Tumhara Saath Ho

by poem143s on June 30, 2007, 09:38:32 AM
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Zindagi ke safar main tumhara saath ho
Har raat mere liye poonam ki raat ho
Chaand sitare bhi utar aaye jami pe us raat
Yesi jo tumhari meri mulakaat ho
Zindagi ke safar main bas tumhara saath ho
Tumhari maang pe ho mere naam ka satrangi sindoor
Har pal har kadam hathon main mere tumhara haath ho
Zindagi ke safar main tumhara saath ho
Khushiyoun ki basti main ho ek chota sa aashiyan hamara
Tumhare dil main mera pyar aur mere dil main tumhare zazbat ho
Zindagi ke safar main tumhara saath ho
Do pal pyar ke bite ek duje ke sang
Chehare pe hamare rumani ehsash aur pyar bhari baat ho
Zindagi ke safar main sirf tumhara saath ho
Na ab koi armaan hain har kashis bhi chor diyi  
Mujhe aur kaya chahiye bas tumhara jo saath ho
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2007, 10:22:49 PM »
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Bahut Khoob likha hai Sameer...
Its really very nice... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: July 01, 2007, 08:30:52 PM »
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buht acchi likhi ha.
keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: July 01, 2007, 08:55:25 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai aapne sameer ji........words selection bahut aachi hai aapki.............bus apni poems ko pesh karne ,i mean yoindia pe likhte waqt zara concentarete kijiiyega............aap ise aur bhi behter dhang se pesh kar sakte  hai ,bus zara sa post karte waqt sahi format mai taype kijiyega...........best of luck 4 nest time.
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«Reply #4 on: July 01, 2007, 09:25:20 PM »
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Zindagi ke safar main tumhara saath ho
Har raat mere liye poonam ki raat ho
Chaand sitare bhi utar aaye jami pe us raat
Yesi jo tumhari meri mulakaat ho
Zindagi ke safar main bas tumhara saath ho
Tumhari maang pe ho mere naam ka satrangi sindoor
Har pal har kadam hathon main mere tumhara haath ho
Zindagi ke safar main tumhara saath ho
Khushiyoun ki basti main ho ek chota sa aashiyan hamara
Tumhare dil main mera pyar aur mere dil main tumhare zazbat ho
Zindagi ke safar main tumhara saath ho
Do pal pyar ke bite ek duje ke sang
Chehare pe hamare rumani ehsash aur pyar bhari baat ho
Zindagi ke safar main sirf tumhara saath ho
Na ab koi armaan hain har kashis bhi chor diyi  
Mujhe aur kaya chahiye bas tumhara jo saath ho


Bahut umda likha hai aapne.... Keep up
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