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« on: November 17, 2008, 07:18:04 AM »
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Please Bear With My Bad Habit Of Writing Long Poems..



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« Reply #1 on: November 17, 2008, 07:46:39 AM »
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pahli chaar line....dimaag se utarti hi nahi....behad khoobsurati se shabdon ko khayalon me pitoya hai aapne....
aur tumse khushiyon ki koi talab bhi nahi
meri khushi to tumse koi alag bhi nahi

wah wah...kya hi khoob andaaj-e-bayan hai...hazaaron daad....
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« Reply #2 on: November 17, 2008, 07:55:32 AM »
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its beautiful mahi  Clapping Smiley


zakhm koi mera na nazar aaye tumko
jism nahi dil main apna ghayel karti hoo
aur jo aaker chala bhi gaya mahi mera
bevajah phir q uska intezaar karti hoon
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« Reply #3 on: November 17, 2008, 08:03:38 AM »
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shikha tumhaari is post se "Khumar-e-ishq" me prateek ji ki ek rachna yaad ho aai
nahi tumse mohabbat hai
chaho to kasam le lo,
muhabbat paak hoti hai,
nahi isme gila shikwa,
mujhe tumse shikayat hai,
chaho to kasam lelo...

prateek
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« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2008, 08:15:15 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 07:46:39 AM

pahli chaar line....dimaag se utarti hi nahi....behad khoobsurati se shabdon ko khayalon me pitoya hai aapne....
aur tumse khushiyon ki koi talab bhi nahi
meri khushi to tumse koi alag bhi nahi

wah wah...kya hi khoob andaaj-e-bayan hai...hazaaron daad....

Thanku Thanku ji.. Usual Smile

Helloooo... Shocked Even More Kya kaha aapne.. "Pehli Chaar line" Matlab.. sirf pehli chaar line..  sad7 Aur chaar line ke liye hazaaron daad..  DOH

ha ha ha... Just joking .. Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Ji..  aapne padha aur comment kiya, toh apni poem ki toh life bann gayi.. Usual Smile
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« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2008, 08:19:05 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 17, 2008, 07:55:32 AM
its beautiful mahi  Clapping Smiley


zakhm koi mera na nazar aaye tumko
jism nahi dil main apna ghayel karti hoo
aur jo aaker chala bhi gaya mahi mera
bevajah phir q uska intezaar karti hoon

Ab kya kahun main...  Shocked Even More
Sajid Ji.. Aapki chaar lines humaari poori poem par bhaari pad rahi hai.. Sachhi...  Applause  Applause
Aap kam shabdon mein itni gehraai kaise le aate hai... ??

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka Sajid Ji..  notworthy, hamari is koshish ko aapki nazar naseeb hui.. Usual Smile (lolzz... hum bhi badi badi baatein karne lag gaye hai.. Laughing hard )
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« Reply #6 on: November 17, 2008, 08:22:59 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 08:03:38 AM
shikha tumhaari is post se "Khumar-e-ishq" me prateek ji ki ek rachna yaad ho aai
nahi tumse mohabbat hai
chaho to kasam le lo,
muhabbat paak hoti hai,
nahi isme gila shikwa,
mujhe tumse shikayat hai,
chaho to kasam lelo...

prateek

Sanjeev Ji.. Bahut bahut shukriya ek baar phir se... aapne Prateek ji ki itni pyaari nazam se ru-b-ru karwaaya.. Itni pyaari nazam dobara padh kar bahut achha laga.. Waise, unke (Prateek ji Ke) likhe ke saamne hamara likha toh.. aisa lag raha hai jaise PHd karne waale ke aage koi Nursery ka Baccha..  DOH

Thanks once again... Usual Smile
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« Reply #7 on: November 17, 2008, 08:27:48 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 17, 2008, 08:19:05 AM
Ab kya kahun main...  Shocked Even More
Sajid Ji.. Aapki chaar lines humaari poori poem par bhaari pad rahi hai.. Sachhi...  Applause  Applause
Aap kam shabdon mein itni gehraai kaise le aate hai... ??

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka Sajid Ji..  notworthy, hamari is koshish ko aapki nazar naseeb hui.. Usual Smile (lolzz... hum bhi badi badi baatein karne lag gaye hai.. Laughing hard )

itni tareef  DOH woh bhi meri arey tabiyat to theek hain na waise ek kamal to kiya hain maine in 4 lino me par tum thoda late samajti hona Giggle
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« Reply #8 on: November 17, 2008, 09:01:12 AM »
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Nice One Mahiya,.
And Bekarar Ji,./
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« Reply #9 on: November 17, 2008, 09:13:24 AM »
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koshish karuga azeem main behtar likhne ki aapko shayed mera likha pasand nahi aaya
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« Reply #10 on: November 17, 2008, 09:42:30 AM »
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ho ho ho... lol! ye kya kash makash chalrahee hai upar? lol! aisa lagraha hai k sub ek dusray kee tarif kartay huway ladrai kar rahaen hain! lets keep this controlled guys! hahahah jk!

nice work every! bahot khubsurat!
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« Reply #11 on: November 17, 2008, 11:29:35 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 17, 2008, 09:13:24 AM
koshish karuga azeem main behtar likhne ki aapko shayed mera likha pasand nahi aaya

Shayad Azeem padhna bhool gaya...
Still, I appreciate, It was Amazing Work Sajid Ji..
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« Reply #12 on: November 17, 2008, 11:31:41 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on November 17, 2008, 09:42:30 AM
ho ho ho... lol! ye kya kash makash chalrahee hai upar? lol! aisa lagraha hai k sub ek dusray kee tarif kartay huway ladrai kar rahaen hain! lets keep this controlled guys! hahahah jk!

nice work every! bahot khubsurat!

Ha ha ha...
Ladd nahin rahey Anjaan ji.. Haan ek doosre ki tareef jaroor kar rahe hai... Aur phir woh tareef hi kya, jisey soch samajh kar aur control kar ke karna padey.. Usual Smile

Thanks Anjaan Ji.. for your valuable visit and comments.. Usual Smile
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« Reply #13 on: November 17, 2008, 12:07:48 PM »
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Wah!! Wah!!! Wah!! kaya baat hai Mahiya, hamesha ki tarah kamal@dhamal.burra likha hai. bahoot he pyari kavita likhi hai apne.. bahoot acha laga... aise he likhati raho aor hume padne ka moka deti raho Usual Smile
SG and Bekarar( Prateek) acha sath diya hai apne Mahiya ka.
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 17, 2008, 09:01:12 AM
Nice One Mahiya,.
And Bekarar Ji,./

Thank You Brother.. Usual Smile
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