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by Ravi_Dave on July 11, 2006, 01:46:28 PM
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Tere baal jese reshmi ghani chaon aur nain chamakte sitarein,
tere honth jaise mehakta gool jinse amrit chalakta hain,
kuch aise teri aadein jinko dekh ke har pal dil machalta hain,

Teri awaaz shairana ghazal jise dil baar baar sunnaa chahta hain,
aur haath ek khilta kamal jisse swarg savarta hain,
humari kya khatta hain tere aane se to mausam bhi badalta hain,

Teri aankhen anmol ghehna aur badan mehakta phool,
jawaani teri hain ek rangeen ubarta sapna,
jisko mehsoos karke samundar bhi tarasta hain!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2006, 05:03:19 PM »
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Tere baal jese reshmi ghani chaon aur nain chamakte sitarein,
tere honth jaise mehakta gool jinse amrit chalakta hain,
kuch aise teri aadein jinko dekh ke har pal dil machalta hain,

Teri awaaz shairana ghazal jise dil baar baar sunnaa chahta hain,
aur haath ek khilta kamal jisse swarg savarta hain,
humari kya khatta hain tere aane se to mausam bhi badalta hain,

Teri aankhen anmol ghehna aur badan mehakta phool,
jawaani teri hain ek rangeen ubarta sapna,
jisko mehsoos karke samundar bhi tarasta hain!!!


Wah kya baat hai Supeerbbb Ravi ji
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2006, 05:14:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob Ravi ji....

Seen U After a long time... But really amazing work by u....
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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2006, 08:34:01 AM »
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Tere baal jese reshmi ghani chaon aur nain chamakte sitarein,
tere honth jaise mehakta gool jinse amrit chalakta hain,
kuch aise teri aadein jinko dekh ke har pal dil machalta hain,

Teri awaaz shairana ghazal jise dil baar baar sunnaa chahta hain,
aur haath ek khilta kamal jisse swarg savarta hain,
humari kya khatta hain tere aane se to mausam bhi badalta hain,

Teri aankhen anmol ghehna aur badan mehakta phool,
jawaani teri hain ek rangeen ubarta sapna,
jisko mehsoos karke samundar bhi tarasta hain!!!



BAHUT KHUB rAVIJI
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2006, 11:04:07 AM »
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Shukhriya AaramishJi, ShikaJi n Badnaam_ShayarJi!

Ji ShikaJi abhi hi exams ki jaalo se nikala hoon ab waada hain ke likhta rahunga!

Phir se Shukhriya sabhi doston ka!
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