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Wo mere dil ki mehfil mein aayein to baat bane.
Apni adaon ka jadu bikhraaye to baat bane
mehfil mein chahne wale ki koi kami nahi hai unke
Wo bas dekh mujhe muskraye to baat bane
najron mein se to kai bar gujre hain unki
najron se dil mein utar jayein to baat bane
khawabon mein to roj lag jate hai seene se
haqeeqat mein wo gale lagaye to baat bane
mehfil mein izhar to kar de hum mohabbat ka
mohabat ko meri aakhon se samjh jaye to baat bane
mana unhe maharath hai ishq ki gazal sunane me
unki gazal mein naam apna aaye to baat bane
apni adaon se dil ki dhadkan churana to aasan h
mujh deewane ko apne dil ki dhadkan banaye to baat bane
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2012, 05:53:46 AM » |
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waah waah beta bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2012, 06:07:33 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2012, 06:12:43 AM » |
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Bahut shaandaar ghazal pesh kee hai Karan kya baat hai. har ashaar bolta hua. bahut bahut khoob  |
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2012, 06:20:00 AM » |
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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2012, 06:38:34 AM » |
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very good saudagar jee achche khayalat haiN,
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2012, 07:05:49 AM » |
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Wo mere dil ki mehfil mein aayein to baat bane.
Apni adaon ka jadu bikhraaye to baat bane
mehfil mein chahne wale ki koi kami nahi hai unke
Wo bas dekh mujhe muskraye to baat bane
najron mein se to kai bar gujre hain unki
najron se dil mein utar jayein to baat bane
khawabon mein to roj lag jate hai seene se
haqeeqat mein wo gale lagaye to baat bane
mehfil mein izhar to kar de hum mohabbat ka
mohabat ko meri aakhon se samjh jaye to baat bane
mana unhe maharath hai ishq ki gazal sunane me
unki gazal mein naam apna aaye to baat bane
apni adaon se dil ki dhadkan churana to aasan h
mujh deewane ko apne dil ki dhadkan banaye to baat bane
come on soudagar! very nice post |
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2012, 07:55:09 AM » |
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bahut umda, dhero dad
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2012, 08:16:12 AM » |
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Bahut khoob lazwab creation Soudagar sahab ..!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2012, 09:35:15 AM » |
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Niiiiiiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaacccccccceeee
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2012, 10:30:25 AM » |
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Bahut khoob , Soudagar ji . Tabiat khush ho gai .
Mubarakbaad aur duaaein !
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«Reply #13 on: September 27, 2012, 02:29:28 PM » |
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Karan ji bahut khubsurati se likha aap ne......
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on eTI community..
