*~*TeRi SaAnSoN kI gArMi Se....*~*

by ghayal_shayar on April 06, 2006, 02:50:35 PM
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bahut dino baad aaj fir aaya hun kuch kalaam le kar apbni jholi me aapki mehfil me.bas isi umeed ke saath ki aapko mera kalaam pasand aayega.


tu mera armaan hai,tujhe basi meri jaan hai,tu meri rulaai,aur tu hi khushi ka saamaan hai.ab bhi chahat hai tujhe paane ki,
\tere saath fir dil aazmaane ki,tune jo aisa kiya mere saath,aakhir kya khata thi is deewane ki........................


to pesh hai ek aur GHAYAL kalaam...............



dil cheer wo nikal jata hai,
hume dekh machal jata hai.

teri saanson ki garmi se,
badan mera jal jata hai.

mere dil ke tukddon ko,
har shakhs kuchal jata hai.

teri bewafai se bhi ab to,
dil mera bahal jata hai.

dil tootne ka ye mausam,
kyun nahi badal jata hai.

dil laga kar humse,wo,
hume hi bhool jata hai.

ask yun tezaab bane ab,
pathar bhi pighal jata hai.

"ghayal" ko dekh ab to,
har shakhs dahal jata hai.
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2006, 02:54:28 PM »
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Nice One!! Keep writing Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2006, 02:54:55 PM »
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Ghayal Shayar

Aree aap kahan gayab ho gaye the  Puzzled !

Bahut khoob !

Welcome back :D
 
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«Reply #3 on: April 06, 2006, 03:24:17 PM »
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Nice One!! Keep writing Usual Smile


thanks talat ji bas yunhi padhti rahiye.
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2006, 03:26:03 PM »
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Ghayal Shayar

Aree aap kahan gayab ho gaye the  Puzzled !

Bahut khoob !

Welcome back :D
 
Rajbir



shukriya rajbir ji.bas ghayal jaani pehchaani galiyon me kho gaya tha.par ab fikr  na karen aap. ab ghayal yahaan shirkat karke sabhi ko ghayal karta rahega...................
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«Reply #5 on: April 06, 2006, 03:26:46 PM »
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Lovelly! Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: April 06, 2006, 04:05:08 PM »
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wah ghayal ji...bohot hi acha likha apne!!!  :D
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2006, 07:25:08 AM »
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thanks sweetie ji.bas yunhi aage bhi hume padhti rahiye aap.
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wah ghayal ji...bohot hi acha likha apne!!!  :D



thanks meena ji.bas aage bhi hume yunhi padhti rahiye.
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2006, 08:09:17 AM »
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wah ghayal ji bahut khoob aapne to sab ko apne sher se ghayal kar diya.. nice one.. keep posting..
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2006, 09:08:07 AM »
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Bahut khoob Ghayal Shayal....Kamaal kar diya.....

Ghayal teri Mahobbat me dekh yeh ashiq kaise khara hai....
Dhoondta hai tujhe poochta harr kisi se tera hee pata hai.....
Rok na paayi kabhi mere Pyar ko yeh deeware tere ghar ki.....
Kabhi tu Dil ke darwaaje bhi toh khol ke dekh....
Yeh Deewana aaj bhi tere liye apni Bahein khole khara hai......!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2006, 09:28:07 AM »
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wah bahut khoob likha badnam ji...
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2006, 09:30:36 AM »
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Shukriya Gesu
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2006, 09:56:15 AM »
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Bohot khoob Gaurav !!!

Ghayal ho tum to zakhm humne bhi khaaye hain
Tere ishq main jaane kitne safar tai kar aaye hain
Aankhon main sajaye the khwaab bade armaan se
Hua reza reza dil,  khwaab ashkon me bahaye hain!!
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wah ghayal ji bahut khoob aapne to sab ko apne sher se ghayal kar diya.. nice one.. keep posting..


bahut bahut shukriya gesu ji.bas aap yunhi apdhte rahiye hume aage bhi.
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