TUMHE PAANEY KI KHATIR

by abeera on June 05, 2006, 09:45:12 AM
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apney aana ke khudaa ko manaaney ki khaatiR
wo khafaa ho gaya mujhey sataaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha waqt ki thokar sey bachna zaraa
kehneY laga tum na aana mujhey uthaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha mujh sey bichaR kaR tum kesey jiyo ge!
kehne laga meiN jeeyuN ga ab zamaaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha dooR jaa kaR gaR tanhaa ho gae to!
kehne laga tum na aana mujehy behlaaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha waapsi ke daR khuley rehney dena
kehneY laga kon jaata hey laot aaney ki khaatiR!

meiN ney kaha phir bhi chaaho tau palat aana tum
kehney laga nahi aaooN ga tumhey paaney ki khaatiR
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ranjana
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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2006, 09:51:11 AM »
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bahut khub Abeera ji.........bahut sundar likha aapne............
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2006, 11:41:19 AM »
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apney aana ke khudaa ko manaaney ki khaatiR
wo khafaa ho gaya mujhey sataaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha waqt ki thokar sey bachna zaraa
kehneY laga tum na aana mujhey uthaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha mujh sey bichaR kaR tum kesey jiyo ge!
kehne laga meiN jeeyuN ga ab zamaaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha dooR jaa kaR gaR tanhaa ho gae to!
kehne laga tum na aana mujehy behlaaney ki khaatiR

meiN ney kaha waapsi ke daR khuley rehney dena
kehneY laga kon jaata hey laot aaney ki khaatiR!

meiN ney kaha phir bhi chaaho tau palat aana tum
kehney laga nahi aaooN ga tumhey paaney ki khaatiR


Kya karun aap ki taarif,tarif labz bhi khud bohot sarma gaya hai
tere kalam ne dhaya hai jo gajab usse saare mehfil me ujala cha gaya hai

bohot khub abeera ji!
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abeera
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2006, 05:26:33 PM »
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thanks both of u for liking my poetry
redwhite gang bahut acha likha aap ne


DUAON KI BHIR ME EK DUA HAMARI HOGI.
JIS SE MANGI HAMNE HAR KHUSHI TUMARI HOGI
JAB BHI KOI KHUSHI MILE APKO SAMJHO
 DUA JO KABUL HUI HAMARI HOGI.
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2006, 05:31:09 PM »
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nice one abeera...

Kisi ne hum ko aazma ke dekh liya…
har pal ke liye apna bana liya…
hum kabhi na thamenge jaam-e-sharaab…
woh apni aankhon se hi pila diya…
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Aryaan
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2006, 02:20:26 AM »
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Very Nice Abeera & Nice Ones RWG & mrkotians ...
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2006, 06:26:39 AM »
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thanks both of you for liking my poetry
redwhite gang bahut acha likha aap ne


DUAON KI BHIR ME EK DUA HAMARI HOGI.
JIS SE MANGI HAMNE HAR KHUSHI TUMARI HOGI
JAB BHI KOI KHUSHI MILE APKO SAMJHO
 DUA JO KABUL HUI HAMARI HOGI.


bohot hi shukriya aap ki is dua ke liye!! :D ...Aur main kya kahu aap ke liye :!: ....baas itna hi keh sakta hu,

Jo sachcha dosti karte hai
woh kahan faryaad karte hai
Labon ko hilne nahi dete
Dil hi dil yaad karta hain :D
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abeera
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2006, 09:38:17 AM »
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ASALAM ALIKUM AAP SAB KO ,BAHUT SHUKRIYA AAP SAB KA

BADLA TERI WAFA KA DENGE BARI SAADGI SE HUM
TUM HUM SE ROOTHO GE ,AUR ZINDAGI SEY HUM


APNA BAHUT KHYAL RAKHEGA
ALLAH HAFIZ
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2006, 09:50:20 AM »
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GUd Work Abeera Usual Smile
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abeera
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2006, 09:59:08 AM »
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thanks badnaam shayer

Kabhi roke muskuraye, kabhi muskurake roye
               Teri yaad jab bhi aayee, tujhe bhula bulake roye
Ek tera hi naam tha jise hazaar baartha likha
               Jise khush hue the likhkar use mita mitake roye
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2006, 10:09:34 AM »
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bAHUT KHUBSURAT ABEERAJI... RWG KA TO JEWAB HI NEIII WAH BAHUT KHUB..
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2006, 04:07:42 PM »
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bohot achcha likha hain abeera ji aap ne,aur Anushka!!!!!!!!!! aap ke baare me main aur kya kahu! aab to aagar aap ki kalam se mere liye yeh! lafz na niklenge to hum to sohi nahi payenge raato ko,thnx FRIEND
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2006, 10:10:58 PM »
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bohot achcha likha hain abeera ji aap ne,aur Anushka!!!!!!!!!! aap ke baare me main aur kya kahu! aab to aagar aap ki kalam se mere liye yeh! lafz na niklenge to hum to sohi nahi payenge raato ko,thnx FRIEND


RWGji..... thx...what shall i say now?Huh? AM speechless... :D
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2006, 08:16:30 AM »
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bohot achcha likha hain abeera ji aap ne,aur Anushka!!!!!!!!!! aap ke baare me main aur kya kahu! aab to aagar aap ki kalam se mere liye yeh! lafz na niklenge to hum to sohi nahi payenge raato ko,thnx FRIEND


RWGji..... thx...what shall i say now?Huh? AM speechless... :D


"speechless" ..wow thnx ! Usual Smile

Khaamosh tum bhii the aur Khaamosh main bhii thaa
phir wo kaun thaa jo itanii der bol-taa rahaa!!!!!!!!!!!!
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