**~** Uska Aanchal **~**

by _Vicky_ on December 26, 2009, 11:13:49 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 08, 2010, 05:17:09 PM »
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waaaah waah bahut khoob MANN SAHAB Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Behad Shukriya Dost.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #16 on: January 08, 2010, 05:18:26 PM »
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Wah Mann ji bahut khoob,apne dil ke ehsaas ko bahut khoosurati se bayaan kiya aapne.mindblowing creation.Cara ji great lines. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Madhu Ji Aaapka Behad shukriya.. aapki Daaaaaaaad to humesha Hausla badhaati hai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #17 on: January 08, 2010, 05:23:07 PM »
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good poetry,carry on friend

Harish Bhai aapka Behad shukriya ki aapne Pasand kiya mera Kaam.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #18 on: January 10, 2010, 10:17:54 AM »
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Kya khumaar hai....kya bahaar hai....bahut hi khoob Mann ji.....bahut khoob
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Tahe Dil Se Bahut Bahut Shukriya Poooja.. !! Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #19 on: January 14, 2010, 04:59:03 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Vicky
bahut hi accha likha hai tumne dear...
Applause Applause Applause

Kashish Ji aapka Tahe Dil se Bahut Bahut Shukriya.. Usual Smile Usual Smile



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«Reply #20 on: January 17, 2010, 11:33:02 PM »
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wow yaar.... bhaijaan!!!! what is going on!?!?!?! muhjse chuhpaya hai na?? muhje maloom hai, chuhpaya hai!!!!!
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«Reply #21 on: January 29, 2010, 04:36:10 PM »
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Jab Lautane Aaye Tum Mera Anchal
Laga Tum Kuch Kehne Aaaye Ho
Mano Tum Apna Dil Mujhe De Kar
Mere Dil ko Le Jaane Aaaye Ho

Jab Odana Chaha Maine Uss Anchal Ko
 Har Bhar Tan Se Woh Sarakane Laga
Mann Ko Mere Behla Fusla Kar Woh
Tujhse phir Milne Ka Ishaara Karne Laga

Bahoot Samjaya Maine Apne Anchal Ko
Aur Woh Dhire Aakar Mujhse Lipat gaya
Karane Laga Mere Aks Ko Tera Ehsaas
Tere Ishq Ki Arzoo Ban Mujhme Simat Gaya

Raat Bhar Teri Baatein Sunakar  Yea Anchal
Mujhe Raat Raat Bhar Satata Rehta Hai
Kehta Hai Koi Mujhe Bahoot Chahta Hai
Mujhko Apni Dulhan Banana Chahta Hai


Kaise Samjaun Isse Main, Tum hi Batao na Mujhe ?


Wah Kya Baat hai Divya.. Bahut Hi Umda Likha hai.. Pyaar se Bhara aur Ehasaason se Saja.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #22 on: January 29, 2010, 04:47:50 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob likha hai sophi dear, vicky bhaiya and cara ji
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«Reply #23 on: February 12, 2010, 05:20:56 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI......

KON HAI WO JO MERE DIDI KA AANCHAL ROZ ROZ LEJATA HAI...
AUR APNE PYAR KE EHSAAS US AANCHAL MEIN DE JAATA HAI..
AGAR ITNA HI WO MERE DIDI KO CHAHATA HAI..
TOH KYUN NAHI USEY SHAADI KAR LEJAATA HAI...

Shukriya Arac Ji.. Aapne Bhi Bahut khoooooob Likha hai.. Applause



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«Reply #24 on: February 26, 2010, 01:28:32 PM »
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Ek Khubsoorat Ehasaas Ko Alfaazon Me Saja Kar Likhne ki Koshish ki hai.. Sab Kuch Ek Khwaab Sa Hai.. Par Jab Bhi Is Khwaab Ko Sochta hoon To Haqiqat Sa lagta Hai.. Bassssssssss Usi Khwaab ko Yahan Pesh Kar raha hoon..!! icon_thumleft



Aaj Uski  Gali Se Guzra, Uska Aanchal Takra Gaya,
Main Use Baahon Me Bhar Ke, Apne Ghar Leke Aa Gaya...

Saamne Rakh Ke Use, Tasveer Sa Ban Baitha Raha,
Phir Daud Ke Aagosh Me Le, Use Hoton Se Laga Gaya….

Saari Raat Usse Baaten Ki, Rakha Seene Se Laga Ke,
Tabhi Jane Kya Hua Ki, Tera Aanchal Kuch Sharma Gaya,....

Poocha To Kahane Laga, Kaisi Tadap Tujhme Samaai Hai,
Ke Tu Poori Raat Mohabbat Apni Mujhpe Hi Barsa Gaya.....

