Yaaro`kya kahe`hum

by gunehgaar on January 17, 2010, 11:24:42 PM
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Hello` everybody` &` U~ jaaneman` shayer` hu` aur` wo` hi` kam` karne `chala
Dilbar` tumhare` khatir` kuch` likhne` chala
Yaaro`kya kahe`hum
Kya`tha/aur`kya`ho gaye`hum
palko`ki`chao`mein`sapno`ka`jahan`basne`laga
Dabi`dabi`thi`aag`tere`ane`ki`ahaat`se`bharakne`laga
patti`patti`aur`shakhao`mein`jaise`ummedo`ka`bahar`chane`laga
Chand`tarein`ye`jamin`aur`wo`khubsurat asmaan`
tere chehere`ki`ronak`se`feeka`parne`laga
`mere dil`k`kitabo`k`panne`khali`pare`tha
chahat`k`sihai`se`likh`dala`sab`kuch `
lekin`tera`awaaz kya`suna`sab`kuch`adhura`lagne`laga
gehere`tha`mere`wo`jakhm`sare/dard`k`chuban`se`haal`behal`tha
khawalo`mein`sahi`lekin`tere`khwabo`mein`sar`rakhkar`jeene`laga
pathar`ka`ban`gaya`tha/khudgarzi`k`bazar`mein`har`roz`bikta`tha
hosh`ab`aya/tere`pass`ane`se`saach`aur`jhoot`ka`fark`samajhne`laga
jindagi`char`dino`ka`fasana`hai/kabhi`khushi`to`kabhi`gum`hai
andhere`mein`kho`gaya`tha/saathi`k`saath`ne`mujhe`manzil`tak`le`jane`laga
aur`kya`kahe`yaaro
dost`kahu/meheoob`kahu ya`kuch`aur`
tu`mili`to`samajh`ayi`kya`tha`main`aur`ab`kya`ban`gaya`
saath`rahe`hum`tum humesha`yu`hi`
are`yaaro`main`to`kab`se`hi`in`k`mohabbat`mein`jalne`laga

 
` `Ummed` hai` accha` laga` hoga/&` u` people`  TAKE~ CARE~ “

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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2010, 11:29:19 PM »
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Hello` everybody` &` U~ jaaneman` shayer` hu` aur` wo` hi` kam` karne `chala
Dilbar` tumhare` khatir` kuch` likhne` chala
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Yaaro`kya kahe`hum
Kya`tha/aur`kya`ho gaye`hum
palko`ki`chao`mein`sapno`ka`jahan`basne`laga
Dabi`dabi`thi`aag`tere`ane`ki`ahaat`se`bharakne`laga
patti`patti`aur`shakhao`mein`jaise`ummedo`ka`bahar`chane`laga
Chand`tarein`ye`jamin`aur`wo`khubsurat asmaan`
tere chehere`ki`ronak`se`feeka`parne`laga
`mere dil`k`kitabo`k`panne`khali`pare`tha
chahat`k`sihai`se`likh`dala`sab`kuch `
lekin`tera`awaaz kya`suna`sab`kuch`adhura`lagne`laga
gehere`tha`mere`wo`jakhm`sare/dard`k`chuban`se`haal`behal`tha
khawalo`mein`sahi`lekin`tere`khwabo`mein`sar`rakhkar`jeene`laga
pathar`ka`ban`gaya`tha/khudgarzi`k`bazar`mein`har`roz`bikta`tha
hosh`ab`aya/tere`pass`ane`se`saach`aur`jhoot`ka`fark`samajhne`laga
jindagi`char`dino`ka`fasana`hai/kabhi`khushi`to`kabhi`gum`hai
andhere`mein`kho`gaya`tha/saathi`k`saath`ne`mujhe`manzil`tak`le`jane`laga
aur`kya`kahe`yaaro
dost`kahu/meheoob`kahu ya`kuch`aur`
tu`mili`to`samajh`ayi`kya`tha`main`aur`ab`kya`ban`gaya`
saath`rahe`hum`tum humesha`yu`hi`
are`yaaro`main`to`kab`se`hi`in`k`mohabbat`mein`jalne`laga

 
` `Ummed` hai` accha` laga` hoga/&` u` people`  TAKE~ CARE~ “

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«Reply #2 on: January 17, 2010, 11:33:24 PM »
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good one gunehgaarji
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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2010, 07:38:12 AM »
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Wah bahut achi lage mujhe ye kavita.bahut khoob Gunhegaar ji,very touching and romantic creation.excellent. Both Thumbs Up Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2010, 05:37:09 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2010, 09:16:21 AM »
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bahot acche yaar. keep on  
Hello` everybody` &` U~ jaaneman` shayer` hu` aur` wo` hi` kam` karne `chala
Dilbar` tumhare` khatir` kuch` likhne` chala
Yaaro`kya kahe`hum
Kya`tha/aur`kya`ho gaye`hum
palko`ki`chao`mein`sapno`ka`jahan`basne`laga
Dabi`dabi`thi`aag`tere`ane`ki`ahaat`se`bharakne`laga
patti`patti`aur`shakhao`mein`jaise`ummedo`ka`bahar`chane`laga
Chand`tarein`ye`jamin`aur`wo`khubsurat asmaan`
tere chehere`ki`ronak`se`feeka`parne`laga
`mere dil`k`kitabo`k`panne`khali`pare`tha
chahat`k`sihai`se`likh`dala`sab`kuch `
lekin`tera`awaaz kya`suna`sab`kuch`adhura`lagne`laga
gehere`tha`mere`wo`jakhm`sare/dard`k`chuban`se`haal`behal`tha
khawalo`mein`sahi`lekin`tere`khwabo`mein`sar`rakhkar`jeene`laga
pathar`ka`ban`gaya`tha/khudgarzi`k`bazar`mein`har`roz`bikta`tha
hosh`ab`aya/tere`pass`ane`se`saach`aur`jhoot`ka`fark`samajhne`laga
jindagi`char`dino`ka`fasana`hai/kabhi`khushi`to`kabhi`gum`hai
andhere`mein`kho`gaya`tha/saathi`k`saath`ne`mujhe`manzil`tak`le`jane`laga
aur`kya`kahe`yaaro
dost`kahu/meheoob`kahu ya`kuch`aur`
tu`mili`to`samajh`ayi`kya`tha`main`aur`ab`kya`ban`gaya`
saath`rahe`hum`tum humesha`yu`hi`
are`yaaro`main`to`kab`se`hi`in`k`mohabbat`mein`jalne`laga

 
` `Ummed` hai` accha` laga` hoga/&` u` people`  TAKE~ CARE~ “

`                                           GUNEHGAAR

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