thoda sahara maanga tha...

by rita mal on June 26, 2013, 12:52:24 PM
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Maine kab tumse tumhara waqt sara maanga tha
Bus sabhalne ko tumse thoda sahara maanga tha

Tum saahil pe khade the aur hum bhanwar mein
Tumse tumhari zameen ka ik kinaara maanga tha

Tere pyaar me teri parasti ko is qadar bebas hue
Ke tere kadamo mein ek kona dobara maanga tha

Apne raqeeb se guzaarish karen bhi toh kaise kare
Usse uska nahin, haq humne hamaara maanga tha


Hasraten dil ki kya thi kya rah gayi e mere khuda
Khudai nahi Teri rahmaton ka ishaara maanga tha
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«Reply #1 on: June 26, 2013, 12:56:14 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut khoob rita ji. hazaron dili daad is kalaam par. yeh do sher bahut khoob rahe

Tum saahil pe khade the aur hum bhanwar mein
Tumse tumhari zameen ka ik kinaara maanga tha

Tere pyaar me teri parasti ko is qadar bebas hue
Ke tere kadamo mein ek kona dobara maanga tha
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«Reply #2 on: June 26, 2013, 02:09:49 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2013, 02:20:18 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob likha hai..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2013, 02:22:49 PM »
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bahut khoob nashwani saheb. achhe kalaam
ke liye mubarakbaad pesh hai.
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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2013, 03:06:30 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Rita ji,
Bahut khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.Aapko dili mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2013, 03:09:26 PM »
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WaaH Bahut Khoob jasbaato ko bayan kiya hai...............
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«Reply #7 on: June 26, 2013, 03:56:52 PM »
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waa,............. bohat c daad,................
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«Reply #8 on: June 26, 2013, 06:15:45 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB....... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2013, 06:38:46 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2013, 07:00:34 PM »
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waah waah waah waah sirf waah hi nikal rahi hai dil se.... jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai... bahut achchaa likhte hain aap... yunhi apne posts share karte rahiye aur humein unkaa aanand lete rehne dijiye....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2013, 11:54:33 PM »
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wah bahut ahche janaab, maza aa gaya.... yuNhi likhte raheN...
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