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Wo jara jara si baat pe.
jara jara sa roothna..
Wo aankho me ashq samet kar...
Bheegi palko dekhna...
thujhe yaad hai wo zindgi..
Tha dil jab tera aashna...
Wo raat raat jagna..
mundi palko se takna..
thi har pehar sargoshiya..
Wo chup nigaho se chedna...
tujhe yaad hai wo zindgi..
Tha dil jab tera aashna...
Wahi rooh hai wahi noor bhi...
Jise chahta tha tu kabhi..
hai ab bhi wahi bekarariya..
tha dil jab mera aashna...
thujhe yaad hai wo zindgi..
Tha dil jab tera aashna...
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2011, 03:10:23 PM » |
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 Bahaut khoob di.. Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2011, 03:13:22 PM » |
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2011, 03:14:38 PM » |
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wah bahut khub priyaji..... khub
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2011, 03:16:24 PM » |
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Wo jara jara si baat pe.
jara jara sa roothna..
Wo aankho me ashq samet kar...
Bheegi palko dekhna...
thujhe yaad hai wo zindgi..
Tha dil jab tera aashna...
Wo raat raat jagna..
mundi palko se takna..
thi har pehar sargoshiya..
Wo chup nigaho se chedna...
tujhe yaad hai wo zindgi..
Tha dil jab tera aashna...
Wahi rooh hai wahi noor bhi...
Jise chahta tha tu kabhi..
hai ab bhi wahi bekarariya..
tha dil jab mera aashna...
thujhe yaad hai wo zindgi..
Tha dil jab tera aashna...
Bahut umda priya ji khwaish ji ne sahi kaha ise mehsus kar k padhi jaye tou waqai bahut ehsas bayan karti hai ye kavita... |
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2011, 03:17:40 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2011, 03:26:46 PM » |
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Bhule se bhi nahi bhulta wo lamhe
Jab dil tera…….. mera thaa aashna
Tere muskuraahte chehre ka wo noor
Adharon se adharon k milne ka saroor
Yaad hai teri goad me lete-2 tujh ko taaknaa
Mere bhatakte hathon ko sharma k tera roknaa
Uffff aaj bhi taajaa hai wo ehsaas…
Jab dil tera…… mera thaa aashna…….
Chhupte chhupaate tera mujh se milne aanaa
Ghanton baith kay hamaaraa wo batiyaanaa..
Kai baar na tu na he mein kuchh naa bolnaa
Aankhon he aankhon me bas ek tak dekhnaa
Aaj bhi tanhaayi mai lagta ghoorti hain wo
Neegaahein….. jo kabee thee meri aashnaa
Baat baat par tera wo anmana ho roothna
Mujhe padtaa tha har baar tujhe manaana
Aur fir pyaar se tera wo mujh se lipatnaa
Bata kyu aaj wo reh gaya he ban k sapnaa
Kya ab kabhi lautenge wo pyaar bhare pal
Jab phir se dil tera hoga mujh par aashnaa
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«Reply #7 on: April 29, 2011, 07:07:05 AM » |
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Good Job Priya Ji |
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2011, 03:02:20 PM » |
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thanx alot rahim... god bless u.. Bahaut khoob di.. Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2011, 03:05:06 PM » |
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shukria shihab ji... & very nice sher.. thanx for such a beautiful reply... Bahut Khub Manzil e Ishq Ji
Juda Hokar Bhi , Kahaan Raha Tu Mujhse Baad Hai
Haan Dilbar Mujhe Ab B Wo Saqib e Daur Yaad Hai
Shad o Aabad Rahiye...
~Shihab~
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2011, 03:06:07 PM » |
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shukria manju ji... wah bahut khub priyaji..... khub
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«Reply #12 on: April 29, 2011, 03:07:04 PM » |
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thanx alot geet ji... Bahut umda priya ji khwaish ji ne sahi kaha ise mehsus kar k padhi jaye tou waqai bahut ehsas bayan karti hai ye kavita...
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«Reply #14 on: April 29, 2011, 03:10:16 PM » |
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kya kahu aapke reply ke baare me anaam ji... ye itna accha hai ki kuh kahne ko bacha hi nahi... thanx for such a beautiful reply... Bhule se bhi nahi bhulta wo lamhe
Jab dil tera…….. mera thaa aashna
Tere muskuraahte chehre ka wo noor
Adharon se adharon k milne ka saroor
Yaad hai teri goad me lete-2 tujh ko taaknaa
Mere bhatakte hathon ko sharma k tera roknaa
Uffff aaj bhi taajaa hai wo ehsaas…
Jab dil tera…… mera thaa aashna…….
Chhupte chhupaate tera mujh se milne aanaa
Ghanton baith kay hamaaraa wo batiyaanaa..
Kai baar na tu na he mein kuchh naa bolnaa
Aankhon he aankhon me bas ek tak dekhnaa
Aaj bhi tanhaayi mai lagta ghoorti hain wo
Neegaahein….. jo kabee thee meri aashnaa
Baat baat par tera wo anmana ho roothna
Mujhe padtaa tha har baar tujhe manaana
Aur fir pyaar se tera wo mujh se lipatnaa
Bata kyu aaj wo reh gaya he ban k sapnaa
Kya ab kabhi lautenge wo pyaar bhare pal
Jab phir se dil tera hoga mujh par aashnaa
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