Us makaan mein . . .

by Arghya on June 29, 2013, 01:53:01 PM
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 Ab us makaan mein kaun rehta hain,
 tu yaah tera sayaa rehta hain.
 
 teri ore lejati hai jo dagar,
 uski har mod pe hai sapno ka ghar.

 usne baajaya jab raaton mein manjeer,
 andheron ne racha tab preet ka mandir.

 yeh tera nayan hain,yah mrigatrishnaa,
 jeewan maru mein yeh hain apnaa-beganaa.
  
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2013, 02:38:17 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2013, 03:28:56 PM »
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 Ab us makaan mein kaun rehta hain,
 tu yaah tera sayaa rehta hain.
 
 teri ore lejati hai jo dagar,
 uski har mod pe hai sapno ka ghar.

 usne baajaya jab raaton mein manjeer,
 andheron ne racha tab preet ka mandir.

 yeh tera nayan hain,yah mrigatrishnaa,
 jeewan maru mein yeh hain apnaa-beganaa.
 

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Waah ... Khoobsurat nazm hai
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