tuj per fida

by veenavarsha on March 19, 2011, 09:48:46 AM

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veenavarsha

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tuj per fida teri yaad pal pal aati rahi
karaar se bekarari badti hi badti gayi

yadoo ke pahre me din katte rahe
raat ko fir shama se bate chalti rahi

namumkin me bhi tadaf badti gayi
ek aash se nayi aash bandati rahi

koshishe parwaan chadti gayi
mod aaya na aur raah gujrati gayi

talash me khoi khoi udashi katti rahi
duriya khatam na hui,lagan badti gayi

aane ko tha na aana jisko kabhi
ruh fir bhi aahate uski sunti rahi

jhalte bhujte deepak se roshan
Neelkamal ki kalam chalti rahi


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nirala

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2011, 11:16:02 AM »

“”“
wah
bahut achi soch


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dead heart

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2011, 12:44:25 PM »

Bahaut ala soch hai iss kalam main..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!


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veenavarsha

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2011, 04:37:21 PM »

Quote from: nirala on March 19, 2011, 11:16:02 AM

“”“
wah
bahut achi soch

sukriya
sarahana mili aapki aur khush hua man
soch hamari bhi achhi pata chala ab
sukriya


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ANAAM

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2011, 05:13:57 PM »

Good poem.....VVji.... Applause

Aane ko tha na aana jisko kabhi
Adbhut uss ka intezaar ruh karti rahi....


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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2011, 05:16:24 PM »

very nice


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veenavarsha

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2011, 07:32:32 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 19, 2011, 12:44:25 PM

Bahaut ala soch hai iss kalam main..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Applause

Khush rahiye..!

Thanks

ala darbaar ke ala darbari
sangat ka assar tab bhari
Neelkamal kaha is layak
ye to rab ki aur mahfil ki maharbani


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veenavarsha

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2011, 07:35:04 PM »

Quote from: saahill on March 20, 2011, 05:16:24 PM

very nice

tarif ke liye sukriya saahil ji


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veenavarsha

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2011, 07:37:59 PM »

Quote from: ANAAM on March 20, 2011, 05:13:57 PM

Good poem.....VVji.... Applause

Aane ko tha na aana jisko kabhi
Adbhut uss ka intezaar ruh karti rahi....

anaam se nikla inaam hai
tarif me badla saar hai
Neelkamal sukriya tha aam
usko kah diya khaas hai


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ANAAM

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2011, 02:29:33 PM »

Yaar ye Neelkamal kaun hai ji....kya aapka "takhaloof" hai ji

Teri Parwaaz me he koi kami rahi hogi
Warnaa mohabbat ka aakaash khulaa tha


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brokenbyluv

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2011, 03:01:37 PM »

Bahut umda veena ji..


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2011, 06:35:38 PM »

Bhut Khub Veena JI


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veenavarsha

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Re: tuj per fida

«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2011, 11:16:09 AM »

Quote from: ANAAM on March 21, 2011, 02:29:33 PM

Yaar ye Neelkamal kaun hai ji....kya aapka "takhaloof" hai ji

Teri Parwaaz me he koi kami rahi hogi
Warnaa mohabbat ka aakaash khulaa tha

Thanks
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kisi ki chahat me kami to kisi ki aadat buri
ilzam nahi, wo thi kasouti ki ghadi
gagan se preet ki barsaat hui bhari
chate wale big na paye, kismat ki mara mari

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kuch kam badal jate hai to kuch naam badal jate hai

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