Tum Jaisa Hamsafar na Hoga ..!!

by deepika_divya on April 11, 2011, 01:07:55 PM
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Teri nazar mein,teri chahat mein,
ak ankahi pyaari Baat Nazar aati hai
Ke  shayad Kuch tho hai Jo tujhme Apni,
Zindgai ki ak shuruaat nazar aati hai

Tu jo hota hai kareeb Mere Yaara
Jo saari duniya ko bula deti hun Main
Tujhme sama kar , bahoon Mein bharke
Apni Umeedo ko Hawa de jaati hun Main

Rokne Ki Koshish karti hun Kudko main
Fir Teri Ankhon mea Doob si Jaati Hun
kehne ko hota hai bahoot Kuch Dil mein
Teri Dadkhan sunne ko Kamosh Ho jati hun

lagta hai Bas Tu Hi Sab Kuch Hai Mera
TU nahi Zindgai Viraan Si hoti Meri'
Kaash ke Kuch Aisa Hota mere "Jaana"
Teri Hasi  se Saji Hoti yea Duniya Meri

Par Khawab Tho Khawab hote hai na "JAANA"
Jo Neend Toot Jaane par Kho jaate hai
De kar ak Unsulji si Umeed Mann mein
Aankhon Ko Fir se Nam Kar Jaate hai

Iss Nam Ankhon Mein tu hi Khushi Hoga
jab Tera Ashiyaana Mera Ashiyaana Hoga
WaQt Jab Rukkar Kahega..Hum Dono Se
Tum Jaisa Hamsafar Duniyan mein Koi Na Hoga !!


!! Divya !!
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2011, 01:21:55 PM »
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aapki post pahli baq parhne ka mauka mila…
wo bhi hath se gaya…
me photo post nai parh sakta mobile par…
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2011, 01:23:13 PM »
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aapki post pahli baq parhne ka mauka mila…
wo bhi hath se gaya…
me photo post nai parh sakta mobile par…
sad5


Awww.. Now You Can read ... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2011, 01:27:50 PM »
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EK DUM MAST POEM HAI dIVYA-DI AAPKI... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil se maango Khawaaishein poori huaa karti hain
Veeraano main bhee sunder phool khila karte hain

Khawaab dekhna tu naa chhodnaa kabhee meri sakhee
Teraa humsafar bhee hai tere aas-paas he kaheein



!! Divya !!
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2011, 01:34:27 PM »
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Teri nazar mein,teri chahat mein,
ak ankahi pyaari Baat Nazar aati hai
Ke  shayad Kuch tho hai Jo tujhme Apni,
Zindgai ki ak shuruaat nazar aati hai

Tu jo hota hai kareeb Mere Yaara
Jo saari duniya ko bula deti hun Main
Tujhme sama kar , bahoon Mein bharke
Apni Umeedo ko Hawa de jaati hun Main

Rokne Ki Koshish karti hun Kudko main
Fir Teri Ankhon mea Doob si Jaati Hun
kehne ko hota hai bahoot Kuch Dil mein
Teri Dadkhan sunne ko Kamosh Ho jati hun

lagta hai Bas Tu Hi Sab Kuch Hai Mera
TU nahi Zindgai Viraan Si hoti Meri'
Kaash ke Kuch Aisa Hota mere "Jaana"
Teri Hasi  se Saji Hoti yea Duniya Meri

Par Khawab Tho Khawab hote hai na "JAANA"
Jo Neend Toot Jaane par Kho jaate hai
De kar ak Unsulji si Umeed Mann mein
Aankhon Ko Fir se Nam Kar Jaate hai

Iss Nam Ankhon Mein tu hi Khushi Hoga
jab Tera Ashiyaana Mera Ashiyaana Hoga
WaQt Jab Rukkar Kahega..Hum Dono Se
Tum Jaisa Hamsafar Duniyan mein Koi Na Hoga !!


!! Divya !!

Wow!!!!!! Beautiful Emotions!!!

