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by nikki on June 02, 2006, 04:06:47 PM
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«Reply #30 on: June 06, 2006, 02:53:19 PM »
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very good ...

barsaat ki baat mat kiya karo
yeh to uljhane badhati hai
kabhi dard mein to kabhi khushi mein
saath dene chali aati hai
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«Reply #31 on: June 06, 2006, 08:20:21 PM »
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bahut khoob NIKKI JI aur MAJID BHAI....

Bhari barsaat me bheega-bheega yeh badan,
yeh zulfon se tapakti sharaab hai ya shabaab.....

dekhne wale tujhe TAJ MAHAL kahate hain,
sanam tumhari husn-e-adayen hain behisaab.....

phir bheegi palkon ko sharma ke jhukana tera,
ke tera har ek andaaz sanam, bas hai lajawab......
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«Reply #32 on: June 06, 2006, 08:30:36 PM »
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thanx n nice one Vicky ji...

abb ke agar barsi to barsaat aise barsegi
woh mere saath hoga..na yeh naceez uske intzaar mein tarsegi
uski nazdikiyon ka ehsaas karke to abhi se ghabra jaati hun
dekhein yeh barsaat kuch kamaal karti hai
aur main usse apne dil ki baat keh paati hun...
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«Reply #33 on: June 06, 2006, 10:35:35 PM »
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meri ek koshish..hope you ppl like it

khud ko tumne khuda maana
kabhi mujhko jaan na paye tum
apni hi kehte gaye-kabhi meri sun na paaye tum

apne kaam karwate gaye
kabhi mere kaam na aaye tum

khud ke gumon ki kitaab sunayi mujhe
kabhi meri udasi  padh na paaye tum

har ghadi, har pal khud ka hi socha tumne
kabhi mujhe sochne ke liye waqt na nikaal paye tum

abb to yeh aalam hai ...
tum hi tum ho
hum to gumnamiyon ke andheron mein kahin ho ke reh gaye hain gumm


Wah kya baat hai sis,its lovely,beautiful,that was really nice reading u after such a long time Usual Smile .baaki sabne bhi bohat acha likha hai.
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«Reply #34 on: June 06, 2006, 10:39:18 PM »
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thanx my dear sweet little sis...tumhari shayari padhe to zamaane ho gaye...
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«Reply #35 on: June 06, 2006, 11:02:32 PM »
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mujhe khud likhe huye hi zamana ho gaya Winking lol.

"Barson baad aaj fir dil me armaano ka diya jalaaya hai,
      chupa rakhe thhe jo ehsaas dil me,unhe aaj jagaya hai,
       na jaane kaunsi ye raah,jispe zindagi ko paaya hai,
       socha na tha jo,wo aaj mehboob bankar saamne aaya hai."
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«Reply #36 on: June 06, 2006, 11:17:14 PM »
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very good one n_y...

teri kashti ka musafir hoon  zindagi mein,
utar jaoonga tu jahan mujhse kahogi wahan,
mera pata pooch kar waqt ko barbaad na kar,
banjara hoon main toh na jane jaoonga kidhar.
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«Reply #37 on: June 06, 2006, 11:23:46 PM »
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wonderfull.....sadiyon baad padha hai tumhari shayari ko..aisa lagta hai...magar hai bilkul waisi ki waisi..superhit..hehe

woh jiske aate hi mujhe chain aa jaata hai
main uski raahon mein nazre bichaye rakhti hun

woh mujhe dekh kar kuch keh deta hai
main uski baaton mein uljhi rehti hun

usse meri haalat par hassi aati hai
main gussa karti rehti hun
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«Reply #38 on: June 06, 2006, 11:53:44 PM »
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thank u mrkotians n nikki sis,bohat hi acha likha hai aap dono ne bhi :D .
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«Reply #39 on: June 07, 2006, 04:25:17 PM »
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too Good Majid....beautifull ...thanx sweeto sis

tumne apne dil ke raaz humein keh diye kuch iss tarah se
main soch mein pad gayi hun...kya maine khoab dekha hai
ya fir yeh haqiqat hai..

tum to mujhse baat bhi nahi kar paate the
abb mujhe dil ki har baat keh dete ho
koi tumhare sapno mein aata hai
koi tumhein bhi paagal banata hai
koi jagta hai saari-2 raat
aur tumhein bhi saath jagata hai
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«Reply #40 on: June 07, 2006, 08:16:10 PM »
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thanx Majid...

tumko yaad karke to waqt guzara hai humne
jab bhi khud ko akele paaya..tumhari yaad ko pukara hai humne
tum apne kaam mein busy rehte ho
main apni duniya mein gum si ho jaati hun
jab bhi waqt milta hai...tumse milne bhaagi chali aati hun

yeh dil behaal hai kissi ke intzaar mein
abb jaana kitna maza hai pyar mein
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«Reply #41 on: June 07, 2006, 08:22:51 PM »
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Majid Ji ........  Gazal bahut achci hai ..lekin Please NOT MINE lagaya kijiye Usual Smile

Nikki Ji ... bahut khoob !!


Itni araaishe mehmaan kar li ashiyaaNe mein
Hai tere ishq ka jadu bhara tere dewane mein
Ik pal jo duur tu mujh ho jati hai dafftaan
Jaan chali jati hai meri yun hi kahi anjane mein !!
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«Reply #42 on: June 07, 2006, 08:24:03 PM »
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wonderfull once again...

khud ko kho kar tumko paaya hai
aaj mere dil ko karaar aaya hai

nahi jaanti yeh raasta kahan le jayega
magar jo bhi ho..tumhara saath to mil jayega
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«Reply #43 on: June 07, 2006, 08:32:53 PM »
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kuch likha nahi tumne Majid...Huh?
too good Humtum ji...yeh words sar ke paas se ho kar chala gaya...araaishe?Huh?

chaliye shukr hai maana to
kissi ne humein apna jaana to
abb hum bhi mohabbat karke dekhenge
jalti aag se guzar ke dekhenge
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«Reply #44 on: June 07, 2006, 08:43:52 PM »
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tussi gr8 ho..itna acha to likha..i know aapne bataya tha...its oke


Teri Umeed rahegi dil mein Marte dum takk
tu aaye to hamari khush naseebi
warna hum to roz bulate rahenge
tera dil jab takk na dhadkega pyar mein
hum roz mohabbat ki shama jalate rahenge
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