Jab bi Tum paas aate ho ................(SONA)

by neelgold on October 05, 2010, 01:05:07 AM
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Jab bi Tum pass aate ho......
Darkane badh jati hai
Hum madhosh ho jate hai
Aur sans ruk si jati hai
Jab bi tum pass aate ho.........

Har sham sunhari ho jati hai
Hum kahin kho se jate hai
Aur bagban gul khilati hai
Jab bi Tum paas aate ho .......

Yeh fiza bi geet gaati hai
Nagame suhane ho jate hai
Aur yeh mehfil rangeen ho jati hai
Jab bi Tum paas aate ho...........

Yeh ankh juk si jati hai
Hum tere hue jate hai
Aur har darkan tham si jati hai
Jab bi tum pass aate ho .....................


..........SONA..............
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2010, 01:56:21 AM »
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wah ji wah aaj to mohabbat ki baarish ho rahi hai USA mein... har taraf bas pyar hi pyar nazar aata hai.. aur ye pyaar bhare geet likhwa raha hai aapse.... sach mazaa aa gaya padh ke.. "Kamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal"....  mujhe lagta nahi ki kamaal kehne k baad kuch aur kehne ki jarurat hai iske taarif me.... really superb and full of love...

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haan ye sach hai,
kuch aisa ho jaata hai,
dil kahin kho jaata hai,
hosh kahin kho jaata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil tadap ke reh jaata hai,
aur paas tumhe bulaata hai,
tum me dooba chalaa jata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil ye gudgudaata hai,
honth gungunaata hai,
dil machal sa jata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil humein samjhaata hai,
pyaar se bulaata hai,
tum hamesha meri ho,
ye humein bataata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

haan jab bhi tum paas aate ho,
humein humse churaake le jaate ho....
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2010, 02:34:50 AM »
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Kya kehe USA ka musum  vakiye aaj kaal kafi acha hai ...

Its really nyc hre.......... i knoe this is very unusal frm my syd ... i think 1st tym i trid dis kinda of .... bt ur vry much ryt ...... weathr is really cool hre ....

Tumhara reply kaal doongi .. hv to sleep ... hv 2 go to office 2more.......... vll raply ltr .......

Bt rely vry vry nyc ........ bhtu hi acha likha ...

Thnx 4 ur real quick reply ......

SONA

wah ji wah aaj to mohabbat ki baarish ho rahi hai USA mein... har taraf bas pyar hi pyar nazar aata hai.. aur ye pyaar bhare geet likhwa raha hai aapse.... sach mazaa aa gaya padh ke.. "Kamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal"....  mujhe lagta nahi ki kamaal kehne k baad kuch aur kehne ki jarurat hai iske taarif me.... really superb and full of love...

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haan ye sach hai,
kuch aisa ho jaata hai,
dil kahin kho jaata hai,
hosh kahin kho jaata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil tadap ke reh jaata hai,
aur paas tumhe bulaata hai,
tum me dooba chalaa jata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil ye gudgudaata hai,
honth gungunaata hai,
dil machal sa jata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil humein samjhaata hai,
pyaar se bulaata hai,
tum hamesha meri ho,
ye humein bataata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

haan jab bhi tum paas aate ho,
humein humse churaake le jaate ho....
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2010, 10:21:58 AM »
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bas yunhi haste rahiye muskuraate rahiye.. yahi achcha lagta hai... frastu frastu achche nahi lagte aap... thanks for your compliments... aapke achche mood ne iski khoobsurti aur bhi badha di hai...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2010, 10:26:25 AM »
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Jab bi Tum pass aate ho......
Darkane badh jati hai
Hum madhosh ho jate hai
Aur sans ruk si jati hai
Jab bi tum pass aate ho.........

Har sham sunhari ho jati hai
Hum kahin kho se jate hai
Aur bagban gul khilati hai
Jab bi Tum paas aate ho .......

Yeh fiza bi geet gaati hai
Nagame suhane ho jate hai
Aur yeh mehfil rangeen ho jati hai
Jab bi Tum paas aate ho...........

Yeh ankh juk si jati hai
Hum tere hue jate hai
Aur har darkan tham si jati hai
Jab bi tum pass aate ho .....................


..........SONA..............

bht mast likha hai tumne sona...romantic romantic...wow maza aagaya padhke.....pehli bar tumhara iss tarah ka koi kalaam padha hai..mastam hai ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2010, 10:27:17 AM »
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sona jiii bahut khoob likha h apne~
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2010, 10:27:32 AM »
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wah ji wah aaj to mohabbat ki baarish ho rahi hai USA mein... har taraf bas pyar hi pyar nazar aata hai.. aur ye pyaar bhare geet likhwa raha hai aapse.... sach mazaa aa gaya padh ke.. "Kamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal"....  mujhe lagta nahi ki kamaal kehne k baad kuch aur kehne ki jarurat hai iske taarif me.... really superb and full of love...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

haan ye sach hai,
kuch aisa ho jaata hai,
dil kahin kho jaata hai,
hosh kahin kho jaata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil tadap ke reh jaata hai,
aur paas tumhe bulaata hai,
tum me dooba chalaa jata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil ye gudgudaata hai,
honth gungunaata hai,
dil machal sa jata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

dil humein samjhaata hai,
pyaar se bulaata hai,
tum hamesha meri ho,
ye humein bataata hai,
jab bhi tum paas aate ho,

haan jab bhi tum paas aate ho,
humein humse churaake le jaate ho....

chha gaye tum kapil iss me to..bht hi mastammmmmmmmmm re Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2010, 10:29:21 AM »
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thank u thank u thank u sooooooooooooooo much reeeeeeeeeee.........!!!!!

chha gaye tum kapil iss me to..bht hi mastammmmmmmmmm re Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2010, 02:22:03 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      NEELGOLD JI....

JAB BHI TUM PAAS AATE HO
NA JAANE KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI
TAN MANN ME AAG LAG JAATI HAI
DIL KI PYAAS BAD JAATI HAI...
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2010, 06:26:01 PM »
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Thnx a lot kapil bt u knoe me i m alwyz smiling ..... i nvr b frustu..........

I alwys tll othr ppl also to smile .....

Thnx anywyz...

bas yunhi haste rahiye muskuraate rahiye.. yahi achcha lagta hai... frastu frastu achche nahi lagte aap... thanks for your compliments... aapke achche mood ne iski khoobsurti aur bhi badha di hai...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2010, 06:28:39 PM »
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Thnx Kasak ...... ur ryt .. dis is d very 1st  tym i wrote sumthing lyk tht ... Shyd aap  logon ka asar ho gaya ... u r doing relly fantastic work ..... May b 'coz of tht ..

Thanx for ur compliments ......

Be happy alwyz

bht mast likha hai tumne sona...romantic romantic...wow maza aagaya padhke.....pehli bar tumhara iss tarah ka koi kalaam padha hai..mastam hai ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2010, 06:29:41 PM »
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ABhi .......Thanx a lot .......

Be happy alwyz..

sona jiii bahut khoob likha h apne~
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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2010, 06:31:46 PM »
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Cara ji ..... Tons of thnx ....

U also said very very vll....

Bhut khoob ji
WAH KYA BAAT HAI      NEELGOLD JI....

JAB BHI TUM PAAS AATE HO
NA JAANE KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI
TAN MANN ME AAG LAG JAATI HAI
DIL KI PYAAS BAD JAATI HAI...
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