Want your help shayars

by shoebxie on August 22, 2014, 10:24:17 AM
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Hi all,

Mai shayar to nahi but shayri bohot pasand karta hu. Mujhe ek help chahiye agar aap me se koi mujhe help kar sake.

Mai kisiko bohot chahta hu aur bphot muskils e use apni zindagi me paya hu

mujhe uske liye shayri chahiye jo hum dono ki ek life me jo hua..... yaahi humare relation se judi ho..

kya koi mere liye shayri likh sakta hai....

mai aapko jo kuch hua hai bataunga but kya aap us par mere liye kuch likh sakte hai

bohot meherbani hogi

thanks in advance..
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2014, 12:36:05 AM »
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Hello ji,

jaankar bahut achchaa lagaa ki aapko shaayari bahut pasand hai. Aur yeh jaankar aur zyaadaa khushi mili ki jisse aap mohabbat karte hain woh ab aapki zindagi mein hai.

meri raaye yeh hai ki apne pyaar ko woh tohfaa dijiye jo unhe pasand ho aur aapki apni koshish se bani ho, zaruri nahi ki woh shaayari hi ho, aap kisi ko bolenge apni life par shaayari likhne ko, pehle to aap usse apni feelings poori tarhaa nahi bataa paayengem, dusri yeh ki jo bhi likhegaa/ likhegi woh usme bahut kuch idhar udhar aur apne hisaab se add yaa delete karega, jo ki aapke life se koi meaning naa rakhtaa ho, to is tarhaa aapki kahanai aapki apni nahi rahegi, gaur kijiyegaa mere is baat par...

ummeed kartaa hoon aapko hamaari yeh baat buri nahi lagi hogi

khush rahiye

aapkaa
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2014, 09:34:29 AM »
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Thanc Hriday.... mai koshish karunga
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