~*~Tum Aaye To~*~

by pankshivam on October 14, 2009, 01:26:25 PM
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Mausam ki rangat badal si gayi hai...
Ye bahati fizayen kyun tham si gayi hain...

Dekhata hun har jagah ab to aks tera...
Ye sard havaye bhi ab pighal si gayi hain...

Milenge kabhi to kahenge ye kissa...
Tum aaye to zindagi sambhal si gayi hai...

~Pank~
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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2009, 04:31:28 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Pank ji,very touching and marvelous creation,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 14, 2009, 09:09:56 PM »
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Mausam ki rangat badal si gayi hai...
Ye bahati fizayen kyun tham si gayi hain...

Dekhata hun har jagah ab to aks tera...
Ye sard havaye bhi ab pighal si gayi hain...

Milenge kabhi to kahenge ye kissa...
Tum aaye to zindagi sambhal si gayi hai...

~Pank~

Wah bhai wah... bahut bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2009, 10:38:24 PM »
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Waah waah Bahoot Khoob Shivam ji..
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2009, 10:48:39 PM »
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Waah waah KYa KHoob Kaha Hai Pank Bhai,,.
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«Reply #5 on: October 15, 2009, 12:27:27 AM »
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HAUSALA AFZAYI K LIYE AAP SB KA SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #6 on: October 15, 2009, 12:28:16 AM »
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THANKS
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Wah bhai wah... bahut bahut khoob Pankshivam Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 16, 2009, 02:28:03 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Pank Ji.
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«Reply #10 on: October 16, 2009, 04:38:28 PM »
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Wah bhai wah... bahut bahut khoob Pankshivam Ji Applause Applause Applause
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Bahut Khoob Pank Ji.
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«Reply #11 on: October 16, 2009, 07:26:53 PM »
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Pankji achhi rachna hai aapki... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jeevan mai rang bhar deta hai kisi khaas ka aagaman
Zindagi ko ek naye andaaj se jeene ka man ho jaata hai

Dekhne ka nazaria badal jaata hai,
Veerano me bhi chaman nazar aata hai icon_flower

Dil tab khushnuma nagme gungunane lagta hai
Har chehre me ab tera he aks nazar aata hai

Tum aaye to hawayen mahak si uthi hain    icon_flower
Dil ki kali khil-khil uthi hai tum aaye to: icon_flower


Mausam ki rangat badal si gayi hai...
Ye bahati fizayen kyun tham si gayi hain...

Dekhata hun har jagah ab to aks tera...
Ye sard havaye bhi ab pighal si gayi hain...

Milenge kabhi to kahenge ye kissa...
Tum aaye to zindagi sambhal si gayi hai...

~Pank~
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«Reply #12 on: October 17, 2009, 12:57:12 AM »
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Pankji achhi rachna hai aapki... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Jeevan mai rang bhar deta hai kisi khaas ka aagaman
Zindagi ko ek naye andaaj se jeene ka man ho jaata hai

Dekhne ka nazaria badal jaata hai,
Veerano me bhi chaman nazar aata hai icon_flower

Dil tab khushnuma nagme gungunane lagta hai
Har chehre me ab tera he aks nazar aata hai

Tum aaye to hawayen mahak si uthi hain    icon_flower
Dil ki kali khil-khil uthi hai tum aaye to: icon_flower

SHUKRIYA SMARDIAJI BAHOOT KHOOB LIKHA APNE  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 17, 2009, 01:04:26 AM »
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Wah Smardia ji bahut hi khoob,very touching and marvelous line.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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