Woh pal ....

by punam on March 18, 2008, 06:00:19 PM
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Bhule nahi hum woh pal jana
woh masti bhari sam woh alam suhana

pehli baar unse nazren milana
nazar milte hi palke jhukana

woh chedkhani woh hasna hasana
sharm se wahan se yun bhag jana

masti me gana aur gungunana
madhoshiyon ka dil me samana

ek ek pal ko aanchal me bandhe
unke liye yun tadapna tadpana..

Bhule nahi hum woh pal jana...
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«Reply #1 on: March 18, 2008, 06:08:27 PM »
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Punam bohat acha likha hai dear nice..Usual Smile
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2008, 06:27:29 PM »
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Thanx Honey di..
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2008, 07:37:46 PM »
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bahoot khoob Punam
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2008, 09:29:40 PM »
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Bahoot achha likha punam
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2008, 02:39:35 AM »
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Bohot khoob punam ji...
pehle pehle pyar ka ehsas, badi sharmili nazm he ye, bohot umda likha he aap ne.  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2008, 03:06:06 AM »
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So sweet...bohot hi pyara likha hai Punam Applause
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2008, 12:39:50 PM »
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Thanx Harsh ji...Pooja di and Talat di..

Sayyid Randeri ji bahot bahot sukriya...
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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2008, 01:03:01 PM »
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you are welcome punam aour aap apnii in muhabbatoN ke liye merii jaanib se bhii shukriyaa qubool kiijiye
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2008, 10:50:26 PM »
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nice words .......
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