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<>*WO HO TUM*<> [/color] Ajeeb si khamoshi bhaagti zindagi
Bekas sa mahol aur ek humdum tum
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2010, 06:58:12 PM » |
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne... "Kasak ji" kahun ya "Anamika ji"... bahut sundar rachna hai ye aapki...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2010, 05:58:08 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2010, 07:03:28 AM » |
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Wah wah wah Kasak Ji! Aap to khoob likhti haiN. Bahut zabardast tehreer hai ye aapki. Aapke ehsaas ko maiN apni ehsaas samajh kar aik jo sher abhi kaha hai woh pesh kar raha hooN; Aik ehsaas ban gaye ho tum Pyas hi pyas ban gaye ho tum (Waquif Ansari) <>*WO HO TUM*<> [/color] Ajeeb si khamoshi bhaagti zindagi
Bekas sa mahol aur ek humdum tum
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«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2010, 07:06:57 AM » |
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<>*WO HO TUM*<> [/color] Ajeeb si khamoshi bhaagti zindagi
Bekas sa mahol aur ek humdum tum
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bahut Bahut Khoob!!!bahut Hi Khooburat Ehsaaso se Bharpoor!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 19, 2010, 09:13:30 AM » |
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<>*WO HO TUM*<> [/color] Ajeeb si khamoshi bhaagti zindagi
Bekas sa mahol aur ek humdum tum
Saare jahaan me koi hai jise keh sakun dil se apna
Wo ek saaya mera apna wo ho tum
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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Anamika Ji |
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«Reply #6 on: July 19, 2010, 12:43:16 PM » |
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Bade kamaal ki kavita hai Kasak ji. Padhkar bahot mazaa aaya. Yun hi likhti rahiye, lekhne mein nikhaar aata jayega. Aisi sundar rachna ke liye badhaai. <>*WO HO TUM*<> [/color] Ajeeb si khamoshi bhaagti zindagi
Bekas sa mahol aur ek humdum tum
Saare jahaan me koi hai jise keh sakun dil se apna
Wo ek saaya mera apna wo ho tum
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«Reply #7 on: July 19, 2010, 01:18:01 PM » |
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Klaskar ji...Thinkhutk ji...riyaz ji....rajesh ji...khwaish ji..
ansari ji.....
aap sabka tahe dil se shukriya k aapne meri ye rachna ko saraha..... apna keemti waqt diya aur mere likhe ko sarah kar aapne mujhe aur likhne k liye prerit kiya hai.....
aap sabka bht bht shukriya ji
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«Reply #8 on: July 19, 2010, 01:51:06 PM » |
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kya khoob likhti ho.... Dil  ko chhuti ho..... Jiski ban gayee hu mein badee fan wo tum ho
Jiski rachna ka betaabi se karti intezaar wo tum ho<>*WO HO TUM*<> [/color] Ajeeb si khamoshi bhaagti zindagi
Bekas sa mahol aur ek humdum tum
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«Reply #9 on: July 19, 2010, 03:28:50 PM » |
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Kamaal-dhamaal ka likha hai Kasak ji.....  Chha jaaye jo sab k dilo pe wo ho tum
Dilo ko luut le eysi jadoogarni ho tum<>*WO HO TUM*<> [/color] Ajeeb si khamoshi bhaagti zindagi
Bekas sa mahol aur ek humdum tum
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2010, 05:26:18 PM » |
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Anamika Ji.. Aaapki Har Nazm Behad Khubsoorat hoti hai.. Aur yeh Bhi Un khubsoorat Nazm Me se ek Hai.. Bahut Hi Umda jazzbaat Likhe hain aapne.. Bahut hi khooooob..
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shukriya koyal...Anaam ji and Mann ji..... aap sabko kya kahun....mujhe to ab samjh me nahin aaraha k aap sabko shukriya kaise kahun......itna pyar aur apnapan diya hai aapne ...hum to khushi se pagal ho jayenge..... thnx for appreciating my work.... |
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2010, 09:25:11 PM » |
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Bahut khoob kasak ji...kaafi geherayi mehsus hui apke lafzo mein...
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2010, 10:01:04 AM » |
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Bahut khoob kasak ji...kaafi geherayi mehsus hui apke lafzo mein...
thnx bbl ji...jo aapne ise pasand kiya |
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2010, 04:42:06 PM » |
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