Kaha Maine Ki Yeh To Sirf  Shuruaat Hai Mohabbat Ki,
Meri Deewangi Sun Ke, Wo Bhi Zara Sa Muskura Gaya….

Nigaahon Ki Qalam Se,  Likha Paigaam Us Nishaani  Par,
Pahala Yeh Mohabbat-e-Khat, Usko Thama Ke Aa Gaya…..

Ab Sirf Intzaar Hai, Uske Ek Iqraar-e-Ishaare Ka Yaaron,
Koi To Aake Kahe,  Ki Mann Tere Mehboob Ka Jawab Aa Gaya…....!!!




**~** Mann **~**


Uff...itne dehekte hue jazbaat !! Bohot hi khoobsurti se lafzon main dhaala hai..BOhot Khoob Vicky
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«Reply #25 on: February 26, 2010, 02:21:50 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat di.. Aapki Comment ko humesha Intzaar rahata hai..  notworthy notworthy



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«Reply #26 on: July 24, 2010, 02:44:48 PM »
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wow yaar.... bhaijaan!!!! what is going on!?!?!?! muhjse chuhpaya hai na?? muhje maloom hai, chuhpaya hai!!!!!

Thank U Sweet Sis.. Are Kuch Nahi Chupaaya Sis.. yeh to Bas Khayal hai.. Qasam se.  Winking Winking



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«Reply #27 on: July 24, 2010, 03:42:41 PM »
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Ek Khubsoorat Ehasaas Ko Alfaazon Me Saja Kar Likhne ki Koshish ki hai.. Sab Kuch Ek Khwaab Sa Hai.. Par Jab Bhi Is Khwaab Ko Sochta hoon To Haqiqat Sa lagta Hai.. Bassssssssss Usi Khwaab ko Yahan Pesh Kar raha hoon..!! icon_thumleft



Aaj Uski  Gali Se Guzra, Uska Aanchal Takra Gaya,
Main Use Baahon Me Bhar Ke, Apne Ghar Leke Aa Gaya...

Saamne Rakh Ke Use, Tasveer Sa Ban Baitha Raha,
Phir Daud Ke Aagosh Me Le, Use Hoton Se Laga Gaya….

Saari Raat Usse Baaten Ki, Rakha Seene Se Laga Ke,
Tabhi Jane Kya Hua Ki, Tera Aanchal Kuch Sharma Gaya,....

Poocha To Kahane Laga, Kaisi Tadap Tujhme Samaai Hai,
Ke Tu Poori Raat Mohabbat Apni Mujhpe Hi Barsa Gaya.....

Kaha Maine Ki Yeh To Sirf  Shuruaat Hai Mohabbat Ki,
Meri Deewangi Sun Ke, Wo Bhi Zara Sa Muskura Gaya….

Nigaahon Ki Qalam Se,  Likha Paigaam Us Nishaani  Par,
Pahala Yeh Mohabbat-e-Khat, Usko Thama Ke Aa Gaya…..

Ab Sirf Intzaar Hai, Uske Ek Iqraar-e-Ishaare Ka Yaaron,
Koi To Aake Kahe,  Ki Mann Tere Mehboob Ka Jawab Aa Gaya…....!!!




**~** Mann **~**


Nice poetry .... Mann Ji ! very romani...very touching ! nice creation.... !
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«Reply #28 on: July 24, 2010, 04:58:33 PM »
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bht khubsurat peshkash Mann ji... love4 love4
aur kuch uss ladki k dil ki baat bhi sun lo ji....

Aaj itraya aanchal mera hawa me fir lehra gaya
Dekh mehboob ki surat wo thoda sa sharma gaya..

Unhe pane ki lagan lagi is badmash dupatte ko
Dekh unhe chhod mujhe unke pas  udta hua chal gaya

Main sharmake simat gai khud hi apni bahon me
Jaise mere janu ne mujhe seene se apne laga liya

Wo aane lage pas le aanchal mera hath me
Main sharma  k bhaag gai..jane kyun dil bhi ghabra gaya

Le gaye wo sath apne mere nirlaj dupatte ko
Jo hath me unke aake mujhe muhh chidha gya

Raat bhar simta raha wo unki aagosh me
Main na sahi mera dupaata unke sath ka sukh pa gaya

Sawere panghat par jab pukara unhone naam mera
Yun laga jaise maine sare jahan ka sukh paa liya

Hath me dekar mera aanchal wo bole mujhse dheeme se
Aaj diupatta paake maine ikraar tumhara paa liya

Ab na rakho doorie koi na koi parda sanam
Aanchal maine tham kar apna tumhe bana liya…!!!
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«Reply #29 on: October 21, 2014, 11:24:48 AM »
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excellent Mann ji
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