Uff !

by Brijinder on December 03, 2005, 08:12:12 PM
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Uff !


Ashk peetay hi rehay lub seetay hi rehay
Dabaa kay izhaar-I-tamanna kay khwaab
Bus ik beshakl si zindagi jeetay hi rehay

Kuch aisay diyay hawaadis taqdeer nay mujhko
Key na huNs sakay unpay na kabhi ro hi sakay
Majboor-i-fitrat meri kuch tqaazaa-i-halaat uska
Apnaa sakay usko na kabhi kho hi sakay

MaiNnay taraashay thay khalwat main
Husn-o-ishq kay jo sahir khwaab
Aur jinmaiN bharay rung-i-bedaar laykar
Apnay tmaam ilm-o-ahsaas

Unpay bhikhar gayee amaawus ki siyaahiaN
Aur meray daaman main reh gayeeN bus TanhaaiaN
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Poet: brijinder singh sagar
Location: Auckland, auckland, New Zealand
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hi
«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2005, 06:39:49 AM »
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I request the readers to post their feedback.
Brijinder"Sagar"
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2005, 05:54:31 PM »
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nice Brijinder ji........keep sending gud work
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2005, 09:37:53 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Brijinder ji!!!

Zindagi jeene ka maqsad na samjh aayaa
Tamaam umar ko, ek umind per tha thahraayaa
Jaaty waqat, dono hath, phir bhi thy khaali
Kis liye tamam umar, yah Bojh, Pooja tune tha  uthaya!!
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2005, 07:08:02 AM »
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Tanhai se nahi hum mehfil se darte hai, duniya se nahi hum khud se darte hai, yun to bahot kuch khoya hai humne aapko khone se darte hai   Usual Smile ok
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2005, 07:13:59 AM »
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Ishq mohabbat to hazaro karte hai gum e judai se wo sabhi darte hai hum to na ishq karte na mohabbat karte hai bas dosto ke ik sms pe marte hai ?Usual Smile ?
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«Reply #6 on: December 10, 2005, 07:27:26 PM »
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Thanx
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2006, 01:31:45 AM »
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Thanx for the very good response.
brijinder"sagar'
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