Har Lafz Dil Se Nikla Hua..Padhte-Padhte ek sama Sa Ban Gaya..

Sophi.Toooooooooo Gooood!!!

Par bahut Time Baad Aapne Kuch likha Hai Uski Aapko saza Milni Chaahiye.. tongue3

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2011, 01:42:27 PM »
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EK DUM MAST POEM HAI dIVYA-DI AAPKI... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Dil se maango Khawaaishein poori huaa karti hain
Veeraano main bhee sunder phool khila karte hain

Khawaab dekhna tu naa chhodnaa kabhee meri sakhee
Teraa humsafar bhee hai tere aas-paas he kaheein



Thank you So Much Sweetheart... Love U see ur first Comment...its really made me smile.. Thank You so much...

And tumne Bhi Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Good One !!
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2011, 01:45:01 PM »
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Wow!!!!!! Beautiful Emotions!!!

Har Lafz Dil Se Nikla Hua..Padhte-Padhte ek sama Sa Ban Gaya..

Sophi.Toooooooooo Gooood!!!

Par bahut Time Baad Aapne Kuch likha Hai Uski Aapko saza Milni Chaahiye.. tongue3

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




Bahoot Bahoot Shukriyaa Khwaish ji.. Khushi Hui aapka comment dekh kar .. Thank you soooooooooo Much ..  :)yuhin saath dete rehna.. !!

 Haan bahoot Dino baad likha hai kuch... Jo saja deni hai Manjoor hai..
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2011, 01:50:44 PM »
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bht bht khoob sophi ji...
5th one is very very nice..
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«Reply #8 on: April 11, 2011, 02:07:35 PM »
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Beautiful Sophi ji..

khwabon khayalon mein har waqat bas tera hi naam mere labon pe hoga
tun bin mere zindagi ka safar nahin hoga "Tum jaisa hamsafar na hoga"
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«Reply #9 on: April 11, 2011, 02:46:38 PM »
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sophi ji…mamaskar!!
sabse pehle apka sujriya ji…aapne meri baat maani…thanx…

aapki inn sundar zazbato aur mohbt ke pyare ehsaas ko parh ke dil khus hua…

wese aapka title itna acha laga ki parhne ka dil hua aur na parh saka to kah dia.…

bina parhe ek reply bhi likh betha tha bad me likhunga kabi…
abhi yahi kahunga ki aap jese likhnewale ho to ruuh bhi alfazo me utar ayen…ye ehsas o zazbat chij hi kya hain…

dil se daad aur bht saari duayen aapko.…
khus rahiye…
sukriya ji
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2011, 03:28:17 PM »
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Divya Ji Kya Kahun...? Lafz Nahi Hai mere Paas aapki is Rachna Ke liye.. Dil Ko Parto Ko Chhoo gai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Itni Mohabbat Hai aapki is Nazm ki Bassss... Koi Samete Bhi to kaise samete...? Bahut Lajawab peshkash.. Applause Applause



Hisaab Dena To Nahi Aata Mujhe Mohabbat Ka Lekin,
Ek Haal Gumsum Sa Dil Ka Phir Bhi Bayan Karta Hoon....
Yeh Jo Dharkane, Seene Me Shor Machaati Hain Mere,
Inhe Roz Teri Yaadon Se, Aabaad Main Karta Hoon.....

Main Yeh To Nahi Kahata, Tum Sirf Mere Ho Sanam,
Phir Bhi Apna Banaaye Rakhne Ki Tamanna Hai Tumko....
Luta Chuka Hoon Ishq Apna Tumpe Is Qadar Kuch Apna,
Ke Ab Lamha Lamha Khone Se Bhi Darta Hoon Tumko......

Kyun Hote Ho Ruswa, Abhi To Mulaaqaat Ek Baaqi Hai,
Tere Pahaloo Me Bitaani Hai Jo, Wo Raat Abhi Baaqi Hai....
Kuch Na Kahana Us Raat, Jab Baahon Me Meri Samaaogi,
Mohabbat Me Pighal Jaane Ki Ek Tamanna Abhi Baaqi Hai......

