UsKe Gaalon Mein Bhawar Padhte Hai Jo Muskuraane Se "Khwaish"

by khwaish on October 18, 2012, 12:02:18 PM
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Main Mohabbat Mein Bachon Ki Tarah Hoon..
Jo Mera Hai, Main Kisi Aur Ko Kyon Doon!!



Apne Aankhon Ke Samundar MeN Utarne Nahi Deta
Mujhe Door Se Bhi Apne Deedar Karne Nahi Deta

Woh Mere Dil Mein Rehta Hai Par Kuch Kehta Nahi
Woh Ishaaro  Tak Mein, Haami Bharne Nahi Deta

Uske Zulfon Ke Saaye Mein Guzrti hai Har Shab Meri..!!!
Khwaabon Ko Haqeeqat Ke Rang MeN Dhalne Nahi Deta

Woh Kisi Darakht Ki Tarah Hai Jo Hurdum Mujhe Chaau De..!!
Mujhe Jaise Sookhe Patte Ko Woh Kabhi Bikharne Nahi Deta

Uske Gaalon Mein Jo Bhawar Padte Hai Muskuraane Se..!!!
Woh Chehra, Woh Andaaz Kisi Marte Ko Marne Nahi Deta

Uss ka Saath Ho To Dil-e-Beqarar Ko Kuch Qaraar mile..!!!!
Woh Mujhe Waqt Aur Halaat Se Ab Darne Nahi Deta..


            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2012, 12:05:05 PM »
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jaan hi nikaal doge kisi din tum meri...... kitni baar kaa hai aisa mat likha karo k main jawab hi na de paun ..par tum sunte nahin ho na....... ufffffffff....... ye kal likhi thi na .... hmm pata chal gaya mujhe............ zabardasttttttttttt gazal hai yaar
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2012, 12:28:15 PM »
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Main Mohabbat Mein Bachon Ki Tarah Hoon..
Jo Mera Hai, Main Kisi Aur Ko Kyon Doon!!



Apne Aankhon Ke Samundar MeN Utarne Nahi Deta
Mujhe Door Se Bhi Apne Deedar Karne Nahi Deta  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Woh Mere Dil Mein Rehta Hai Par Kuch Kehta Nahi
Woh Ishaaro  Tak Mein, Haami Bharne Nahi Deta  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Uske Zulfon Ke Saaye Mein Guzrti hai Har Shab Meri..!!!
Khwaabon Ko Haqeeqat Ke Rang MeN Dhalne Nahi Deta       Wah!!!

Woh Kisi Darakht Ki Tarah Hai Jo Hurdum Mujhe Chaau De..!!
Mujhe Jaise Sookhe Patte Ko Woh Kabhi Bikharne Nahi Deta  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Uske Gaalon Mein Jo Bhawar Padte Hai Muskuraane Se..!!!
Woh Chehra, Woh Andaaz Kisi Marte Ko Marne Nahi Deta Beautiful!!!

Uss ka Saath Ho To Dil-e-Beqarar Ko Kuch Qaraar mile..!!!!
Woh Mujhe Waqt Aur Halaat Se Ab Darne Nahi Deta.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bohat hi khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aap ne khwaish jee!!! Jo bhi padega aap ka deewana ho jayega!!!! Hum aap ke bohat bade Fan ho chuke hai..!! Too Good!!!

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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2012, 01:18:35 PM »
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Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2012, 01:20:26 PM »
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Main Mohabbat Mein Bachon Ki Tarah Hoon..
Jo Mera Hai, Main Kisi Aur Ko Kyon Doon!!



Apne Aankhon Ke Samundar MeN Utarne Nahi Deta
Mujhe Door Se Bhi Apne Deedar Karne Nahi Deta

Woh Mere Dil Mein Rehta Hai Par Kuch Kehta Nahi
Woh Ishaaro  Tak Mein, Haami Bharne Nahi Deta

Uske Zulfon Ke Saaye Mein Guzrti hai Har Shab Meri..!!!
Khwaabon Ko Haqeeqat Ke Rang MeN Dhalne Nahi Deta

Woh Kisi Darakht Ki Tarah Hai Jo Hurdum Mujhe Chaau De..!!
Mujhe Jaise Sookhe Patte Ko Woh Kabhi Bikharne Nahi Deta

Uske Gaalon Mein Jo Bhawar Padte Hai Muskuraane Se..!!!
Woh Chehra, Woh Andaaz Kisi Marte Ko Marne Nahi Deta

Uss ka Saath Ho To Dil-e-Beqarar Ko Kuch Qaraar mile..!!!!
Woh Mujhe Waqt Aur Halaat Se Ab Darne Nahi Deta..
 

