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GHAZAL
Ye andaaz tere hain pyaarey bahut
Talabgaar hain hum tumhaarey bahut
Nahin ek tanha hami ghamzada
Yahan hain muhabbat ke maarey bahut
Judaai ke gham se bachha ae Khuda
Giney humney raaton mein taarey bahut
Haqeeqat chhupaaney se kya fayeda
Qareeb aa gaye tum hamaarey bahut
Jo kehna hai aakar zuban se kaho
Baney jaanlewa ishaarey bahut
Ye aghaaze-ulfat haseen hai magar
Nazar aayenge din mein taarey bahut
Kisey haale-dil hum kahen "Ashna"
Sabhi hain mukhalif hamaarey bahut
Riyaz "Ashna"
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2010, 06:16:41 AM » |
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI RIYAZ106 JI.....
HAM TUMKO CHAHATEY HAI BAHUT
MILNA TUMSE CHAHATEY HAI BAHUT
RAHE NAHIN PATEY JUDA TUMSEY
AUR TUM HAMKO TARDFATE HO BAHUT
ISHARON HI ISHARON ME JO KAHETE HO
"YE ANDAAZ TERE HAIN PYAREY BAHUT"
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2010, 06:35:38 AM » |
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Mindblowing RIyaz ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob ! Kya Kahe.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2010, 06:46:10 AM » |
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Riyaz-bhai "Subhaanalla" very nice thought and wordings.....  Ek request aap aapke es kalaam ko agar laghu-guru meter k hisaab se analyse karke bataayen tou hum kuchh achhi tarah se samajh sakte hain...if its not very inconvinient for you.... awaiting... |
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«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2010, 09:08:35 AM » |
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«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2010, 09:40:19 AM » |
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Cara ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya ghazal pasand farmane ke liye aur reply poetry mein dene ke liye.
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2010, 10:17:44 AM » |
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Thank you very much Sophi ji ke aapko meri ghazal achhi lagi. Mindblowing RIyaz ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob ! Kya Kahe.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2010, 10:29:26 AM » |
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«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2010, 10:32:01 AM » |
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khwaish Ji aapka behad shukriya jo aapko meri ye ghazal pasand aai. Aainda bhi hausla afazaai ki ummeed rakhunga jisse kuchh behtar likh sakun.
Zaroor Riyaz Bhai!! Shayad Maine Pehli baar aapki likhi Hui Koi ghazal padhi hai,aage zaroor aapke Likhi Hui poetries Ka Intezaar Hoga.. |
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2010, 10:35:31 AM » |
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khwaish ji aapka phir se shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2010, 10:59:43 AM » |
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Nice
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«Reply #13 on: February 05, 2010, 11:54:08 AM » |
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Koyal ji aapka behad shukriya ghazal pasand farmaane ka. Aapki farmaaish mere dhyan mein hai. Riyaz-bhai "Subhaanalla" very nice thought and wordings..... Ek request aap aapke es kalaam ko agar laghu-guru meter k hisaab se analyse karke bataayen tou hum kuchh achhi tarah se samajh sakte hain...if its not very inconvinient for you.... awaiting... |
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«Reply #14 on: February 05, 2010, 12:58:53 PM » |
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Riyaz ji.....behad umda....kya hi khoob tarannum hai janab..bahoot khoob dad kabool ho
muflisi me hue hum bhi ek ajnabi
kahne ko the jamane me sahare bahoot
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on eTI community..
