Teri yaad....................(sona)

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Tumhari yaad aaye to aati chali gaye
muzko yeh bus youn hi rulati chali gaye
faslon ka ehsas hota hai hume jo
yeh un faslon ko dooriyan banti chali gaye

Tmhari yaad aaye to aati chali gaye .........
Humko bus youn hi rulati chali gaye.......


Tum rehte ho har pal paas hi mere
Mre dil main aur tum hi ho jazbat mere
Yeh un jazbaton ko fir se hawa delati chali gaye
Yeh fir se buze shoale badkati chali gaye......

Tumari yaad aaye to aati chali gaye ..........
Humko bus youn hi rulati chali gaye........


Khamosh bethe the youn hi kaab se hum
Zindagi ban chuki thi youn hi gumsum
Yeh fir se usse alfaaz deti chali gaye
Bhool chuke the nagame fir se yaad delati chali gaye.......

Tumhari yaad aaye to bus aati chali gaye......
Humko bus youn hi rulati chali gaye.......


Aaj fir jo tum se hue rubru ek baar
Aaj fir dil dharka jor se ek baar
Yeh fir dabe hue angaro ko hawa deti chali gaye
Mere dil main fir se yeh toofan lati chali gaye ........

Tumhari yaad aaye to bus aati chali gaye.................
Humko bus youn hi rulati chali gaye.........



...............SONA.............
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2010, 01:44:14 AM »
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jaan ab bhi baaki hai aapke kalam me.. jang nahi laga usme.. main to soch raha tha ki humne ek achchi lekhika kho di hai... par is rachna ki jaadugari ne hamein fir se ye bharosa dila diya hai ki kuch der ki khamoshi kisi se uske shabd nahi chhin sakte... bas thodi si koshish aur is tarha ki uttam rachna ban jaati hai.. sach aapki is kavita ya geet ki taarif me bas itna kehna chahunga ki mere dil ko chhoo gayi aur mujhe bhi kuch likhne ke liye majboor kar diya... aur aise posts bahut kam hote hain jo mujhe reply dene ke liye majboor karen.. sach .. office me time kam tha nahi to wahin likhne waala tha.. ghar aate hi system khola aur aap ke liye reply tayyar kiya .. aur sirf 10min me ye poem ban gaya.. kuch editing nahi kiya maine apne poem me... jaisa aaya flow me waisa hi likhta gaya.. hope u will like it...


yaadein kabhi bhulaane ke liye nahi hoti,
hamaari yaad rulaane ke liye nahi hoti,

yaad karte ho hamaare saath beete lamho ko,
to un palon ki khushiyon ko mehsoos karo,
kyun un palon k baare me sochte ho jo gum de,
jo khushnuma yaadein hain bas unhe yaad karo,

wo pehli mulaquaat, wo pehli barsaat,
tumse hui wo pehli baat yaad karo,
wo maasoom se ehsaas mohabbat ke aur,
sitaaron se bhari wo raat yaad karo,

kya paoge apni aankhon ko dariyaa banaake,
jo tumhe achchi lage un baaton ko yaad karo,
jab saath reh ke hum muskuraate the,
tum sirf un mulaquaton ko yaad karo,

mumkin nahi ki haasil har kisi ki kismat me ho,
tumhe jo mil paai hain un khushiyon ko yaad karo,
kho ke mujhe paaya hai tumne kitna kuch,
tum bhagwaan ke diye un tohfo ko yaad karo,

sun lo meri ye baat aur tum aisa kaam karo,
har pal har lamha muskuraane ki koshish karo,
jo hain tumhaare apne aaj unse pyaar karo,
milunga agle janam me tumhe, kismat pe aetbaar karo....


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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2010, 02:30:06 AM »
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OMG KApil ............ Its too very gud yaar ......

Muze tum jaise batian karni aur tum jaise words nahi hai bt my "KAMAL" will say evrything .....
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Bhut khoob ..........aab iska reply dena bhut mushkil baat hai bt let me try .........

