Tumko Chaha...

by Deepati on August 02, 2008, 05:42:46 PM
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Tumko chaha yeh meri bhool nahin
Sochna ishq ka asool nahin

Tum jise shauk se kuchaltey ho
Woh mera dil hai koi phool nahin

Door rah kar bhi tumse door nahin
Phir bhi yeh faasla kabool nahin

Nagma asaan nahin mita dena
Jang dil par laga hai dhool nahin

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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2008, 05:48:37 PM »
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Tumko chaha yeh meri bhool nahin
Sochna ishq ka asool nahin

Tum jise shauk se kuchaltey ho
Woh mera dil hai koi phool nahin

Door rah kar bhi tumse door nahin
Phir bhi yeh faasla kabool nahin

Nagma asaan nahin mita dena
Jang dil par laga hai dhool nahin


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wah ji wah deepati ji kya baat hai.....pahla sher hi bahoot wajani hai aur akhiri sher to kamal hai...
bahoot achcha likha hai..aapne

                                     
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2008, 05:55:19 PM »
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Shukriya Bekarar ji Usual Smile

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wah ji wah deepati ji kya baat hai.....pahla sher hi bahoot wajani hai aur akhiri sher to kamal hai...
bahoot achcha likha hai..aapne

                                     
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2008, 05:56:44 PM »
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Nice 1 Deepati ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2008, 06:26:51 PM »
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Sundar rachna, bahut khoob kaha. -
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2008, 03:37:14 AM »
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 Applause  like it dippti
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«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2008, 11:12:37 AM »
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very nice dear


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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2008, 07:05:55 AM »
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Tumko chaha yeh meri bhool nahin
Sochna ishq ka asool nahin

Nagma asaan nahin mita dena
Jang dil par laga hai dhool nahin

Mlle Deepati
Ce sont deux champs .. Alors, bonne mais trop court de Nice.
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2008, 07:47:49 AM »
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AAP SHER PE DHIYAN DE TUKBANDI PAR NAHI. SHER ME WAZAN PAIDA KARE BAS EK BAT YAAD RAKHE

HAIN SHAYRO KI MEHFIL HAAL-E-DIL YU BAYAA KARTE HAIN
HAR GUFTUGU KE BAAD SARE WAH WAH KARTE HAIN

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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2008, 08:14:50 AM »
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bahoot Khoob Doston,.
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«Reply #10 on: November 12, 2008, 09:19:54 PM »
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aachay sher hien Deepati ji...  Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 12, 2008, 09:21:33 PM »
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nice deepti
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