Unki nigahein kuchh shararat karti thhi

by nandbahu on November 14, 2012, 07:15:46 AM
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Unki nigahein kuchh shararat karti thhi
Meri nigah unhe pass apne bulati thhi

Vo sankoch mein kuchh bol na pate thhe
Hum kehne ko bahut betab huye jate thhe

Dil unka bhi pass aane ko machalta thha
Humara dil bahon mein lene ko tarapta thha

Lal surkh jore mein vo gajab dhate thhe
Roop ko unke hum bas takte hi jate thhe

Sharma ke ghughat mein mukhra chhipate thhe
Kaise batayein hum apne ko rok na pate thhe

Doori humare darmiya vo banaye huye thhe
Hum doori mitane ki talash mein rehte thhe

Aur phir

Akele vo chhat mein bal sukha rahe thhe
Hum unko bahon ke ghere mein le liye thhe

Sihar ke vo chui mui si laja gayee thhe
Hum unka maun aamantran samajh liye thhe

Ek duje mein hum dono kho se gaye thhe
Dharkano ka bas ehsas kiye ja rahe thhe

Milan anubhuti se dono hi anandit thhe
Samay ko thehar jane ko keh rahe thhe

  
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«Reply #1 on: November 14, 2012, 07:43:04 AM »
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wah wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: November 14, 2012, 07:57:41 AM »
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  Applause
 bahut  khoob , nand  ji . Abb  yeh  bhi  bataiye
 ki  iske  baad  kya  hua.
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«Reply #3 on: November 14, 2012, 09:35:45 AM »
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wah wah wah
shukriya aarish ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 14, 2012, 09:36:45 AM »
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  Applause
 bahut  khoob , nand  ji . Abb  yeh  bhi  bataiye
 ki  iske  baad  kya  hua.
thanx siddqui ji, aage kya hua bayan kar diya hai, padh leejiyega
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«Reply #5 on: November 14, 2012, 09:42:30 AM »
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kya baat nandji bahut hi lajawab peshkash
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«Reply #6 on: November 14, 2012, 09:47:57 AM »
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kya baat nandji bahut hi lajawab peshkash
thanx aqsh ji, aap jaise umda shayaro se prena milti hai
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«Reply #7 on: November 14, 2012, 10:16:24 AM »
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bahut khoob jajbaat kafi romantic hain


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«Reply #8 on: November 14, 2012, 11:57:05 AM »
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bahut khoob jajbaat kafi romantic hain



thanx amit ji
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