Saath hai voh mere kafi hai, hasil karna koi jarori nahi
Pa sakon Unne yakin hai hume, fir agla janam koi jarori to nahi

Bhut se meethi meethi yadain hai Unki mere saath
Voh nahi ho par Unki meethi batian hai mere saath

Bhut si ankahi aur ansuni batain hai iss dil main
khomoshi hai aur Unki hi sada hai iss dil main

Milonge jab Voh to Unne Hum dikhyange  
Bina kuch kahe apni dharkane sunyange

Milenge Un se bus itni si hai chaht meri
Kyonki
Unse milna hi hai bus aab akhiri khawish meri........

Jst a try ..... ok ..

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jaan ab bhi baaki hai aapke kalam me.. jang nahi laga usme.. main to soch raha tha ki humne ek achchi lekhika kho di hai... par is rachna ki jaadugari ne hamein fir se ye bharosa dila diya hai ki kuch der ki khamoshi kisi se uske shabd nahi chhin sakte... bas thodi si koshish aur is tarha ki uttam rachna ban jaati hai.. sach aapki is kavita ya geet ki taarif me bas itna kehna chahunga ki mere dil ko chhoo gayi aur mujhe bhi kuch likhne ke liye majboor kar diya... aur aise posts bahut kam hote hain jo mujhe reply dene ke liye majboor karen.. sach .. office me time kam tha nahi to wahin likhne waala tha.. ghar aate hi system khola aur aap ke liye reply tayyar kiya .. aur sirf 10min me ye poem ban gaya.. kuch editing nahi kiya maine apne poem me... jaisa aaya flow me waisa hi likhta gaya.. hope u will like it...


yaadein kabhi bhulaane ke liye nahi hoti,
hamaari yaad rulaane ke liye nahi hoti,

yaad karte ho hamaare saath beete lamho ko,
to un palon ki khushiyon ko mehsoos karo,
kyun un palon k baare me sochte ho jo gum de,
jo khushnuma yaadein hain bas unhe yaad karo,

wo pehli mulaquaat, wo pehli barsaat,
tumse hui wo pehli baat yaad karo,
wo maasoom se ehsaas mohabbat ke aur,
sitaaron se bhari wo raat yaad karo,

kya paoge apni aankhon ko dariyaa banaake,
jo tumhe achchi lage un baaton ko yaad karo,
jab saath reh ke hum muskuraate the,
tum sirf un mulaquaton ko yaad karo,

mumkin nahi ki haasil har kisi ki kismat me ho,
tumhe jo mil paai hain un khushiyon ko yaad karo,
kho ke mujhe paaya hai tumne kitna kuch,
tum bhagwaan ke diye un tohfo ko yaad karo,

sun lo meri ye baat aur tum aisa kaam karo,
har pal har lamha muskuraane ki koshish karo,
jo hain tumhaare apne aaj unse pyaar karo,
milunga agle janam me tumhe, kismat pe aetbaar karo....


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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2010, 10:16:10 AM »
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wah ji wah... jawaab nahi aapke jawab ka bhi.. ek dum zabardast....!!!
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milunga tumse main ek din aake,
gale lagaunga tumhe muskuraake,

bhool jaaoge tum ghum sab apne,
has padogi tab tum khilkhilake,

wo din bahut dur nahi hai ab,
le jaunga tumhe apna banaake,

dekhti reh jaayegi duniya saari,
le jaunga tunko sabse churaake,

na koi deewaar na bandhan tab hoga,
le jaunga tumhe sab bandhan chhudaake...
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2010, 10:32:52 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2010, 10:36:35 AM »
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Deviji pranam..... aapka aashirwaad raha to ye thread yunhi chalta rahga bas Neel ji saath dete rahen aur ye badhti jaayegi... bahut bahut shukriya aapka jo aapne ise padha, pasand kiya aur itni saari taarif ki.. shukriya hai ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2010, 10:37:53 AM »
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Tumhari yaad aaye to aati chali gaye
muzko yeh bus youn hi rulati chali gaye
faslon ka ehsas hota hai hume jo
yeh un faslon ko dooriyan banti chali gaye

Tmhari yaad aaye to aati chali gaye .........
Humko bus youn hi rulati chali gaye.......


