****Woh Beege Raat ****

by honeyrose on September 23, 2008, 01:37:08 PM
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Woh beege raat ki mulaqat aaye 
Woh hanseen palon ki shaam aaye

Aankhon mein tere tasveer doond rahe 
Woh hanseen yaadon ko churane aaye

Chalte chalte saath na chorenge tumare
Bhula na sakoge tum aapke dil mein rahene aaye

Iss chahat ke liye rishte humne tohde
Woh hanseen yaadon ko saath nibhane aaye

Beete palon ko dil se nahi mitta paye
Woh hanseen palon ko hum johdne aaye

Teri chahat aab bangaye zindagi mere
Woh hanseen muhabbat ko hifaazat karne aaye

^^**honeyrose**^^
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2008, 01:54:23 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB HONEY DI,
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2008, 01:57:35 PM »
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nice one honey ji...... Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2008, 02:02:22 PM »
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bahut khoob honey ji
kya baat hai


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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2008, 03:17:57 PM »
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EFFORTLESS GOOD TRY, POETRY IS NOT A GAME JUST TO INSERT WORDS AND PLAY.
LEARN BASICS OF IT.

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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2008, 03:31:59 PM »
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acha likha Honey aap

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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2008, 05:34:45 PM »
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Thanks shally,,Tanha,,baadal ji,,hashim,,najma...aap sab ka
bohat bohat shukriya...
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2008, 12:52:26 PM »
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 icon_salut BAHUT KHOOB.
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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2008, 01:00:54 PM »
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KOI DEEWANA KEHTA HAI KOI PAGAL SAMAJHTA HAI
MAGAR DHARTI KI BECHENI KO BAS BADAL SAMAJHTA HAI.
ME TUJHSE DOOR KESA HOON TU MUJHSE DOOR KESI HAI
YE MERA DIL SAMAJHTA HAI YA TERA DIL SAMAJHTA HAI.
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2008, 01:17:25 PM »
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wah bhai wah....kya kamaal bhigi raat thi ab tak nami hai baalon me......honeyji achcha likha hain...
nasamjh ji ne bhi asardaar sher likha
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2008, 03:08:13 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai aapne ..nasamajh larka ji... happy9

Shukriya aapka sanjeev ji... happy9
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2008, 04:48:52 PM »
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Nice Work HoneyRose, and
Good Reply Nasamajh ji...
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«Reply #12 on: September 24, 2008, 05:14:26 PM »
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Thank you Mahiya...
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2008, 04:11:13 AM »
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It's Beautiful HoneyRose..
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2008, 10:17:35 PM »
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Thanks Aryaan... notworthy
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