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by Aryaan on September 11, 2005, 02:12:06 AM

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Aryaan

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Kaise kahoon keh kya ho tum
Chalo main bataaun Kya ho tum

Mere liye meri Duniya ho tum
Choo ke jo guzri woh Hawaa ho tum

Main ne jo Maangi, Woh Duaa ho tum
Kare Mujh ko jo Roshan, Woh Diya ho tum

Dil yeh kahe mera Jiya ho tum
Kiya main ne mehsoos woh ehsaas ho tum

Meri Nazar ki Talaash ho tum
Meri Zameen ka Aakaash ho tum

Mere Chehre ki Kashish ho tum
Mere Sitaaron ki Gardish ho tum

Meri Zindagi ka Qaraar ho tum
Main ne jo Chaha woh pyar ho tum

Mere Intezaar ki rahat ho tum
Mere dil ki Chahat ho tum

Tum ho tau yeh Duniya hai meri
Kaise kahoon keh Meri jaan ho tum


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isha_verma7

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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2005, 07:04:21 AM »

wah wah wah.......kya baat hai ji......kamaal kaar ditaa...........good one.......just GR8 work as usual........!!!!!!


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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2005, 07:44:59 AM »

Wah aryaan.....gr8 work.......bohat khoob Usual Smile

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bond

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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2005, 10:34:37 AM »

lolzzz...bahut khoob aaryan...maine bhi aissi hi ek poem/shayri li9khi kuch dino pehle ....bahut milti julti hai iss se.......jald hi post karunga......

really nice one


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bond

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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2005, 10:36:17 AM »

infact ye jyaada achhi hai.........jo tumne likhi hai......keep writing


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nikki

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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2005, 11:30:52 AM »

beautifull Aryaan ...i m a gr8 pankha of ur shayari......jab bhi likhte ho aap kamaal ka likhte ho


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Aryaan

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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2005, 06:46:21 PM »

Arey aap sabke itne pyar bhare reply dekh kar jee chahta hai keh likhta hi jaaun... Usual Smile

Thanks a lot Isha, Nidhi, Bond & Nikki(my pankha)...


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Aryaan

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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2005, 06:49:33 PM »

Quote from: "bond"

infact ye jyaada achhi hai.........jo tumne likhi hai......keep writing

Bond miyan iss baat ka faisla tau aapki poem parh kar hi ho sakta hai.. Winking

zaroor post kijiye ga... Aap bohat acha likhte hain, yaqeenan bohat achi likhi hogi.... Usual Smile


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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2005, 07:14:18 AM »

wow Aryaan bahut he badiya hamesha ki thara gr8888888888 one Usual Smile


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amit_is_always_cool

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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2005, 07:18:02 AM »

hey arayn can i ask u 1 ques
that this poem is written by u?


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Aryaan

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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2005, 12:58:26 PM »

Thank you so much Salma....


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sanya310

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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2005, 07:33:52 PM »

bohot khoob aryaan...


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tushar_4u_im

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«Reply #12 on: September 13, 2005, 04:49:32 AM »

kabhi sham dhali....kabhi subah chali,.....

kabhi pathjhar aaya ,..... kabhi barsa sawan,...

kabhi aaye gam ,..... kabhi aayi khushiya,.......

lakin jab aaye tum meri zindgi me ,..........

kabhi roye to kabhi khikhila ker hase hum,.......