Wo sapne mein aaye thay kal raat ko(Asghar)

by M.ASGHAR MIRPURI on August 24, 2011, 03:14:57 PM

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Wo sapne mein aaye thay kal raat ko
Hum bhula nahein sakte uhs mulaqat ko
Din bhr mehweh e guftgoo rehte thay kabi
Ab taras reh hein unn ki aik baat ko
Mere har simat ghum ka dhuaan tha
Too ne khushgwar banaya meri hayaat ko
Mujeh ik tera he sath kaafi hai
Mein kya karoon ga sari kaaynaat ko
Hum tou mar kar be na bhoolein gaye tumein
Tum kehein bhool na jana asghar ki chaahat ko


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Re: Wo sapne mein aaye thay kal raat ko(Asghar)

«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2011, 08:26:21 PM »

Wah Wah... Kya Baat Hai Bhai... Khubsoorat aur rumaani Ehasaason Bhari Aapki Yeh Rachna Dil Ko chhoo gai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooooob Bhai.. Daad Kubool Karen..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Wo sapne mein aaye thay kal raat ko(Asghar)

«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2011, 03:18:30 AM »

Bhaut khoob likha janab .umda khyal lekin akher ke Line Ka wazan ni bana sahe.Aap akher ke 2 line yun likh sakte hai.....
Asger mer ker bhi na bhulenge tumhin
Na dil se mitana tum hamare khyalat ko

Umeed kerta hun Bura na mane ge .
Kush rahen