Tum Jaisa Hamsafar na Hoga ..!!

by deepika_divya on April 11, 2011, 01:07:55 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 11, 2011, 03:57:44 PM »
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wowwwww…………
kya itna acha dil aur itni mohbt ho skti h aaj ke date me kisi ke pass!!!!

ho bi skta he, ya shayd nahi
inn ehsaason ko, chupa lo seeney me kahin

raat ka tha jo sapna
kab hua kisi ka apna!!

aankh khuli, sapney toote
bhagwaan kare aapse na hakikat roothe!!!

achi peskash ji Usual SmileUsual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: April 11, 2011, 04:14:01 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on April 11, 2011, 03:28:17 PM
Divya Ji Kya Kahun...? Lafz Nahi Hai mere Paas aapki is Rachna Ke liye.. Dil Ko Parto Ko Chhoo gai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Itni Mohabbat Hai aapki is Nazm ki Bassss... Koi Samete Bhi to kaise samete...? Bahut Lajawab peshkash.. Applause Applause



Hisaab Dena To Nahi Aata Mujhe Mohabbat Lekin,
Ek Haal Gumsum Sa Dil Ka Phir Bhi Bayan Karta Hoon....
Yeh Jo Dharkane, Seene Me Shor Machaati Hain Mere,
Inhe Roz Teri Yaadon Se, Aabaad Main Karta Hoon.....

Main Yeh To Nahi Kahata, Tum Sirf Mere Ho Sanam,
Phir Bhi Apna Banaaye Rakhne Ki Tamanna Hai Tumko....
Luta Chuka Hoon Ishq Apna Tumpe Is Qadar Kuch Apna,
Ke Ab Lamha Lamha Khone Se Bhi Darta Hoon Tumko......

Kyun Hote Ho Ruswa, Abhi To Mulaaqaat Ek Baaqi Hai,
Tere Pahaloo Me Bitaani Hai Jo, Wo Raat Abhi Baaqi Hai....
Kuch Na Kahana Us Raat, Jab Baahon Me Meri Samaaogi,
Mohabbat Me Pighal Jaane Ki Ek Tamanna Abhi Baaqi Hai......

Tumhe Hamnasheen Kahun Ya Dilruba, Yeh Poochta Hai Dil,
Kaha To Diya Aaj Isko Mohabbat Me Yeh Lafz Bhi Kam Hoga....
Darza Kya Du Main Tumhe, Tum To Zindgi Ho Is "Mann" Ki,
Sab Hoga Zindgi Me Mere, Bas "Tum Jaisa Humsafar Na Hoga".....!!!!



**~** Mann **~**


Thank you so much Vicky.. Main Shayad bayaan nahi kar sakti ya byaan kar nahi paa rahi hun.. Ki Kitni ... Khoobsoorati se Tumne In kaale Aksaro ko Ak Buniyaad di  hai Jo Seede Dil pe ja kar lagi hai.. Bahoot Umda likha hai .. Simple fantastic ...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


HIsaab Nahi Manga Maine Tumse ,Na Mangana Chahati Hun
Teri Dil mein Na Sahi, Teri yaado Me jagah pana Chahati Hun !!

Mana Ke Waqt Nahi Hai , Ab Sawalo Ke Jawaab Doondane ka
Isliye Apne Har Sawaal Ko Teri Chahat mein Doobana Chahati Hun !!

Taki Reh Na Jaaye Mann mein Ko Koi Kalish , Tujhe Paane Ki
Isliye Ankhen band kar Bas Teri Bahoon Mein  Sona chahti hun !!!


Divya
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«Reply #17 on: April 11, 2011, 04:15:22 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on April 11, 2011, 03:57:44 PM
wowwwww…………
kya itna acha dil aur itni mohbt ho skti h aaj ke date me kisi ke pass!!!!

ho bi skta he, ya shayd nahi
inn ehsaason ko, chupa lo seeney me kahin

raat ka tha jo sapna
kab hua kisi ka apna!!

aankh khuli, sapney toote
bhagwaan kare aapse na hakikat roothe!!!

achi peskash ji Usual SmileUsual Smile


Bahoot Bahoot aur Tahe Dil se Shukriyaa Sarfira Ji
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«Reply #18 on: April 11, 2011, 04:17:18 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 11, 2011, 04:14:01 PM
Thank you so much Vicky.. Main Shayad bayaan nahi kar sakti ya byaan kar nahi paa rahi hun.. Ki Kitni ... Khoobsoorati se Tumne In kaale Aksaro ko Ak Buniyaad di  hai Jo Seede Dil pe ja kar lagi hai.. Bahoot Umda likha hai .. Simple fantastic ...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


HIsaab Nahi Manga Maine Tumse ,Na Mangana Chahati Hun
Teri Dil mein Na Sahi, Teri yaado Me jagah pana Chahati Hun !!

