<>*Tum aaye zindai me*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 03, 2010, 01:28:42 PM
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<>*Tum aaye zindai me*<>


Labon pe mere fir se muskaan sajne lagi
Tum aaye zindai me to mehfilein sajne lagi

Kuch kehte rahe tum kuch sunti rahi main
Bas inhi guftaguu me ye raatein katne lagi

Chaand ki bheegi roshni me ee humdum
Hamare pyaar ko nai nai udaane lagni lagi

Rokte rahe khudko tere kareeb aane se
Zindagi magar tere kareeb hume lane lagi

Tu salamat rahe hamesha yehi dua hai meri
Apni khushi se ab teri muskaan pyari lagne lagi

Hai dard bht dil me aur chubhte hain kaante bhi
*KasaK* pyaar ki par ye mithi bht lagne lagi…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2010, 03:23:46 PM »
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"Apni khushi se ab teri muskaan pyaari lagne lagi.."

Bahaut bahaut meetha kalam..bahaut bahaut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2010, 07:10:56 PM »
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khoobsurti shabdon ki, khoobsurati ehsaason ki, khobbsurti us khoobsurat se mohabbat ki... aap ki is kavita ko shabdon me nahi tola ja sakta.... ye ek aisa anmol peshkash hai is iski taarif ke liye mere paas shabd nahi hai...
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is safar me zindagi ke hum kuch is tarha mile,
ki humein fir mohabbat karne ki chahat hone lagi,

khoya tumne apne pyaar ko aur khoya maine bhi,
par ab ye kahani fir se wahi puraani lagne lagi,

mere chehre me tum kisi ka chehra dhunda karti,
aur mujhe tumhaari awaaz kisi ki yaad dilaane lagi,

par ab yun aadat padi hai humein ek dusre ki,
mujhe tum me tum aur tumhe mujhme meri jhalak dikhne lagi,

achcha lagta hai main ghanto tumhari awaaz sunta rahu,
aur tumhe bhi mere geeton ki kuch aadat padne lagi,

tadap uth_ti ho tum agar kuch palon ke liye dur rahu,
ab tumhaare dil me fir se mohabbat ki pyaas jagne lagi,

ye khoobsurat sa eksaas tumhaare saath ka rahe umra bhar,
ab tumhaare hone se jahaan ki har cheez khoobsurat lagne lagi....
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2010, 03:43:25 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI             KASAK....DIL KI JI....

JAB SE "TUM AAYE ZINDAGI ME" MAZA AANE LAGA HAI JEENE MEIN
PAER KAHAN ZAMEEN PE RAHETE MERE UDNE LAGI HUN AASMAN MEIN..
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2010, 05:38:01 AM »
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"Apni khushi se ab teri muskaan pyaari lagne lagi.."

Bahaut bahaut meetha kalam..bahaut bahaut khoob.. Applause Applause

shukriya Rahim ..tumne ise pasand kiya...bas yunhi encourage karte rehna
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2010, 05:39:16 AM »
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Rokte Rahe Khudko Tere Kareeb Aane Se
Zindagi Magar Tere Kareeb Hume Lane Lagi.


Wah Wah Kasak Ji Kya Baat Hai
Bahut Khub Ji...Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

thnx shihab ji....aapke comments dil khush khush kar dete hain mera...yunhi sath dete rahiye.....
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2010, 05:40:22 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI             KASAK....DIL KI JI....

JAB SE "TUM AAYE ZINDAGI ME" MAZA AANE LAGA HAI JEENE MEIN
PAER KAHAN ZAMEEN PE RAHETE MERE UDNE LAGI HUN AASMAN MEIN..

thnx cara ji ....aapke ye 2 liners sahi me ek alag andaaz hai aapke replies ka......
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