Tum rehte ho har pal paas hi mere
Mre dil main aur tum hi ho jazbat mere
Yeh un jazbaton ko fir se hawa delati chali gaye
Yeh fir se buze shoale badkati chali gaye......

Tumari yaad aaye to aati chali gaye ..........
Humko bus youn hi rulati chali gaye........


Khamosh bethe the youn hi kaab se hum
Zindagi ban chuki thi youn hi gumsum
Yeh fir se usse alfaaz deti chali gaye
Bhool chuke the nagame fir se yaad delati chali gaye.......

Tumhari yaad aaye to bus aati chali gaye......
Humko bus youn hi rulati chali gaye.......


Aaj fir jo tum se hue rubru ek baar
Aaj fir dil dharka jor se ek baar
Yeh fir dabe hue angaro ko hawa deti chali gaye
Mere dil main fir se yeh toofan lati chali gaye ........

Tumhari yaad aaye to bus aati chali gaye.................
Humko bus youn hi rulati chali gaye.........



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mehfil itni khil uhti si lagti he unke aane se
lo hawa chali or bata gayi "Abhi" to bas yaad aayi he~

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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!

bahut badhiya Sona jiii~...

kapil ji ne bhi bahut badhiya sath diyaa..

mehfil itni khil uhti si lagti he unke aane se
lo hawa chali or bata gayi "Abhi" to bas yaad aayi he~


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mera aashirwad hamesha aapke sath hai bachcha...yunhi fulo falo tarakki karo.....
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Aho bhaagya hamaare...... !!!  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2010, 06:38:42 PM »
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Thanx Kasak ....... Yaar tumhari tareef to kehar daah rehi hai yaar ....... hope it vll do gud ...if ur wishes r thr ... u shuld also participate......

Thnx once again DEAR...

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mastammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm neelllllllllll aur zabardasttttttttttttt kapil ki mastammmmmm masttttttt jugal bandi...wowwwwwwwwww maza aagaya........hope ye thread bhi ek jo maine padha tha uss thread jaise khub din chalta rahe,,,,,,
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2010, 06:40:48 PM »
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Thanx Abhi.....

Mehfil lage hai bus chale aayae....
Bus aapki kami hai , Chale aayae..
Koi sawal na koi jawab karenge....
Aarmaan saze hai, Bus chale aayae...

Thnx once again..

bahut badhiya Sona jiii~...

kapil ji ne bhi bahut badhiya sath diyaa..

mehfil itni khil uhti si lagti he unke aane se
lo hawa chali or bata gayi "Abhi" to bas yaad aayi he~


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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2010, 07:15:10 PM »
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Bhut hi khoob kaha ...... Kamal ho yaar tum bi ....
U knoe muze aise reply nahi aate still im trying zara zel lena pls......

रंजिश यह नहीं है की वोह मेरा साथ छोड़ गया
रंजिश यह है की वोह मुजे आंसूओं में डबो गया

दिल को यह यकीन है कि वोह आयगा  एक दिन
आ के वोह मुझे अपना बनायगा एक दिन

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सारी दुनिया के सामने अपना वोह जब मुझे बनायगे

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wah ji wah... jawaab nahi aapke jawab ka bhi.. ek dum zabardast....!!!
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milunga tumse main ek din aake,
gale lagaunga tumhe muskuraake,

bhool jaaoge tum ghum sab apne,
has padogi tab tum khilkhilake,

wo din bahut dur nahi hai ab,
le jaunga tumhe apna banaake,

dekhti reh jaayegi duniya saari,
le jaunga tunko sabse churaake,

na koi deewaar na bandhan tab hoga,
le jaunga tumhe sab bandhan chhudaake...
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2010, 06:10:09 AM »
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Thanx Abhi.....

Mehfil lage hai bus chale aayae....
Bus aapki kami hai , Chale aayae..
Koi sawal na koi jawab karenge....
Aarmaan saze hai, Bus chale aayae...

Thnx once again..

koi is kadar shukriya kaheee to bar bar likhe ham~ hahahha
welcome ji~
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sona Ji..Lajawaab!!!!

Bahut Acha saath Nibhaya Hai Kapilji Aapne..

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