““wo tou mera pyar tha””

by nirala on April 15, 2011, 03:37:44 PM
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dost bankar sambhalala tujhe
gamo se tere uubara tujhe
zakhmo ko tere sahlaata tha
dard me tujhe hasaata tha

wo dosti nahi
wo tou mera pyaar tha!!

koi tor gaya tha dil tera
koi chhodd gaya tha tujhe akela
mai ye sah na paya tha
tere gamo ko apnaya tha

tune samjha dost mujhe
banaya apna humdard mujhe

kya tujse kah ye paunga
ya, yun hi chupp rah jaunga

wo dosti nahi
wo tou mera pyaar tha!!

kese tuje batlau mai
kahe to, dil chir dikhlau mai

wo dosti nahi
wo to mera pyaa tha!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2011, 07:17:27 PM »
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Bhaut Khoob
ek bar pyaar se pyaar ka izhar kar ke dekho
Dil main hai jo baat juban pe la ke dekho
Shyaad Jawab main ikrar aa jae
Nahi kahoge to kahi ye pyaar kisi or ka na ho jaye
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2011, 08:51:24 AM »
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dost bankar sambhalala tujhe
gamo se tere uubara tujhe
zakhmo ko tere sahlaata tha
dard me tujhe hasaata tha

wo dosti nahi
wo tou mera pyaar tha!!

koi tor gaya tha dil tera
koi chhodd gaya tha tujhe akela
mai ye sah na paya tha
tere gamo ko apnaya tha

tune samjha dost mujhe
banaya apna humdard mujhe

kya tujse kah ye paunga
ya, yun hi chupp rah jaunga

wo dosti nahi
wo tou mera pyaar tha!!

kese tuje batlau mai
kahe to, dil chir dikhlau mai

wo dosti nahi
wo to mera pyaa tha!!

Behad jazbaati Panktiyaa likhi haiN ... Nirala Ji !

Very Nice Poetry ... dil se daad ... !!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2011, 10:32:33 AM »
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bahut khub niralaji... acha likha hai...
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2011, 03:24:10 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khoob mere dost..
Dil se nikla hua kalam hai yeh..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2011, 04:52:32 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat nirala ji sargam ki tarah apki peshkash ko main gungunati rahi..bahut khoob..
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2011, 09:56:52 PM »
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wah janab bohat khoob
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2011, 09:25:15 PM »
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thanx sanjiv…
aapne bhi kamaal ka likha hai
bht khub
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Bhaut Khoob
ek bar pyaar se pyaar ka izhar kar ke dekho
Dil main hai jo baat juban pe la ke dekho
Shyaad Jawab main ikrar aa jae
Nahi kahoge to kahi ye pyaar kisi or ka na ho jaye
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2011, 09:28:00 PM »
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thanx anshuji
mere is lekhni ke zazbat aap smjh gaye shayd…
thanx dear
Behad jazbaati Panktiyaa likhi haiN ... Nirala Ji !

Very Nice Poetry ... dil se daad ... !!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2011, 09:30:17 PM »
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thanx manjum ji…

bahut khub niralaji... acha likha hai...
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2011, 09:35:10 PM »
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rahim…mere dost
kya kahu aapko
dil se nikli hui bato ko aapse behtar aur kon smjh payega…
sahi pehchana aapne…
dil se hi nikli thi ye bate
khus rahiye
thanx
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khoob mere dost..
Dil se nikla hua kalam hai yeh..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2011, 09:39:41 PM »
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geet- aapne to mujh anaadi ka maan badha dia…
aap jesi shayra se ese cmnt bht hausala deti hai…
aapka bht sukriya aur dher saari duayen
khus rahiye
Bahut khubsurat nirala ji sargam ki tarah apki peshkash ko main gungunati rahi..bahut khoob..
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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2011, 09:42:55 PM »
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sayani ji……
aapka behad sukriya…
aapne mere is dimaagi fitur ko parha aur saraha
thanx
wah janab bohat khoob
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«Reply #13 on: May 02, 2011, 10:24:33 PM »
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boht khoob nirala ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 02, 2011, 10:49:33 PM »
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boht khoob nirala ji
thanx sahil ji
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