...tum me sama rahi thi

by Meena on December 22, 2004, 07:10:08 PM
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raat ki jawani angrayi le rahi thi,
chandni chupke se hum pe muskura rahi thi,

dhadkane hone lagi tej ek dum se,
tanhayio me apki yaad jo aa rahi thi.

tera ikrar, tera roothna, teri pyar ki baate,
uff hum pe ek deewangi si chah rahi thi,

chupke se lipat gayi sharam mere badan se,
jab teri nazron se apna shingar kar rahi thi,

hawa ke jonke humare pas se gujar rahe te jaise
madhoshiyan pas ane ka rasta bana rahi thi,

teri bahen jo bani mere gale ki warmala,
ang ang me mere teri kushboo si bikar rahi thi,

moum jaise pigal kar tere pyar ki aag me,
mai khud se bichad kar tum me sama rahi thi,

muquambal jahan pa liya tha maine sanam tere pyar me,
dekh kar yeh asman me pyarian bhi naaz kar rahi thi.
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2004, 10:16:41 AM »
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wah wah Usual Smile
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2004, 10:39:10 AM »
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nice1 Meena :wink:
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lovebites
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2004, 10:50:27 AM »
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Bohat achey Meena......................!


Jo poochta koi kion surkh hain aaj aankhain
to aankh mal ker keh detay rat so na sakay
laakh chahoon magar ye na keh sakunga kabhi
raat ronay ki bohat khuwahish ki per ro na sakay
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2004, 10:52:04 AM »
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raat ki jawani angrayi le rahi thi,
chandni chupke se hum pe muskura rahi thi,

dhadkane hone lagi tej ek dum se,
tanhayio me apki yaad jo aa rahi thi.

tera ikrar, tera roothna, teri pyar ki baate,
uff hum pe ek deewangi si chah rahi thi,

chupke se lipat gayi sharam mere badan se,
jab teri nazron se apna shingar kar rahi thi,

hawa ke jonke humare pas se gujar rahe te jaise
madhoshiyan pas ane ka rasta bana rahi thi,

teri bahen jo bani mere gale ki warmala,
ang ang me mere teri kushboo si bikar rahi thi,

moum jaise pigal kar tere pyar ki aag me,
mai khud se bichad kar tum me sama rahi thi,

muquambal jahan pa liya tha maine sanam tere pyar me,
dekh kar yeh asman me pyarian bhi naaz kar rahi thi.



nice one
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2004, 06:00:22 PM »
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thank u dosto!

 :D
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2004, 08:05:21 PM »
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raat ki jawani angrayi le rahi thi,
chandni chupke se hum pe muskura rahi thi,

dhadkane hone lagi tej ek dum se,
tanhayio me apki yaad jo aa rahi thi.

tera ikrar, tera roothna, teri pyar ki baate,
uff hum pe ek deewangi si chah rahi thi,

chupke se lipat gayi sharam mere badan se,
jab teri nazron se apna shingar kar rahi thi,

hawa ke jonke humare pas se gujar rahe te jaise
madhoshiyan pas ane ka rasta bana rahi thi,



teri bahen jo bani mere gale ki warmala,
ang ang me mere teri kushboo si bikar rahi thi,

moum jaise pigal kar tere pyar ki aag me,
mai khud se bichad kar tum me sama rahi thi,

muquambal jahan pa liya tha maine sanam tere pyar me,
dekh kar yeh asman me pyarian bhi naaz kar rahi thi.



wow!!Bahut Khoob!Beautiful Meena ji!!! Waaaah!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: December 23, 2004, 08:06:33 PM »
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kuch likha hi nahin? :?
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #8 on: December 23, 2004, 08:07:27 PM »
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kahan par ji!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: December 23, 2004, 08:09:15 PM »
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ohhhhhhhhh likha hua hai, pehle nahin tha waise Puzzled !

shukriya meherbani ji!

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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2004, 08:11:40 PM »
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Ha! ha! ha! Koi Technical error thi ji!!!! Maine bhi Socha tha  ki nahin likha lekin thaa!!Any way!! It was really marvellous!!!!Great!!!
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«Reply #11 on: December 23, 2004, 08:13:41 PM »
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oh ok ok maine socha apke brain ka error tha  :lol:

shukriya ji!

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«Reply #12 on: December 23, 2004, 08:16:24 PM »
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main bhi hairaan thi meenaji!!
ke arunji ne kuch likha hi nahi,
soch rahi thi,jawaani mein aisi galtiyaan kar rahein hain,budape mein kya hoga inka!!!...arunji!!jus jokin!
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«Reply #13 on: December 23, 2004, 08:17:38 PM »
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main bhi hairaan thi meenaji!!
ke arunji ne kuch likha hi nahi,
soch rahi thi,jawaani mein aisi galtiyaan kar rahein hain,budape mein kya hoga inka!!!...arunji!!jus jokin!


hahaha kya pata bhudde hi ho yeh  :lol:
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«Reply #14 on: December 23, 2004, 08:18:57 PM »
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Likha to tha lekin woh poem ke beech mein aa gaya tha agar aapne padh hota dhang se to maaloom padta na ji!!!!
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