Woh Hasina - By Songwriter_123

by songwriter_123 on August 10, 2011, 05:28:23 AM
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Khubsurat si haseena
Ne dil mera hai cheena

Wo to chali gayi door
Par bana gayi mujhe kameena

Jab bhi uththa hu subah
To jaane kaise
Meri aankhein
Uski aankhein ban jaati hai

Reh reh kar
Wo uska chehra mujhe dikhati hai
Baat bhi karna chahta hu unse
To jaane kaise uska naam lekar gaayab ho jaati hai

Ab kaise samjhau
Tumhe is dil ka haal dosto
Ye dil to ho gaya hai
Uski yaad mein behaal dosto

Kal agar wo saamne tumhare aati hai
To keh dena ussey
Ki ek diwana tumhara waha bhi hai
Jo ban gaya hai aamir se kangaal dosto Usual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2011, 05:44:42 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob...aamir ji... Usual Smile

par ek baat kehna chahunga aapki ye nazm achhi ghazal me shamil hoti agar ish (kameena) tarah ke sabd na istemaal karte to aur achha hota..

plz agli baar se ye dhyaan rakhiyega,...
hope for the good reply next.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2011, 06:08:11 AM »
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i am also agree with touhid ji.
try ur best.
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