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<>*Mera Aanchal*<>
Aaj itraya aanchal mera hawa me fir lehra gaya
Dekh mehboob ki surat wo thoda sa sharma gaya..
Unhe pane ki lagan lagi is badmash dupatte ko
Dekh unhe chhod mujhe unke pas udta hua chal gaya
Main sharmake simat gai khud hi apni bahon me
Jaise mere janu ne mujhe seene se apne laga liya
Wo aane lage pas le aanchal mera hath me
Main sharma k bhaag gai..jane kyun dil bhi ghabra gaya
Le gaye wo sath apne mere nirlaj dupatte ko
Jo hath me unke aake mujhe muhh chidha gya
Raat bhar simta raha wo unki aagosh me
Main na sahi mera dupaata unke sath ka sukh pa gaya
Sawere panghat par jab pukara unhone naam mera
Yun laga jaise maine sare jahan ka sukh paa liya
Hath me dekar mera aanchal wo bole mujhse dheeme se
Aaj diupatta paake maine ikraar tumhara paa liya
Ab na rakho doorie koi na koi parda sanam
Aanchal maine tham kar apna tumhe bana liya…!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 25, 2010, 12:32:38 AM » |
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.........bht khubbbbb anaam ji....
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2010, 12:56:13 AM » |
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<>*Mera Aanchal*<>
Aaj itraya aanchal mera hawa me fir lehra gaya
Dekh mehboob ki surat wo thoda sa sharma gaya..
Unhe pane ki lagan lagi is badmash dupatte ko
Dekh unhe chhod mujhe unke pas udta hua chal gaya
Main sharmake simat gai khud hi apni bahon me
Jaise mere janu ne mujhe seene se apne laga liya
Wo aane lage pas le aanchal mera hath me
Main sharma k bhaag gai..jane kyun dil bhi ghabra gaya
Le gaye wo sath apne mere nirlaj dupatte ko
Jo hath me unke aake mujhe muhh chidha gya
Raat bhar simta raha wo unki aagosh me
Main na sahi mera dupaata unke sath ka sukh pa gaya
Sawere panghat par jab pukara unhone naam mera
Yun laga jaise maine sare jahan ka sukh paa liya
Hath me dekar mera aanchal wo bole mujhse dheeme se
Aaj diupatta paake maine ikraar tumhara paa liya
Ab na rakho doorie koi na koi parda sanam
Aanchal maine tham kar apna tumhe bana liya…!!!
KASAK JI ...... AAPKI TEHREER KE EHSAAS BAHUT KHOOBSURAT HAI....MOHABBAT KI BAATE MANN KO ROMANCHIT KARTI NAZAR AAI...BAHUT BEHTREEN AUR DILKASH RAHI PESHKASH.....DIL SE DAAD HAZIR HAI....QUBUUL FARMAAYEN....KHUSH RAHEN... APNA KHAYAL RAKHEN... DUAAON KE SAATH.... |
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2010, 07:21:07 PM » |
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Wah! Kya baat hai.
Bahut umda peshkash hai Amamika Ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2010, 09:32:35 AM » |
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ufffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff......... ...bas kijiye klaskar ji....aapki taaliyon mere kaanon me gunj rahi hain bht zor se....isme aapke shabd bhi kho ja rahe hain....
aur mujhe aapke shabd bht pyare hain......
par sirf taaliyan....ispe aapka aisa hi reply nahin to iska maza nahin aaya.....
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«Reply #9 on: July 26, 2010, 10:35:24 AM » |
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maafi chahunga Kasak ji ki main bas taliyaan hi bajata reh gaya is baar jo ki aapko pasand nahi aaya.. par kya karun main bhi... mujhe shabd hi nahi mil rahe the aapki is kavita ki taarif ke liye... bahut achcha laga jaanke ki aapko mere shabd pasand hain aur kaisa co-incidence hai ye ki mere blog ka naam bhi SHABD hi hai... kabhi fursat se nazar daal lijiyega uspe bhi... shukriya Kasak ji...!!!http://littlefeelingz.blogspot.com/
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«Reply #10 on: July 27, 2010, 12:14:10 AM » |
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hume aapka ye SHABD bht pasand aaya Klaskar ji....
itni khubsurat rachnayen hain aapki k lagta hai kaunsiachhcikahun kaunsi nhin...sab ek se badhkar ek hain ji....
thnx for sharing it wid me....
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«Reply #11 on: July 27, 2010, 06:17:58 AM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji mera Blog padhne ke liye...!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 14, 2010, 01:41:08 PM » |
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KASAK JI ...... AAPKI TEHREER KE EHSAAS BAHUT KHOOBSURAT HAI....MOHABBAT KI BAATE MANN KO ROMANCHIT KARTI NAZAR AAI...BAHUT BEHTREEN AUR DILKASH RAHI PESHKASH.....DIL SE DAAD HAZIR HAI....QUBUUL FARMAAYEN....KHUSH RAHEN...
APNA KHAYAL RAKHEN...
DUAAON KE SAATH....
thnx naresh ji for ur valuable and beautiful comments...aapne pasnd kiya wahi bht badi baat hai hamare liye |
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«Reply #13 on: September 14, 2010, 01:41:38 PM » |
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Wah! Kya baat hai.
Bahut umda peshkash hai Amamika Ji
thnx geet ji pasand farmane k liye..... |
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2010, 01:43:31 PM » |
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chhed k usne hi mera chain pehle chhina tha
mujhe sare raah rok kar hath mera pakda tha
sharm se laal hokje na keh pai thi main kuch bhi
isily mere aanchal ne uska haal bura kiya tha....
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