Unke sharmane ka...

by daljeet_faqeer on February 12, 2010, 05:43:50 PM
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Unke sharmane ka andaaz alag hai,
Kahin khol na dena ye raaz alag hai.

Kise fiqr hai zamane mein ruswai ki,
shahil pe jo dooba parwaz alag hai.

Bas do bol pyar ke sun-na chahate hain,
mile jo bol unke alfaz alag hai.

Gham mein bhi unke muskurane ki ada,
zindagi jeene ka unka saaz alag hai.

Humne halaat se ladna chhod diya 'faqeer',
umeed ke daaman mein aaghaz alag hai.

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«Reply #1 on: February 13, 2010, 11:21:34 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Daljeet ji.bahut acha likha aapne.keep it up.hats off
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«Reply #2 on: February 13, 2010, 12:55:18 PM »
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Wah wah Daljeet ji badi achhi ghazal likhi hai aapne. Nice creation.
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«Reply #3 on: February 13, 2010, 03:40:27 PM »
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Bahut Khub Daljeet JI
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