Mana Ke Waqt Nahi Hai , Ab Sawalo Ke Jawaab Doondane ka
Isliye Apne Har Sawaal Ko Teri Chahat mein Doobana Chahati Hun !!

Taki Reh Na Jaaye Mann mein Ko Koi Kalish , Tujhe Paane Ki
Isliye Ankhen band kar Bas Teri Bahoon Mein  Sona chahti hun !!!


Divya


Bahut Bahut Khoob Sophi..

As Usual beautiful Emotions.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: April 11, 2011, 04:21:10 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 11, 2011, 04:17:18 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sophi..

As Usual beautiful Emotions.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




Thank you Soooooooooooo Much Khawish Ji.. for your Precious time and comment !!!
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«Reply #20 on: April 11, 2011, 04:51:50 PM »
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Waah divya ji apke kalaam ka har lafz sidha dil pe asar kar gya bahut bahut aur bahut hi khoob likha hai jii.aur mann ji ne bhi apka behad khubsurat alfazo se sath diya,aaj apka ye thread padh k yu laga jaise yo ka khoya hua vo pehle wala sama laut aaya ho,mehfil mein jaan si aa gyi aaj ho sake tou yu hi yoindia pe regular aate rahiye... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #21 on: April 12, 2011, 03:15:08 AM »
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Awesome !!! Divya Ji !

Simple .. Sweet ... & Very Touching Lines .... !

Very Nice Poetry ... Dil se Daad ...  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhti rahen aur aati rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #22 on: April 12, 2011, 12:24:41 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 11, 2011, 04:51:50 PM
Waah divya ji apke kalaam ka har lafz sidha dil pe asar kar gya bahut bahut aur bahut hi khoob likha hai jii.aur mann ji ne bhi apka behad khubsurat alfazo se sath diya,aaj apka ye thread padh k yu laga jaise yo ka khoya hua vo pehle wala sama laut aaya ho,mehfil mein jaan si aa gyi aaj ho sake tou yu hi yoindia pe regular aate rahiye... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Thank you so much ,... I am glad to see ur valuable Comments in my poetry.. Thank you soooo Much Geet.. I love to see u guys appreciation.. that really encourages me a lot...

Thank you so much !!
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«Reply #23 on: April 12, 2011, 12:32:14 PM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on April 12, 2011, 03:15:08 AM
Awesome !!! Divya Ji !

Simple .. Sweet ... & Very Touching Lines .... !

Very Nice Poetry ... Dil se Daad ...  Applause Applause Applause

aise hi likhti rahen aur aati rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !


I love to see ur comments Naresh Ji.. Its my pleasure.. Thank you so so much for all ur lovely comments and Ur Time..

Thank you soooooooooooooooo much !!
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«Reply #24 on: April 12, 2011, 02:27:07 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 11, 2011, 03:52:16 PM
Wow!!!! Just beautiful..

Bahut bhaut Khoob Mannji..awesome lines...

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Khwish Bhai Aapka Tahe Dil Se Behad Shukriya..  notworthy notworthy



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«Reply #25 on: April 12, 2011, 02:29:15 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on April 11, 2011, 04:51:50 PM
Waah divya ji apke kalaam ka har lafz sidha dil pe asar kar gya bahut bahut aur bahut hi khoob likha hai jii.aur mann ji ne bhi apka behad khubsurat alfazo se sath diya,aaj apka ye thread padh k yu laga jaise yo ka khoya hua vo pehle wala sama laut aaya ho,mehfil mein jaan si aa gyi aaj ho sake tou yu hi yoindia pe regular aate rahiye... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geet Ji Is Hausla Afzaai Ka.. Yeh To Divya Ji Ki Qalam Ka Qamaal Hai jo Likhne Ko Majboor Kar gaya..  notworthy notworthy



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #26 on: April 12, 2011, 02:42:45 PM »
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woooooooooooooo excellent thread ...maine miss kar diya tha kal....aaj nazar padi....
divya its beautiful..... creation of the swwetest feeling of love  and romance.......ufffffff not getting enough words to describe my feelings ..its just too good yaar........

