal tumko suna sakun
tikha uns hua mere dil main, bhari hue saasen
bhar aaye naina aur barasne se inhe kaise rokun
pe liya teri mohabbet ke khatir sara zaher humne
umeed hai aaj tumse haal-e-dil aapna bayan ker sakun
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ranjana
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2006, 06:26:28 AM » |
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wah too good VIKAS AND TOSHA bahut khoob ..wonderful ...
woh ek awaz jo mujhe meri duniya se ek anokhi duniya mein le jaati hai
woh awaz mere kai rango aur kai khawabo mein dhal jaati hai
mil jata hai mere zakhmo ko ek sakun sa koi uski awaz se
woh awaz mujhe meri tasvur mein basi hui janat se mila jaati hai
ek nasha sa bhar deti hai woh awaz uski nashli si
ek khumar sa mere dil mein bhar ke chali jaati hai
log peete honge jaam paimaane se aksar
par mujhe uski awaz hi madhosh sa bana jaati hai
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«Reply #10 on: July 26, 2006, 06:47:07 AM » |
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good one ranjana and thanks for liking mine.......
teri aawaz se banai teri ek
tasveer jhehan mai maine
mila to laga kitna galat tha mai
apni aawaz se bhi payari surat teri
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: July 26, 2006, 06:57:57 AM » |
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good one ranjana and thanks for liking mine.......
teri aawaz se banai teri ek
tasveer jhehan mai maine
mila to laga kitna galat tha mai
apni aawaz se bhi payari surat teri wah kya baat hai....bahut khoob.... jab bhi uski awaz ne mujhe sada di hai mere sanaato mein ek aag si laga di hai dil tadap utatha hai mere milne ke liye unse ek unbujhi si payaas us awaz ne mere dil mein laga di hai!!!!!!! |
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«Reply #12 on: July 26, 2006, 06:59:32 AM » |
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thanx ranji ji ... and vikas ji ... lage raho !! :D
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ranjana
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«Reply #13 on: July 26, 2006, 07:02:06 AM » |
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thanx ranji ji ... and vikas ji ... lage raho !! :D aur aap kahan chali dear :D ...accha bhala likh rahi thee... :D awaz ka jaadu khatam ho gaya kya tosha jaan... :wink: :D |
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«Reply #14 on: July 26, 2006, 07:07:38 AM » |
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thanx ranji ji ... and vikas ji ... lage raho !! :D tosha ji kahan chali gai......... chale aaiye aap bhi kuch likh jaiye....... |
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