+++TUM JAB PAAS AATE HO+++ -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

honeyrose

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«Reply #15 on: February 04, 2008, 05:54:44 AM »

Bohat acha likha hai punam really sweet Usual Smile


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punam

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«Reply #16 on: February 04, 2008, 06:22:37 AM »

Thanx rose di...


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punam

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«Reply #17 on: February 04, 2008, 06:25:37 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on February 04, 2008, 05:47:30 AM

BAHUT KHOOB PUNAM..SIPMLE ANS SWEET Usual Smile

aapke pyaar mein hum bhi
chiraag-e-dil jalaa baithe hai
aapke intezaar mein
khud ko tadpa baithe hai...

khud ke dhadkano ka bhi andaaza nahi hota
dil mein sirf aapko bitha baithe hai

ab aap hi kaho,kya hoga anjaam is dil ka
jiski har saans mein koi naam saja baithe hai


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baadal102

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«Reply #18 on: February 04, 2008, 11:16:14 AM »

Aap sabhi ne bahut aacha likha hai ( sach bahut aacha)
sirf kuch lines in lines mai jodne ke liye
sorry for mistakes

Tum jab pass aate ho,
Aa ke mujh se lipat jaate ho,

Fira ke unglia mere baalo mai,
Mujhe madhosh ker jaate ho,

Kuch der chup reh ke,
Ek hansi se sab baya ker jaate ho,

Wo kehte hue dil ke baat,
Mere sine se lag jaate ho,

Mare har sapne ko,
Jaise tum poora ker jaate ho,

Mehak tumhari sanso ki,
Mere sanso ko de jaate ho,

Tum jab pass aate ho,
Aa ke mujh se lipat jaate ho!!!!!!

Baadal


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sanya310

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«Reply #19 on: February 04, 2008, 12:35:20 PM »

beautiful, punam and everyone else..
baadal aapne buhat hi acha likha hai..


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Raj-Truefriend

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«Reply #20 on: February 04, 2008, 03:22:57 PM »

bahot hi khoobsurat ahi aap ka yeh pass ane ka andaz aur jis kadar se aapne apan pyar jayaya hai paas aake woh to kabile tarif hai, yeh sab to sirf aur sirf wohi likh sakata hia ya bata sakata hai jisane sachhe dil se kisi ko chaha ho...


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Pooja

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«Reply #21 on: February 04, 2008, 03:41:07 PM »

bahoot khoob.. sabhi ne bahoot acha likha hai!!!

Tum jab paas mere atte ho
halchal si is dil mai muchate ho
kapta hai yah badan mera
dekh mujhe tum aor chanchal ho jaate ho

dekhati rahti hu tujhe aor socha karu
kyun mujhse itna pyar tum kar jaate ho
man mai sawal uthate hai, kaya mujh mai dekha tumne
her ek pal mera jo, itani khushio se bhar jaate ho

Tum jab bhi milane mujhko atte ho
hazar soche mujhe de jaate ho
her pal dil chahe rahu teri hi baho main
bin kahe meri har baat jaan jaate ho....

Tum jab bhi pass mere atte ho....


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«Reply #22 on: February 05, 2008, 07:09:06 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 04, 2008, 03:41:07 PM

BAHUT KHOOB POOJA...


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Re: +++TUM JAB PAAS AATE HO+++

«Reply #23 on: February 05, 2008, 07:18:29 AM »

try ki kuch likhne reply me...

Tere chahton ka hua hai aaj mujh pe ye asar
khud ko na raha khud ki khabar

ghayal kar diya dil ko kuch istarah
tere siwa aur kuch ab aata nahi nazar

meri nind mera chain churane wale
tujhe hi dhoondti rehti hai yeh nazar

jab paas nahi hote ho
tera hi intezaar hota hai mujhe hamesha
kya hai tujhe bhi iss baat ki khabar...
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BAHUT KHOOB PUNAM...EK KOSHISH KUCH KEHNE KI...

KYA KAHOON APNA HAAL-E-DIL BHI HAI
KUCH IS TARAH...
TEZ BARSAATO MEIN SAMUNDARO SE
LEHRE UTH THI HAI JIS TARAH...

AAP JAB HUMSE MILE TO KUCH YUH LAGA
JAISE PHOOL BAHARO SE MILTI HAI JIS TARAH...

SUNA KARTE TH HUM KAHANIYON MEIN ISHQ KE BAARE MEIN,
AB MILE HAI ISHQ SE TO EK PAL AISA LAGA
JAISE BICHDE THE JANAM JANAM SE ISHQ SE JIS TARAH...

SHUKRIYA KAISE ADA KAROON AAPKA________
AAPSE MILKE YEH EHSAAS HUA KE,
JISM SE ROOH MILI HAI JIS TARAH....

AAPSE MILKAR MUJHE DUNIYA MIL GAHYI HAI JIS TARAH....


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punam

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«Reply #24 on: February 05, 2008, 07:38:36 AM »

thanx baadal ji..bahot acha likha aapne..
thanx sanya..
thanx pooja di...bahot aha likha aap ne...

Thanx khwaish ji..Bahot khoob ..really bahot acha likha aapne..


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punam

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«Reply #25 on: February 05, 2008, 07:39:10 AM »

woh lamha jiske liye
umar bhar taraste rahe
jo beete tumhare paas
ab bhi hai mere paas...

tumhare lafzon ne humpe
kar diya kuch jadu aisa
tumhare paas bite pal
aankhon me yun theher gaya...

woh ek lamha jis ko
hum bhulana paye
jo beete tumhare pass
un lamho ke ehsash
ab bhi hai mere paas...


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honeyrose

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«Reply #26 on: February 05, 2008, 09:43:18 AM »

Bohat acha likha hai punam dear

Dil mein ek chingaari sey jal utha hai..
Jab tum paas aate ho..

Aab iss mohabatt ke saath hum jee the hai..
Teri tasveer dil-o-jaan sey lagaya karthe hai.

Aap durr rehkar bhi kareeb hote hain..
Iss pyaar ka diya hai joh roz jalate rahe the hai..


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baadal102

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«Reply #27 on: February 06, 2008, 12:14:46 PM »

bahoot aacha likha hai sabhi ne

Jab tum mere pass aate ho,
Tadap is dil ko de jaate ho,

Ta-umar tumhe bahon mai rakhu,
Yahi ahsaas de jaate ho,

Saja ke apne hathon se,
Dil mai hamesha rakhu,

Maang mai tere sitare,
Chehre pe khud ko khila du,

Kaapte hue badan ko tere,
Pyar se apne garma du,

Jab tum mare pass aate ho,
Ek Ehsaas ki meethe khusboo chor jaate ho......

Baadal


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Pooja

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«Reply #28 on: February 06, 2008, 06:11:17 PM »

shukaria dosto..

bahoot khoob khwaish, Punam, honey and baadal ji!!! bahoot hi acha likha hai app sabne!!!

Jab bhi tum mere pass atte ho
hai koi sirf mera, yah ehsaas dilate ho

Intzaar mai teri beet jaata hai na jane waqt kitna
apni ek muskurahat se karaar de jaate ho

jhuk jaati hai jab meri ankhia teri baato se
le hatho main mera chehra, kaise mujhe samjhate ho

Pal ruk jaaye bas wahin tere mere milan ka
her baar yah kah kar, mere aor kareeb aa jaate ho

Jab bhi tum mere pass atte ho
hai koi sirf mera, yah ehsaas dilate ho....


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honeyrose

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«Reply #29 on: February 06, 2008, 07:52:11 PM »

very nice pooja bohat khoob likha hai aapne Usual Smile


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