and koyal tumhari lines bhi zabardast rahi yaar ...4 lines but very cute and sweet...

mann ji..aap to aap hi ho...divya ki poem dil to aapka reply dhadkan...kya sama ban gaya hai....do continue this post ....
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«Reply #27 on: April 12, 2011, 03:07:58 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 11, 2011, 04:14:01 PM
Thank you so much Vicky.. Main Shayad bayaan nahi kar sakti ya byaan kar nahi paa rahi hun.. Ki Kitni ... Khoobsoorati se Tumne In kaale Aksaro ko Ak Buniyaad di  hai Jo Seede Dil pe ja kar lagi hai.. Bahoot Umda likha hai .. Simple fantastic ...  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


HIsaab Nahi Manga Maine Tumse ,Na Mangana Chahati Hun
Teri Dil mein Na Sahi, Teri yaado Me jagah pana Chahati Hun !!

Mana Ke Waqt Nahi Hai , Ab Sawalo Ke Jawaab Doondane ka
Isliye Apne Har Sawaal Ko Teri Chahat mein Doobana Chahati Hun !!

Taki Reh Na Jaaye Mann mein Ko Koi Kalish , Tujhe Paane Ki
Isliye Ankhen band kar Bas Teri Bahoon Mein  Sona chahti hun !!!


Divya


Divya Ji.. Jawab Dena Ek Alag Baat hai Aur Jawab Me Ehasaas Bhar dena Alag Baat... Seedhe dil Par Lage hain aapke Yeh alfaaz.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Aisa laga Jaise sab Kuch Ek Kahani sa Ho.. Applause Applause



Chaahat Hai Kuch Der Sone Ki Teri Baahon Ke Ghere Me,
Zulfon Me Ke Saaye Me Kuch Der Madhosh Sa Rahane De....
Ek Umar Guzaar Dena Chaahta Hoon Pal Bhar Ke Sath Me,
Sath Tere Mohabbat Ke Kuch Lamhaat Mujhe Jee Lene De...

Mujhe Aur Kuch Na Chaahiye Siwaa Iske E-Mere Sanam,
Main To Parwaana Hoon Ek Din Jal Ke Khaak Ho jaaunga....
Jal Jaane Ke Pahale Mujhse Ek Waada Karna Hoga Tumhe,
Intzaar Karogi Mera Jab Jab Main Tumse Milne Ko Aaunga...!!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #28 on: April 12, 2011, 03:11:25 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on April 12, 2011, 02:42:45 PM
woooooooooooooo excellent thread ...maine miss kar diya tha kal....aaj nazar padi....
divya its beautiful..... creation of the swwetest feeling of love  and romance.......ufffffff not getting enough words to describe my feelings ..its just too good yaar........

and koyal tumhari lines bhi zabardast rahi yaar ...4 lines but very cute and sweet...

mann ji..aap to aap hi ho...divya ki poem dil to aapka reply dhadkan...kya sama ban gaya hai....do continue this post ....
Anamika ji Aapki Taareef To apne aapne Me Shayari Hoti hai.. Par Wah wah Kahunga to Zyada Ho jayega.. Hahaha.. Ab Divya Ji Ki is khubsoorat Poem Ka Gar Jawab na Dete To is Thread Ke Sath beimaani hoti..!! Isliye bas likhte Chale gaye..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Behad Shukriya aapka..  notworthy notworthy




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«Reply #29 on: April 12, 2011, 03:19:45 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on April 12, 2011, 02:42:45 PM
woooooooooooooo excellent thread ...maine miss kar diya tha kal....aaj nazar padi....
divya its beautiful..... creation of the swwetest feeling of love  and romance.......ufffffff not getting enough words to describe my feelings ..its just too good yaar........

and koyal tumhari lines bhi zabardast rahi yaar ...4 lines but very cute and sweet...

mann ji..aap to aap hi ho...divya ki poem dil to aapka reply dhadkan...kya sama ban gaya hai....do continue this post ....


Thank you soo sooo sooo much Anamika ji.. AApne tho Mujhe Rula hi diya.. Itni saari tareefe... baap re.. mera Dil tho Garden Garden Ho Gaya.. kasam se,... Thank you soooooooooooooooooo Much,.,., yuhin saath dete Rahiyega,,,
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