Uff !

by Brijinder on July 05, 2007, 02:29:53 AM
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Uff!

Ashk peetay hi rehay lub seetay hi rehay
Dabaa kay izhaar-I-tamanna kay khwaab
Bus ik beshakl si zindagi jeetay hi rehay

Kuch aisay diyay hawaadis taqdeer nay mujhko
Key na huNs sakay unpay na kabhi ro hi sakay
Majboor-i-fitrat meri kuch taqaazaa-i-halaat uska
Apnaa sakay usko na kabhi kho hi sakay

MaiNnay taraashay thay khalwat main
Husn-o-ishq kay jo sehar khwaab
Aur jinmaiN bharay rung-i-bedaar laykar
Apnay tamaam ilm-o-ahsaas

Unpay bhikhar gayee amaawus ki siyaahiaN
Aur meray daaman main reh gayeeN bus TanhaaiaN

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Meanings:Hwaadis- accidents,Khalwat-solitude,rung-e-bedaar- colours of consciousness, amaawus-no moon night
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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2007, 09:11:56 AM »
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Wah Wah Bijender  MIYA kaya baat hai
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2007, 11:02:13 AM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam likha hai aapne Brijinder...
Ishq ke saath Dard saaf jhalakta hai...
Aur hota bhi yehi hai... Ishq hai to Dard to hoga hi... Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2007, 10:07:04 AM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"
Bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam likha hai aapne Brijinder...
Ishq ke saath Dard saaf jhalakta hai...
Aur hota bhi yehi hai... Ishq hai to Dard to hoga hi... Usual Smile
Masha allah ! Lajawaaab.

Aur Shikha jee :arrow: Ishq Hota nahi Sabhie ke liye
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2007, 03:03:59 AM »
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I am very thankful for the warm words of appeciation.
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2009, 07:12:34 AM »
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thanks once again.
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2009, 07:52:21 AM »
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Uff!

Ashk peetay hi rehay lub seetay hi rehay
Dabaa kay izhaar-I-tamanna kay khwaab
Bus ik beshakl si zindagi jeetay hi rehay

Kuch aisay diyay hawaadis taqdeer nay mujhko
Key na huNs sakay unpay na kabhi ro hi sakay
Majboor-i-fitrat meri kuch taqaazaa-i-halaat uska
Apnaa sakay usko na kabhi kho hi sakay

MaiNnay taraashay thay khalwat main
Husn-o-ishq kay jo sehar khwaab
Aur jinmaiN bharay rung-i-bedaar laykar
Apnay tamaam ilm-o-ahsaas

Unpay bhikhar gayee amaawus ki siyaahiaN
Aur meray daaman main reh gayeeN bus TanhaaiaN

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Meanings:Hwaadis- accidents,Khalwat-solitude,rung-e-bedaar- colours of consciousness, amaawus-no moon night

Ufff, meri nazar aaj hi padi is kalam pe.
Bahut khoob Brijinder ji..
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2009, 11:54:58 AM »
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Very nice ! keep it up
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2009, 12:20:26 PM »
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Uff!

Ashk peetay hi rehay lub seetay hi rehay
Dabaa kay izhaar-I-tamanna kay khwaab
Bus ik beshakl si zindagi jeetay hi rehay

Kuch aisay diyay hawaadis taqdeer nay mujhko
Key na huNs sakay unpay na kabhi ro hi sakay
Majboor-i-fitrat meri kuch taqaazaa-i-halaat uska
Apnaa sakay usko na kabhi kho hi sakay

MaiNnay taraashay thay khalwat main
Husn-o-ishq kay jo sehar khwaab
Aur jinmaiN bharay rung-i-bedaar laykar
Apnay tamaam ilm-o-ahsaas

Unpay bhikhar gayee amaawus ki siyaahiaN
Aur meray daaman main reh gayeeN bus TanhaaiaN

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Meanings:Hwaadis- accidents,Khalwat-solitude,rung-e-bedaar- colours of consciousness, amaawus-no moon night



wah bhai kya khub likha hai.

ask peetey hi rahey lub seetey hi rahey

nice lines yaarrrrrrr.




ashk peetey hi rahey lub seetey hi rahey
hua jab bhi didaar unka ankho main raat bhar khote hi rahey
dabaa ke tamanna dill mein, ek mulakaat ko jeetey hi rahey
ab izhaarey haal ye hai ki intzaar mein unke tanhaa ashk peetey hi rahey.

kuch zakhm aise diye usne shaame-gum mein
ashk ke ghhot peetey hi rahey aur tanha jeetey hi rahey
hua zindagi se milan aise na apna sakey ussey na kho sakey
haya rahi aankhon mein is kadar
na hans sakey un par na khud pa ro sakey

ehsass hai mujhe ayega naya savera saugat nayi lekey
bas ab toh uljhan hai saath mere.
ies ujhan mein jeetey rahey, mila kar ashk sharab mein peetey hi rahey aur jeetey hi rahey.

 
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