Teri Muskurahat Hi Meri Ghazal Ka Inaam Ho Jaaye "Khwahish"

by khwaish on March 02, 2013, 09:01:52 PM
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Main Ne Khud Ko "Main" Kehna Chodd Diya..!!!!
Jab Se Usne kahaa Tum "Mere" Ho....!!!!!!!!



Aaj Phir Koi Ghazal Tere Naam Ho jaaye
Tu Hi Meri Subah, Meri Shaam Ho Jaaye

Tujhse Kya Rishta Hai Mera,Naa Jaanu Main
Par Tu Hukum To Kar,Dil Tera Gulaam Ho Jaaye

Do Pal ka Milna Bhi Koi Milna hai Huzoor
Haami To Bharo,Milne Ka Intezaam Ho Jaaye

Teri AankhoN MeN Doob Jaane Ko jee Karta Hai
Kabhi Aankhon Se Pilaao,Aisa Bhi Koi Jaam Ho Jaaye

Main Ghazal Kahoon Aur Tum Mukarar Mukarar Kaho
Teri Muskurahat Hi Meri Ghazal ka Inaam Ho Jaaye

Tere Husn Ki Tareef Karun To Waqt Tham  jaaye..!!
Teri Khubsurti Ke Aage Mera Har Lafz Nilaam Ho jaaye

"Khwahish" Sach kehta Hai Bahuttttt Haseen Ho Tum..!!!
Zara Sa Sharma Jaao To Bechare Dil Ko Aaraam Ho jaaye


      ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2013, 09:03:37 PM »
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waahhhhh khwaish ji kya khuub roomani gazal kahi hai aapne har ashaar me mahobbat ka rang chhalakta hai wahahhhh
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2013, 09:08:47 PM »
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Main Ne Khud Ko "Main" Kehna Chodd Diya..!!!!
Jab Se Usne kahaa Tum "Mere" Ho....!!!!!!!!


Opening Sher Se Hi Maar Daala Aapne!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aaj Phir Koi Ghazal Tere Naam Ho jaaye
Tu Hi Meri Subah, Meri Shaam Ho Jaaye

Bohat Khub!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tujhse Kya Rishta Hai Mera,Naa Jaanu Main
Par Tu Hukum To Kar,Dil Tera Gulaam Ho Jaaye

Wah Wah!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Do Pal ka Milna Bhi Koi Milna hai Huzoor
Haami To Bharo,Milne Ka Intezaam Ho Jaaye

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Teri AankhoN MeN Doob Jaane Ko jee Karta Hai
Kabhi Aankhon Se Pilaao,Aisa Bhi Koi Jaam Ho Jaaye

Wah!!! Badiya!!! Sun-ne Wali Behosh Ho Jaayegi!!

Main Ghazal Kahoon Aur Tum Mukarar Mukarar Kaho
Teri Muskurahat Hi Meri Ghazal ka Inaam Ho Jaaye

Hai Allah!!! Sharm Se Mar Na Jaaye Woh!!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tere Husn Ki Tareef Karun To Waqt Tham  jaaye..!!
Teri Khubsurti Ke Aage Mera Har Lafz Nilaam Ho jaaye

Bohat Khub!!  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

"Khwahish" Sach kehta Hai Bahuttttt Haseen Ho Tum..!!!
Zara Sa Sharma Jaao To Bechare Dil Ko Aaraam Ho jaaye

Wah Wah Wah!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

      ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~


Wah Wah Khwaish Jee!!!! Very Beautiful And Romantic Ghazal!!!! Very Niceeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!


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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2013, 10:44:34 PM »
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Main Ne Khud Ko "Main" Kehna Chodd Diya..!!!!
Jab Se Unse kahaa Tum "Mere" Ho....!!!!!!!!

Aaj Phir Koi Ghazal Tere Naam Ho jaaye
Tu Hi Meri Subah, Meri Shaam Ho Jaaye

Tujhse Kya Rishta Hai Mera,Naa Jaanu Main
Par Tu Hukum To Kar,Dil Tera Gulaam Ho Jaaye

Bahut dilkash..
bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam
maqte ki khaas taur par taareef karna chahunga..


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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2013, 10:47:38 PM »
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sir likha to bohot khubsoorat hai

par bura na lage to 1 shikayat karun ??

"MAINE"  khud ko "MAI" kehna chod dia ...

par aapne MIAN to keh he dia tongue3

sayri mukamal na ho payi


maff kijiyega agar bura laga to   hello2  drunken_smilie
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sir likha to bohot khubsoorat hai

par bura na lage to 1 shikayat karun ??

"MAINE"  khud ko "MAI" kehna chod dia ...

par aapne MIAN to keh he dia tongue3

sayri mukamal na ho payi


maff kijiyega agar bura laga to   hello2  drunken_smilie


Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roy Ji..

par Main Muaafi Chahunga, Aap uss Sher Ki Nazaakat Ko Naa Samaj Sake...

