Usko Apne Andar Main Dekhta Hoon,.

by Jaanasheen on January 30, 2010, 03:21:02 PM
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Azeem Azaad
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Doston Ye Kalaam Main Tab Likha,.
Jab Main Safar Kar Raha Tha Aur Mujhe, Meri Mohabbat Ki Yaad Aa Rahi Thi,.

Hope U Will Like It,.


Ordhkar Baadalon Ko, Ek Chaand Ko Sote Dekhta Hoon,.
In Aankhon Se Aisa, Main Dilkash Manzar Dekhta Hoon,.

Wo Door Hai Mujhse Jab Bhi Ye Mehsoos Karta Hoon,.
Ek Hi Pal Mein Usko, Main Apne Andar Dekhta Hoon,.

Ek Umr Guzri Pyaar Ke Boond Ko Tarasta Raha,.
Ab Ke Baras "Lekin Chahaton Ka Samandar Dekhta Hoon,.

Kya Hoga Uske Bagair Mera, Jab Bhi Sochta Hoon,.
Seene Pe Mere Utarta, Ek Tezz Khanjar Dekhta Hoon,.

Usko Main Apne Andar Dekhta Hoon,.

-Azeem-


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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2010, 03:25:22 PM »
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Aww,,,,,,,,,,,Very Lovely Lines Azeem Ji
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2010, 03:26:35 PM »
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Azeem saaHeb:

Aadaab-o-namaskaar!

aapki peShkaSh Khoob rahiiN.. pyaar bhare ehsaas haMeShaa dil ko Chhu jaate hai.n aur aapki ees peShkaSh meiN muHabbat ki taDap naZar aayiiN.. Khudaa se duaa yahee hai aapki ziNdagee pyaar se sajti rahe.n! aise hi liKhate raheN aage bhee! daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2010, 04:11:21 PM »
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Aww,,,,,,,,,,,Very Lovely Lines Azeem Ji
Shukriya King JI,.
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«Reply #4 on: January 30, 2010, 04:13:00 PM »
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Wah wah Azeem bhai badi achhi lagi aapki ye poem. Is baar ek naya andaaz dekhne ko mila aapke kalaam mein. Shandaar, nafees alfaaz ka istemaal kiya hai.
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2010, 04:28:40 PM »
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Azeem Bhai.. Humesha Ki Tarah.. Behad Khubsoorat aur Mohabbat se Bharpoor Alfaaz Bikhre hain aapne Yahan.. Har ek lafz Me Ishq Hi Ishq Nazar aaya.. Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2010, 04:39:59 PM »
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Wonderful Creation Azeem... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Azeem... God Bless U !
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2010, 05:33:07 PM »
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kya khoob likha hai Azeem ji...bahut hi khoobsurat alfaaz...aur bahut hi behtreen,lajwaab....kya kahu...shabd hi nahi mil rahe....superb.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2010, 04:27:46 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Azeem bhai.great creation.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2010, 03:36:50 PM »
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Hmm...Azeem bhai khamosh kardia hume apne apni iss peshkash se..Bahaut sunder likha hai... Applause Applause Applause Applause Main yeh baat dil se kehta hoon ike you are one of my fac writers...I always do and will keep readin you...Hamesha khush raho aur likte raho...
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2010, 04:01:06 PM »
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good one azeem...i can imagine how deep u feel for this

Awesome
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2010, 04:09:57 PM »
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Nice and romantic creation Azeem.  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2010, 04:32:53 AM »
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 Applause excellent
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«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2010, 12:50:42 PM »
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Wah wah Azeem Bahi kitni achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Nice creation.
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«Reply #14 on: February 01, 2010, 02:59:20 PM »
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Bahut Khub Azeem Bhai ApplauseApplause
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