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Vyakul mun ko milta chain
Neer na barsate yeh nain
hoti KhushiyoN ki bauchhaar
tum jo aa jate ik baar
Khankte haathoN meN kaNgan
Har mausam banta sawan
Kartee main bhi khoob siNghaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar
Dilmein uThti nayee umaNg
DhaRkan gati madhur taraNg
Man mera gaata malhar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar
Dil ka Haal sunati main
Seene se lag jati main
Mujh pe ho jata upkaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar
kitni baar bulaya tha
Ghar sau baar sajaya tha
Bun jata ghar sukh sansaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar
Apni sham sajaa letee
Ik dukhiya sukh paa letee
Tum pe kartee jaan nisaar
Tum jo aa jate ik baar
Kitne sapne TooT gaye
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KyuuN asuwan ki bahtee dhaar ?
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«Reply #2 on: June 08, 2009, 03:12:21 PM » |
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Bohat bohat khoob Nira Ati Sundar rachna...
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2009, 08:53:37 PM » |
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Waah Nira Ji..bohot khoob... bohot achcha likha hai aapne.....!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2009, 05:01:26 PM » |
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Waah Bohat Achche Nira Ji Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 05:02:45 PM » |
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So beautiful wriiten Nira ji.. kya baat hai.. superb.  |
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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 05:08:12 PM » |
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Wah wah Nira Ji bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 05:18:30 PM » |
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne Nira sis...  roja sis aapka bahut bahut shukriya adaa karti hoon nira di |
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 05:19:46 PM » |
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Bohat bohat khoob Nira Ati Sundar rachna...
sajid sahab hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya |
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 05:21:37 PM » |
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Wah Kya Baat hai Nira didi.. Behad Khubsoorat Aur Pyaar Bhari Rachna Pesh ki hai aapne.. Lafzon ko Humesha ki tarah Sunderta se Sajaaya hai Didi.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. **~** Mann **~**vickyyyyyyyy thanks tumhe pasand aayi rachna kabhi kabhi change acha lagta hai |
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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2009, 05:31:15 PM » |
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Waah Nira Ji..bohot khoob... bohot achcha likha hai aapne.....!!
celmira ji bahut bahut shukriya aapko nira |
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