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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2013, 11:09:55 PM »
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waahhhhh khwaish ji kya khuub roomani gazal kahi hai aapne har ashaar me mahobbat ka rang chhalakta hai wahahhhh


Thanks a Lottttt Aahnaa Ji..Thankyou Soooooo Much For Appreciating... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2013, 11:20:53 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2013, 11:43:58 PM »
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Main Ne Khud Ko "Main" Kehna Chodd Diya..!!!!
Jab Se Usne kahaa Tum "Mere" Ho....!!!!!!!!



Aaj Phir Koi Ghazal Tere Naam Ho jaaye
Tu Hi Meri Subah, Meri Shaam Ho Jaaye

Tujhse Kya Rishta Hai Mera,Naa Jaanu Main
Par Tu Hukum To Kar,Dil Tera Gulaam Ho Jaaye

Do Pal ka Milna Bhi Koi Milna hai Huzoor
Haami To Bharo,Milne Ka Intezaam Ho Jaaye

Teri AankhoN MeN Doob Jaane Ko jee Karta Hai
Kabhi Aankhon Se Pilaao,Aisa Bhi Koi Jaam Ho Jaaye

Main Ghazal Kahoon Aur Tum Mukarar Mukarar Kaho
Teri Muskurahat Hi Meri Ghazal ka Inaam Ho Jaaye

Tere Husn Ki Tareef Karun To Waqt Tham  jaaye..!!
Teri Khubsurti Ke Aage Mera Har Lafz Nilaam Ho jaaye

"Khwahish" Sach kehta Hai Bahuttttt Haseen Ho Tum..!!!
Zara Sa Sharma Jaao To Bechare Dil Ko Aaraam Ho jaaye


      ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~


good composition,sir
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«Reply #9 on: March 03, 2013, 03:47:59 AM »
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Main Ne Khud Ko "Main" Kehna Chodd Diya..!!!!
Jab Se Usne kahaa Tum "Mere" Ho....!!!!!!!!


Waah kyaa kehne Khwaish ji... mazaa aa gayaaa...!!!

Aaj Phir Koi Ghazal Tere Naam Ho jaaye
Tu Hi Meri Subah, Meri Shaam Ho Jaaye

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tujhse Kya Rishta Hai Mera,Naa Jaanu Main
Par Tu Hukum To Kar,Dil Tera Gulaam Ho Jaaye

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Do Pal ka Milna Bhi Koi Milna hai Huzoor
Haami To Bharo,Milne Ka Intezaam Ho Jaaye

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Teri AankhoN MeN Doob Jaane Ko jee Karta Hai
Kabhi Aankhon Se Pilaao,Aisa Bhi Koi Jaam Ho Jaaye

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Main Ghazal Kahoon Aur Tum Mukarar Mukarar Kaho
Teri Muskurahat Hi Meri Ghazal ka Inaam Ho Jaaye

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause waah waah waah

Tere Husn Ki Tareef Karun To Waqt Tham  jaaye..!!
Teri Khubsurti Ke Aage Mera Har Lafz Nilaam Ho jaaye

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley waah kyaa kehne...Usual Smile

"Khwahish" Sach kehta Hai Bahuttttt Haseen Ho Tum..!!!
Zara Sa Sharma Jaao To Bechare Dil Ko Aaraam Ho jaaye

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!


      ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~



waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Khwaish ji.. mazaa aa gaya apadh ke.. ek se badh kar ek sher hain... kiski taarif karun.. kise chhodun... ek dum masssttt likha hai aapne.... !!!

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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2013, 09:04:45 AM »
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Main Ne Khud Ko "Main" Kehna Chodd Diya..!!!!
Jab Se Usne kahaa Tum "Mere" Ho....!!!!!!!!



Aaj Phir Koi Ghazal Tere Naam Ho jaaye
Tu Hi Meri Subah, Meri Shaam Ho Jaaye

Tujhse Kya Rishta Hai Mera,Naa Jaanu Main
Par Tu Hukum To Kar,Dil Tera Gulaam Ho Jaaye

Do Pal ka Milna Bhi Koi Milna hai Huzoor
Haami To Bharo,Milne Ka Intezaam Ho Jaaye

Teri AankhoN MeN Doob Jaane Ko jee Karta Hai
Kabhi Aankhon Se Pilaao,Aisa Bhi Koi Jaam Ho Jaaye

Main Ghazal Kahoon Aur Tum Mukarar Mukarar Kaho
Teri Muskurahat Hi Meri Ghazal ka Inaam Ho Jaaye

Tere Husn Ki Tareef Karun To Waqt Tham  jaaye..!!
Teri Khubsurti Ke Aage Mera Har Lafz Nilaam Ho jaaye

"Khwahish" Sach kehta Hai Bahuttttt Haseen Ho Tum..!!!
Zara Sa Sharma Jaao To Bechare Dil Ko Aaraam Ho jaaye


      ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~


wah wah wah khwahish jee umda kalaam kaha hai ..daaad ubool kareN
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2013, 09:47:55 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2013, 12:53:08 AM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!

WaaH janab waaH kia kahne aapke bade hi khoobsurar ashaar kahe haiN
sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab... Usual Smile

humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #14 on: March 09, 2013, 08:07:37 PM »
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Wah Wah Khwaish Jee!!!! Very Beautiful And Romantic Ghazal!!!! Very Niceeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!


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Thankssssssss A Million Dear Shireen icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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