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by nikki on June 02, 2006, 04:06:47 PM

Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq > Topic: TUM

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nikki

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meri ek koshish..hope u ppl like it

khud ko tumne khuda maana
kabhi mujhko jaan na paye tum
apni hi kehte gaye-kabhi meri sun na paaye tum

apne kaam karwate gaye
kabhi mere kaam na aaye tum

khud ke gumon ki kitaab sunayi mujhe
kabhi meri udasi padh na paaye tum

har ghadi, har pal khud ka hi socha tumne
kabhi mujhe sochne ke liye waqt na nikaal paye tum

abb to yeh aalam hai ...
tum hi tum ho
hum to gumnamiyon ke andheron mein kahin ho ke reh gaye hain gumm


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Rajbir

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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2006, 04:45:54 PM »

Nikki

Superb ! Excellent ! Bravo =D> =D> =D>

Bahut he badhiya kalaam likha hai !

Keep it up !

Rajbir


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nikki

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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2006, 04:49:00 PM »

thank u Rajbir ji....


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ranjana

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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2006, 04:58:06 PM »

bahut khub Nikki.....................

tum hamse kadam kadam per milte rahe ,bicharte rahe
hum bas tere saath chalne ki chaha mein yun hi chalte rahe
reh gayi adhari hamari har baat.........
mil ke bhi ho paayi puri milan ki woh raat
tum kuch na keh ke bhi bahut kuch kehte rahe
hum khamosh reh kar bhi bahut kuch sunte rahe
bas tum hi tum mere har khalayalo mein dhalte rahe


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chitra

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«Reply #4 on: June 02, 2006, 05:37:50 PM »

Dil ko chhune wala kalaam hai nikki jee...!!

ek line bahoot hi achchhee lagee

"khud ke gumon ki kitaab sunayi mujhe
kabhi meri udasi padh na paaye tum "


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chitra

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«Reply #5 on: June 02, 2006, 05:46:57 PM »

Ranjana jee "very good"

Hum apke paas aur aap humse door jaate rahe
chah ke bhi humse kyu aap nazare churate rahe

humne gamo ko gale lagaya apke saath ke liye
kyu chhod hume akela aap naye rishte banate rahe


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atul chauchan

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«Reply #6 on: June 02, 2006, 06:31:17 PM »

This is the original creation

padke maza aa gaya nikki or chitra ko

jitna suna tha usse kahin accha hai


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RamSagar

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«Reply #7 on: June 02, 2006, 06:35:47 PM »

Bahot hi achhha likhate ho aaap saab....
Man ki bat..dilki bat ..kitane achhe shabdonme likhi hai..

bahot sahi....tum log aisahi likhate raho....
hum padneka anand dete hai........

Mohabbat tabi rang deti hai....
jab dil dilse milta hai....
lekin muskil to ye hoti hai.....
dil dilse bade muskilse milta hai...


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mrkotians

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«Reply #8 on: June 02, 2006, 06:48:55 PM »

nice one nikki.... good one ranjana...


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chitra

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«Reply #9 on: June 02, 2006, 07:01:37 PM »

Thanks friends..!!

Ramsagar jee...!!

Koi shak nahi ke dil muskil se milta hai
in raho mien gamo ka samndar bhi hota hai
hamsafar sachcha badee koshisho milta hai
tabhi to janab koi intzaar ka fal mitha hota hai


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mrkotians

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«Reply #10 on: June 02, 2006, 07:07:30 PM »

Nice post chitra... good one...

Quote from: "chitra"


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badnaam_shayar

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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2006, 09:15:22 PM »

GUd Work Chitra and Nikki


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Aryaan

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«Reply #12 on: June 03, 2006, 06:37:26 AM »

Bohat achi koshish hai Nikki...


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ranjana

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«Reply #13 on: June 03, 2006, 07:57:30 AM »

Quote from: "chitra"

shukriya Chitra................

tumhare nazdeek aate bhi kaise
tum mein aake samaate bhi kaise.
tum they jab gaaro.n ki bhaao.n mein
tumko apna banate bhi toh kaise...............