Tum, Mujhey Sneyh Do!

by abdbundeli on January 31, 2009, 08:06:21 AM
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Tum,
Mujhey sneyh do!
Maatra sneyh!!
Bas!
Aur mujhey kuchh mat do;
                      Meyrey meet!

Yah sach hai:
Mein naheen chaahtaa,
Swapn bano tum;
Aur neend sey bojhil,
Alsaayii aankhon ko, beywash kar do;
Neend na aaye!

Achchhaa ho,
Mein geet ban sakoon!
Geet,
Jisey tum, duhraaou to,
Smaran kar sako mujhey,
Nirantar!

Mujhey smaran karney key liye,
Baadhya ho chiti bhii;
Aur, wahaan bhi,
Meyree sattaa aalokit ho!!

Jab bhii gaaou,
Jo bhii gaaou,
Meet, tumhaarey mrudu adharoun par,
Meyrey prem-geet kii pankti-pankti muskaaye!
-   Aur, padhh sakoon mein,
Yuun, apnee hii kavitaa ko;
Tum mein punah prasphutit hotaa!!

              - Ram Prakash Garg ‘Ramwatiya’

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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2009, 08:13:06 AM »
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Tum,
Mujhey sneyh do!
Maatra sneyh!!
Bas!
Aur mujhey kuchh mat do;
                      Meyrey meet!

Yah sach hai:
Mein naheen chaahtaa,
Swapn bano tum;
Aur neend sey bojhil,
Alsaayii aankhon ko, beywash kar do;
Neend na aaye!

Achchhaa ho,
Mein geet ban sakoon!
Geet,
Jisey tum, duhraaou to,
Smaran kar sako mujhey,
Nirantar!

Mujhey smaran karney key liye,
Baadhya ho chiti bhii;
Aur, wahaan bhi,
Meyree sattaa aalokit ho!!

Jab bhii gaaou,
Jo bhii gaaou,
Meet, tumhaarey mrudu adharoun par,
Meyrey prem-geet kii pankti-pankti muskaaye!
-   Aur, padhh sakoon mein,
Yuun, apnee hii kavitaa ko;
Tum mein punah prasphutit hotaa!!

              - Ram Prakash Garg ‘Ramwatiya’



Wah Wah Janab Kya kahene Ap ke kalam ke apne shayad eak bath ab tak notice nahi ki hum apki kissi thread pe shayari nahi karte kyoon ke apki nazam ki respect qamushi me dena chahate hain hum aur nacheez ke paas alfaaz nahi hote ap jaise unda shayaron ke liye likhen !! Subhan Allah sahab allah apke kalamo ko izzath de !! Ameen


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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2009, 09:11:53 AM »
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Wah Wah Janab Kya kahene Ap ke kalam ke apne shayad eak bath ab tak notice nahi ki hum apki kissi thread pe shayari nahi karte kyoon ke apki nazam ki respect qamushi me dena chahate hain hum aur nacheez ke paas alfaaz nahi hote ap jaise unda shayaron ke liye likhen !! Subhan Allah sahab allah apke kalamo ko izzath de !! Ameen

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriyah adaa karney key alaawaa aur kuchh kahney key liye meyrey paas 'shabd' hi naheen hain, Qadeer bhaayi! Aap kaa yah pyaar hi to meyree doulat hai! Shukraguzaar hoon! Aap ki shaayari bhi khoob parwaan chadhh rahee hai, janaab! Mein to yuun kahiye ab 'boodhhaa' ho gayaa hoon!
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2009, 10:36:52 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Masha Allah!!, Subhan Allah!! aur kya kya kahoon iss kalam ko!!, bahut behtreen aur sach kaha hai qadeer ji ne ki aapke aage kuch likhe aisi hamari aukaat bhi nahi!!!, aur aap plz khud ko bhudha mat kahiye!!, zindagi me aksar padav aate hai aur peeri bhi ek padav, iss umar bhi aapka ye shayrana andaaj jahir karta hai ki insaan jism se bhooda ho sakta hai dil se nahi!!!..

Shally.
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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2009, 10:40:44 AM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,excellent,very beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: June 18, 2009, 12:32:32 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Masha Allah!!, Subhan Allah!! aur kya kya kahoon iss kalam ko!!, bahut behtreen aur sach kaha hai qadeer ji ne ki aapke aage kuch likhe aisi hamari aukaat bhi nahi!!!, aur aap plz khud ko bhudha mat kahiye!!, zindagi me aksar padav aate hai aur peeri bhi ek padav, iss umar bhi aapka ye shayrana andaaj jahir karta hai ki insaan jism se bhooda ho sakta hai dil se nahi!!!..

Shally.


Sundar haardik snehodgaaroun key liye haardik dhanyawaad, Shally ji!
"Haath-pairoun pai zayeefee hai kaargar; fir bhee,
 Dil-o-dimaag abhee bhee jawaan hai meyraa!"

Meyraa ye sheir shaayad aapney padhhaa nahin hai?
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2009, 12:34:48 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,excellent,very beautiful creation, Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot, Madhu ji!
                    - abd bundeli
 
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2009, 12:38:41 PM »
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Tum,
Mujhey sneyh do!
Maatra sneyh!!
Bas!
Aur mujhey kuchh mat do;
                      Meyrey meet!

Yah sach hai:
Mein naheen chaahtaa,
Swapn bano tum;
Aur neend sey bojhil,
Alsaayii aankhon ko, beywash kar do;
Neend na aaye!

Achchhaa ho,
Mein geet ban sakoon!
Geet,
Jisey tum, duhraaou to,
Smaran kar sako mujhey,
Nirantar!

Mujhey smaran karney key liye,
Baadhya ho chiti bhii;
Aur, wahaan bhi,
Meyree sattaa aalokit ho!!

Jab bhii gaaou,
Jo bhii gaaou,
Meet, tumhaarey mrudu adharoun par,
Meyrey prem-geet kii pankti-pankti muskaaye!
-   Aur, padhh sakoon mein,
Yuun, apnee hii kavitaa ko;
Tum mein punah prasphutit hotaa!!

              - Ram Prakash Garg ‘Ramwatiya’



Bohot hi sundar rachna Babu Ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2009, 01:57:49 PM »
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Bohot hi sundar rachna Babu Ji  Usual Smile

Shukriyah, Celmira bitia!
              - abd bundeli
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