Ye vaada mera

by sanya310 on March 12, 2005, 05:25:57 PM
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Aaj tumse ek vaada karti hoon main
Bas sirf tumse mohabbat kiya jaaungi

Ek shikhan na aane dungi tumhare maathe par
Tumhari dunya pyar aur sirf pyar se bharungi

Kabhi akela nahi chhodungi, hamesha saath dungi
Tumhare liye main dunya se bhi ladungi

Kuch kehne ki zaroorat na hogi tumhe
tumhare dil ki baat tumhari aankhon se padhungi

Jahan bhi tum jaaoge tumhare peeche chaliaaungi
Tumhare liye apni saari raahein modungi

Apna muqaddar bana liya hai ab to tumhe humne
Tumhare liye ghar kya main ye jahan bhi chhodungi

Aaungi ek din tumhare ghar ki rounak bankar
Mera naam tumhare naam se hamesha ke liye jodungi

Beintehaa pyar dungi kabhi ise kam na hone dungi
ye mera vaada hai tumse, isse kabhi nahi todungi
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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2005, 06:34:06 PM »
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wow Sanya...Its Beautiful....
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sanya310
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2005, 09:16:34 PM »
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thanku aryaan ! :D
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pandit
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2005, 09:46:27 PM »
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very gud sanyaji................
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sanya310
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2005, 10:27:12 PM »
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thnx panditwa tongue3
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #5 on: March 13, 2005, 03:42:42 AM »
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PYAR MEIN HUM VADA NAHIN KRTE KISI S
K VADA TU TOT BHI JATA HAI MERI JAAN
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«Reply #6 on: March 13, 2005, 02:18:42 PM »
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Quote from: "sanya310"
Aaj tumse ek vaada karti hoon main
Bas sirf tumse mohabbat kiya jaaungi

Ek shikhan na aane dungi tumhare maathe par
Tumhari dunya pyar aur sirf pyar se bharungi

Kabhi akela nahi chhodungi, hamesha saath dungi
Tumhare liye main dunya se bhi ladungi

Kuch kehne ki zaroorat na hogi tumhe
tumhare dil ki baat tumhari aankhon se padhungi

Jahan bhi tum jaaoge tumhare peeche chaliaaungi
Tumhare liye apni saari raahein modungi

Apna muqaddar bana liya hai ab to tumhe humne
Tumhare liye ghar kya main ye jahan bhi chhodungi

Aaungi ek din tumhare ghar ki rounak bankar
Mera naam tumhare naam se hamesha ke liye jodungi

Beintehaa pyar dungi kabhi ise kam na hone dungi
ye mera vaada hai tumse, isse kabhi nahi todungi
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so sweet of you sani! shows so much dedication!
made me cry happy tears:)
ur heart is made of gold, just like my love.
ppl. like you are very rare and it's true sani.
every line is full of promises of love.
if i want to quote some lines i like one by one,
i'd quote the whole poem!
infact i've never read any such dedicated poem in my stay on yoindia...
every word is speaking your devotion!
good luck to you sanya, for ur love life.
she doesn't show her love much, but i am sure
she loves me more than words can express...Usual Smile
wish us both, best of luck for our future!

xxx, amit
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«Reply #7 on: March 13, 2005, 02:26:25 PM »
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if i am asked  to tell the best lines, i'd say, they are:

"Tumhari dunya pyar aur sirf pyar se bharungi"

"Kabhi akela nahi chhodungi, hamesha saath dungi
Tumhare liye main dunya se bhi ladungi"

"Tumhare liye apni saari raahein modungi

Tumhare liye ghar kya main ye jahan bhi chhodungi

Aaungi ek din tumhare ghar ki rounak bankar
Mera naam tumhare naam se hamesha ke liye jodungi

- "i liked these lines, because they express a dream of mine, and my next poem is about wedding too, "A dream called 'Marriage'..."

Beintehaa pyar dungi kabhi ise kam na hone dungi
ye mera vaada hai tumse, isse kabhi nahi todungi"

swear! it's very well written, no kidding:)

and ya,

one more thing... stay strong...

take care, see ya, lol from brother >:d<
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«Reply #8 on: March 13, 2005, 03:02:23 PM »
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wow sanya,its really very very nice.Every word gives a special feeling,aise hi likhti rehna. :hug:
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«Reply #9 on: March 13, 2005, 03:54:25 PM »
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MERI YADOON MEIN JO WOH BAS GYA HAI
MERI SANSOON MEIN AAB WOH RACH GYA HAI
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2005, 06:01:57 PM »
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aww thnx bro and nidhi!!! itni tareef ke liye...
this one really came from the bottom of my heart and has a lot of feeling in it...im glad u could see tht...thnx again...thnx naveed
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«Reply #11 on: March 13, 2005, 09:12:50 PM »
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Aaj tumse ek vaada karti hoon main
Bas sirf tumse mohabbat kiya jaaungi

Ek shikhan na aane dungi tumhare maathe par
Tumhari dunya pyar aur sirf pyar se bharungi

Kabhi akela nahi chhodungi, hamesha saath dungi
Tumhare liye main dunya se bhi ladungi

Kuch kehne ki zaroorat na hogi tumhe
tumhare dil ki baat tumhari aankhon se padhungi

Jahan bhi tum jaaoge tumhare peeche chaliaaungi
Tumhare liye apni saari raahein modungi

Apna muqaddar bana liya hai ab to tumhe humne
Tumhare liye ghar kya main ye jahan bhi chhodungi

Aaungi ek din tumhare ghar ki rounak bankar
Mera naam tumhare naam se hamesha ke liye jodungi

Beintehaa pyar dungi kabhi ise kam na hone dungi
ye mera vaada hai tumse, isse kabhi nahi todungi
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wahhhhh bohot si pyari poem hai sanya! bohot acha likhti ho!!!

 :D
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«Reply #12 on: March 13, 2005, 09:20:35 PM »
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thnx panditwa tongue3


sanya ji ,
aap ki kopi khaas ladai ha9i kya humse,
kuyn hamare naam ka kabaada nikaal rahi hai,
zara pyaar se bhi kabhi liya kizea  :cry: na/
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sanya310
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«Reply #13 on: March 13, 2005, 10:38:40 PM »
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:lol: lol ab humar ko bihari samajhke maaf kardo bhaaya :lol:
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«Reply #14 on: March 13, 2005, 11:02:24 PM »
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lol...bihari.ji.....bahut hi acha likha hai....very well written.
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