Tumhe Hamnasheen Kahun Ya Dilruba, Yeh Poochta Hai Dil,
Kaha To Diya Aaj Isko Mohabbat Me Yeh Lafz Bhi Kam Hoga....
Darza Kya Du Main Tumhe, Tum To Zindgi Ho Is "Mann" Ki,
Sab Hoga Zindgi Me Mere, Bas "Tum Jaisa Humsafar Na Hoga".....!!!!




**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2011, 03:49:56 PM »
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bht bht khoob sophi ji...
5th one is very very nice..



Thank You so Much Manzil e Ishq Ji.. bahoot Shukriya !!!
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2011, 03:50:55 PM »
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Beautiful Sophi ji..

khwabon khayalon mein har waqat bas tera hi naam mere labon pe hoga
tun bin mere zindagi ka safar nahin hoga "Tum jaisa hamsafar na hoga"


Thank you so Much CHS...
Nice one by u too.. ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 11, 2011, 03:52:16 PM »
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Divya Ji Kya Kahun...? Lafz Nahi Hai mere Paas aapki is Rachna Ke liye.. Dil Ko Parto Ko Chhoo gai aapki Yeh Rachna.. Itni Mohabbat Hai aapki is Nazm ki Bassss... Koi Samete Bhi to kaise samete...? Bahut Lajawab peshkash.. Applause Applause



Hisaab Dena To Nahi Aata Mujhe Mohabbat Lekin,
Ek Haal Gumsum Sa Dil Ka Phir Bhi Bayan Karta Hoon....
Yeh Jo Dharkane, Seene Me Shor Machaati Hain Mere,
Inhe Roz Teri Yaadon Se, Aabaad Main Karta Hoon.....

Main Yeh To Nahi Kahata, Tum Sirf Mere Ho Sanam,
Phir Bhi Apna Banaaye Rakhne Ki Tamanna Hai Tumko....
Luta Chuka Hoon Ishq Apna Tumpe Is Qadar Kuch Apna,
Ke Ab Lamha Lamha Khone Se Bhi Darta Hoon Tumko......

Kyun Hote Ho Ruswa, Abhi To Mulaaqaat Ek Baaqi Hai,
Tere Pahaloo Me Bitaani Hai Jo, Wo Raat Abhi Baaqi Hai....
Kuch Na Kahana Us Raat, Jab Baahon Me Meri Samaaogi,
Mohabbat Me Pighal Jaane Ki Ek Tamanna Abhi Baaqi Hai......

Tumhe Hamnasheen Kahun Ya Dilruba, Yeh Poochta Hai Dil,
Kaha To Diya Aaj Isko Mohabbat Me Yeh Lafz Bhi Kam Hoga....
Darza Kya Du Main Tumhe, Tum To Zindgi Ho Is "Mann" Ki,
Sab Hoga Zindgi Me Mere, Bas "Tum Jaisa Humsafar Na Hoga".....!!!!




**~** Mann **~**

Wow!!!! Just beautiful..

Bahut bhaut Khoob Mannji..awesome lines...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #14 on: April 11, 2011, 03:54:49 PM »
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sophi ji…mamaskar!!
sabse pehle apka sujriya ji…aapne meri baat maani…thanx…

aapki inn sundar zazbato aur mohbt ke pyare ehsaas ko parh ke dil khus hua…

wese aapka title itna acha laga ki parhne ka dil hua aur na parh saka to kah dia.…

bina parhe ek reply bhi likh betha tha bad me likhunga kabi…
abhi yahi kahunga ki aap jese likhnewale ho to ruuh bhi alfazo me utar ayen…ye ehsas o zazbat chij hi kya hain…

dil se daad aur bht saari duayen aapko.…
khus rahiye…
sukriya ji


Awww. thats a Very Lovely .. I am pleased with ur lovely Appreciation ... I am so happy that u liked it .. thank you so so so much again... !!!
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