            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~




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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2012, 01:24:06 PM »
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Wah  wah kya baat hai    khwaish ji.......

"Uske gaalon mein bhawar padhte hai jo muskuraane se"
hame bhi mazaa aata hai uske pyaar mein doob jaane me
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2012, 02:33:06 PM »
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congratulations ji bahut achi rachna hai
Mubarik. Sheel didi
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2012, 02:36:23 PM »
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bahut behatreen peshkash
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2012, 03:07:42 PM »
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Main Mohabbat Mein Bachon Ki Tarah Hoon..
Jo Mera Hai, Main Kisi Aur Ko Kyon Doon!!



Apne Aankhon Ke Samundar MeN Utarne Nahi Deta
Mujhe Door Se Bhi Apne Deedar Karne Nahi Deta

Woh Mere Dil Mein Rehta Hai Par Kuch Kehta Nahi
Woh Ishaaro  Tak Mein, Haami Bharne Nahi Deta

Uske Zulfon Ke Saaye Mein Guzrti hai Har Shab Meri..!!!
Khwaabon Ko Haqeeqat Ke Rang MeN Dhalne Nahi Deta

Woh Kisi Darakht Ki Tarah Hai Jo Hurdum Mujhe Chaau De..!!
Mujhe Jaise Sookhe Patte Ko Woh Kabhi Bikharne Nahi Deta

Uske Gaalon Mein Jo Bhawar Padte Hai Muskuraane Se..!!!
Woh Chehra, Woh Andaaz Kisi Marte Ko Marne Nahi Deta

Uss ka Saath Ho To Dil-e-Beqarar Ko Kuch Qaraar mile..!!!!
Woh Mujhe Waqt Aur Halaat Se Ab Darne Nahi Deta..


            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khushboodaar kalaam hai janaab ab aaye ho na line pe kya aaj kal sanjidgi chhod rakhi hai preaching wala kalaam kam dikhaai de raha hai tumhaari qalam se..!
acha likha hai khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2012, 03:09:42 PM »
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be had oomda ghazal...bohat c daad......
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«Reply #10 on: October 18, 2012, 04:07:01 PM »
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wah wah wah khwaish jee
khoob likha hai aapne.
behatreen..dil ko choote hue ashaar.
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«Reply #11 on: October 18, 2012, 04:27:30 PM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2012, 07:00:21 PM »
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Khawahish Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab, bade romantic kalaam pesh kar raheN hai...
Behad pyaari kalaam kahi hai janab.. bahot khoob, bade hi umdaa
ahsaas O khayaal aur khoob andaaz e bayaaN raha.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe janab... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   




Main Mohabbat Mein Bachon Ki Tarah Hoon..
Jo Mera Hai, Main Kisi Aur Ko Kyon Doon!!


Achcha sher hai janab bahut khoob... Usual Smile                   


Apne Aankhon Ke Samundar MeN Utarne Nahi Deta
Mujhe Door Se Bhi Apne Deedar Karne Nahi Deta

Kia kahne janab bahut umdaa, haal e dil ko behad khoob
lafz diye haiN daad daad daad.. Usual Smile                   


Woh Mere Dil Mein Rehta Hai Par Kuch Kehta Nahi
Woh Ishaaro  Tak Mein, Haami Bharne Nahi Deta

Oye yeH toH bada zulm ho raha hai jee... par ashaar khoob raha..
Khususan Sani misra behad khoob raha janab.. " ISharoN meiN bhi haami bharne nahi deta"
kia baar hai waaH daad daad daad...                   


Uske Zulfon Ke Saaye Mein Guzrti hai Har Shab Meri..!!!
Khwaabon Ko Haqeeqat Ke Rang MeN Dhalne Nahi Deta

Bahut khoob jee daad..                   

Woh Kisi Darakht Ki Tarah Hai Jo Hurdum Mujhe Chaau De..!!
Mujhe Jaise Sookhe Patte Ko Woh Kabhi Bikharne Nahi Deta

WaaH waaH waaH janab kia kahne waaH behad khoob daad..
bada umdaa sher kaha hai daad.. Usual Smile                   


Uske Gaalon Mein Jo Bhawar Padte Hai Muskuraane Se..!!!
Woh Chehra, Woh Andaaz Kisi Marte Ko Marne Nahi Deta

Bahut khoob jee tareef ki hai kamaal ki daad..                   

Uss ka Saath Ho To Dil-e-Beqarar Ko Kuch Qaraar mile..!!!!
Woh Mujhe Waqt Aur Halaat Se Ab Darne Nahi Deta..

Bahut khoob janaab achcha sher hai daad..                   

            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #13 on: October 18, 2012, 08:14:42 PM »
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