Tum aatee ho!

by abdbundeli on December 18, 2008, 08:05:51 AM
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Tum aatee ho:
Sang laatee ho sapney aneik!
Muskaatee ho:
Sang laatee ho sapney aneik!

Khil uthhteen hain kaliyaan:
Bahaar aa jaatee hai!
Jhoom kar hawaa chaltee hai:
Khushboo laatee hai!
     Andhiyaaraa chhup jaataa hai,
     Dubak roshnee mein;
Subah kee dhoop kuhraa oudhhey,
                              Sharmaatee hai!
Sharmaatee ho:
Sang laatee ho sapney aneik!

Mein tumhain deykhtaa hoon:
Tum udhar deykhtee ho!
Kuchh samajh naheen paata,
Kab, kidhar deykhtee ho!!
      Bas intizaar kartaa hoon,
      Bhounchak beybas-saa;
Kuchh murh, fir muskaa kar,
                 Kab, idhar deykhtee ho!!
Bharmaatee ho:
Jyoun mujh-sey apney, hon aneik!!

Tum aatee ho:
Sang laatee ho sapney aneik!

 
                             - abd bundeli
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2008, 09:47:20 AM »
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Abd Ji aap ka to bilkul alag andaaz hai
Hame bahut pasand aaya hai
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2008, 09:51:21 AM »
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bohat khoob,bohat pyaara abd ji....
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diya786
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«Reply #3 on: December 18, 2008, 10:26:49 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB ABD SAHAB Applause Applause
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: December 18, 2008, 11:48:06 AM »
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Abd Ji aap ka to bilkul alag andaaz hai
Hame bahut pasand aaya hai
bohat khoob,bohat pyaara abd ji....
BAHUT KHOOB ABD SAHAB Applause Applause
Thanks a lot Rajesh Harish ji/Tanha(Saurabh) ji/diya786 ji!
I'm happy you read it with interest, and found it worth reading & enjoying!
                 - abd bundeli
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Shikha12
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«Reply #5 on: December 18, 2008, 12:20:10 PM »
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Tum aatee ho:
Sang laatee ho sapney aneik!
Muskaatee ho:
Sang laatee ho sapney aneik!

Khil uthhteen hain kaliyaan:
Bahaar aa jaatee hai!
Jhoom kar hawaa chaltee hai:
Khushboo laatee hai!
     Andhiyaaraa chhup jaataa hai,
     Dubak roshnee mein;
Subah kee dhoop kuhraa oudhhey,
                              Sharmaatee hai!
Sharmaatee ho:
Sang laatee ho sapney aneik!

Mein tumhain deykhtaa hoon:
Tum udhar deykhtee ho!
Kuchh samajh naheen paata,
Kab, kidhar deykhtee ho!!
      Bas intizaar kartaa hoon,
      Bhounchak beybas-saa;
Kuchh murh, fir muskaa kar,
                 Kab, idhar deykhtee ho!!
Bharmaatee ho:
Jyoun mujh-sey apney, hon aneik!!

Tum aatee ho:
Sang laatee ho sapney aneik!

 
                             - abd bundeli



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It feels So Pure And So Very Perfect.. Its never enough to read your work..

Jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye, kam hogi.. bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai Abd Ji..
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #6 on: December 18, 2008, 12:51:03 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
It feels So Pure And So Very Perfect.. Its never enough to read your work..
Jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye, kam hogi.. bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai Abd Ji..
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Mahiya Ji!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah! Zarrah nawaazee key liye khaas tour sey shukraguzaar hoon!
                    - abd bundeli
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