Tumhare Aane Ki Aas Mein..!!.......Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on July 06, 2012, 12:58:27 PM
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Tumhare Aane Ki Aas Mein Barso Intezar Karti Chali Gayi,
Bas Is Ek Yakeen Par Apni Zindagi Guzar Karti Chali Gayi,
Mayusiyo Ki Na Kabhi Sajegi Mehzil Mere Dil Mein Sanam,
Milan Ke Sapne Saja Kar Apne Din Gulzaar Karti Chali Gayi..!!

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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2012, 01:30:48 PM »
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boht acha kaha apne sheerin ji
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2012, 03:08:45 PM »
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nice keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2012, 01:00:39 AM »
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waah bohot khoob likha hai shireen g !!
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bs vo akhir line mai GUZAAR ki jgha GULZAAR likh dia apne !!



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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2012, 09:09:44 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2012, 01:46:48 PM »
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Roy jee last line mein Gulzaat hi likna hai, sapne saja kar apni zindagi mein bahar karti chali gayi...yeh last line ka meaning likha hai maine...
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