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Tum se lipti hui yaadein
Satati hai mujhe
ho chain kahan
na neend hai aati
Kambaqt neend bhi jab aati hai kabhi kabhi
Achcha sila deti HAI--bewafai
Khwab me woh tumhi ko le ati
Yeh tum tum me main gum ho gayi
Kisko dosh du
dil ko ya tum ko?
Par sochti hu dubara
Yeh dil bechara kya kare
Usko bhi to tum bin karar nahin ati
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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2006, 05:13:17 AM » |
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bahut khub likha aapne............  |
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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2006, 05:14:45 AM » |
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thanx Ranjana ji
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2006, 05:48:59 AM » |
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tum hi to mere jeewan ka sarr ho ....
tum hi tum mera sansarr ho ......
her waqt bus dharakta hai mera dil tumhare liye ....
tum hi mera pehla or aakhri pyar ho ........
nice one miss/mr tumpa (i dont know who u r ...)
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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2006, 05:50:52 AM » |
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Wah wah wah wah
Thanx .
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2006, 06:03:27 AM » |
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GOOD ONE TUMPA... VERY NICE...
Dil ki kitaab ka panna chura le gaya koi…
aankhon se neend uda le gaya koi…
kisi ki yaad mein tadapne ki aadat nahin thi hume…
apni yaadon se tadapna sikha gaya koi…
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2006, 06:21:40 AM » |
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Thanx mrktianji.
Aap ka shayari ka jawab nahin
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2006, 06:39:32 AM » |
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Proud of ya Tumpa..Very good work..Keep it up..[/color][/size]
Good work by Tushar nd mrkotians....
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2006, 06:48:44 AM » |
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nice one miss/mr tumpa (i dont know who you r ...)
Really Good Tumpa......keep it up!!! waise tum pagal ho tushar.....her avtaar is of gurl so cant u make out that she is gurl......duh.....hahhahaa...... |
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2006, 06:51:21 AM » |
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Ya...Tushar is more interested in knowing that. :lol: :lol: :lol:
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2006, 07:11:45 AM » |
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tum bin jeevan udas udas
jaise phoolo ke anagan mein
ug aayi ho anchaii ghass..............
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«Reply #12 on: May 13, 2006, 09:05:01 AM » |
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yaar kiska pata hota hai kaun hai yaha kya koi ladka ladki wala aavtarr nahi laga sakta kya ...... laga sakta hai na issiliye mujhe jo thik laga maine puch liya ......
naam le le ker tera mai firta hu gali gali ......
ek barr to tham mera hath aa mujhe aapni baho ka sahara de de ......
k tere aanchal ki chaw me baith ker ji lunga 2 pal zindgi .....
tu aa gaye lagja mujhe zindgi me aapnebaho ka sahara de de......
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«Reply #13 on: May 13, 2006, 05:33:16 PM » |
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Excellent and slick ones..Good going all..
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2006, 08:40:30 PM » |
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Tum se lipti hui yaadein
Satati hai mujhe
ho chain kahan
na neend hai aati
Kambaqt neend bhi jab aati hai kabhi kabhi
Achcha sila deti HAI--bewafai
Khwab me woh tumhi ko le ati
Yeh tum tum me main gum ho gayi
Kisko dosh du
dil ko ya tum ko?
Par sochti hu dubara
Yeh dil bechara kya kare
Usko bhi to tum bin karar nahin ati Wah wah wah.................Kya baat hain tumpa ji... Excellent............. Good going guyz...........keep it up.... |
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